MG SS - Rakshak #2 Updated Epilogue, Pg 66 Feb 13 - Page 38

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

On popular demand, this FF will get an update next. I will update it on 15th Feb.

It's my Marriage Anniversary that day, so it's gone be a romantic tease update. Treat to myself.😆


Luv

-Anu❤️

Advance me happy anniversary


But thanks for the warning ab toh dhayan rakhungi k akele me update padu😆


Wonder is it going to be a video call or are they going to meetup in secret🤣


Ya phir kuch aur hi plans hai writer sahiba..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

On popular demand, this FF will get an update next. I will update it on 15th Feb.

It's my Marriage Anniversary that day, so it's gone be a romantic tease update. Treat to myself.😆


Luv

-Anu❤️


Hi there! thanks for the note!

wow..... that's great......will wish you tomorrow....

looking forward to the update.....

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

On popular demand, this FF will get an update next. I will update it on 15th Feb.

It's my Marriage Anniversary that day, so it's gone be a romantic tease update. Treat to myself.😆


Luv

-Anu❤️

hiii thaks for considering our requrst and happy anniversary in advance...cant wait for tommorow
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

On popular demand, this FF will get an update next. I will update it on 15th Feb.

It's my Marriage Anniversary that day, so it's gone be a romantic tease update. Treat to myself.😆


Luv

-Anu❤️

Advance happy wishes your wedding anniversary ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Advance anniversary wishes dear and my anniversary is on 16th feb 🙂🙂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

On popular demand, this FF will get an update next. I will update it on 15th Feb.

It's my Marriage Anniversary that day, so it's gone be a romantic tease update. Treat to myself.😆


Luv

-Anu❤️


Thank you , that's great


I'll be waiting

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

On popular demand, this FF will get an update next. I will update it on 15th Feb.

It's my Marriage Anniversary that day, so it's gone be a romantic tease update. Treat to myself.😆


Luv

-Anu❤️




thank a lot

happy anniversary in advance

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 20

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❤️Happy Valentines Day to All❤️

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“Dad, I need to pick this, he rarely does video call. Can’t miss this” and she ran to her room.

All this craziness of Geet for Maan was taking the patience out of Mohinder. He knew he have to plan quick and it has to be a fool proof and solid plan. Geet has gone little too ahead in her childish game of this silly marriage, he thought.

==**************************************==

Shine on her face simply brightened as she saw him

“So my dear hubby, it’s your turn this time” “My turn, why not. I am all prepared” and then he turned the camera to show Maa there

“Pranam Maa” Geet felt shy, her cheeks turned red

“So Geet, should I start” he teased, she showed him her big eyes. “Cheater” she said in low voice

She ignored him in her anger “How are you Maa?” “Good. Wanted to see you”

“I was missing you too. This your son, he sent me far from you”

“Maa, Geet wanted me to show something. Geet what were you expecting”

“Maan, shut up” “Ok, so you don’t want me to… fine then we cancel”

“Maan” she looked at Savitri “Maa… he troubles me a lot”

“Maan bas ker… How is your Dad beta” she asked? “Good” Geet made face

“Beta, he is your father, you are only child. Be Good” she said in slow speed. But looked much improved

Geet turned to Maan “Maa is improving” “Yeah.. treatment seems in right direction”

They changed the topic to not discuss her treatment in front of Savitri Devi.

“Ok you know why we have this call today... we are going to have cooking class”

“Cooking class?” “Yup… I will make Kadi Pakora and you will learn”

“Hmmm why not… he will teach my Bahu… you know what he made yesterday” she laughed

“Maa” he complained “Show her your burned paratha” she laughed “He will not let me do anything and see what he makes me eat” said Savitri Devi

Geet laughed along with Savitri on his burned Paratha.

“Ok, if you guys are done ganging against me can we start?”

Savitri directed and Maan started making the barter. He then winked at Geet – “Just keep watching, there is a surprise” he said in low voice. Geet smiled, something definitely cooking in his brain.

He then placed the pan on the stove, poured oil in it. As the pan got heated “So Geet - now as the pan is heating, I am getting hotter so” and he started unbuttoning his shirt very slowly, looking sheepishly at her, smiling. He poured the barter in the pan to make small pakora and then removed his shirt and threw on the chair and looked directly into her eyes. Geet blushed and smiled at his act. So her man was good at keeping promise. She looked up to see his well-toned tanned body. Uff..., it has been so many days and she wanted to taste him badly.

After making second round of Pakora, he pulled up his vest too, slowly and very slowly, removed it from his body. He removed it so slowly that she could enjoy every piece of him with leisure. He threw it as well.

Geet was now feeling wet between her thighs. So many days far from him, missing him every night on bed and this strip tease of him. She wanted to pull him out of phone.

“Maan – it’s not that hot, wear your vest. Oil can spill and come on your skin” scolded Savitri, ignorant of his son’s besharam romance act for his wifey.

This alerted Geet – “Maan get your vest on now” “Chill both of you. Pakora is done and I have switched off the Gas. Maa I will make kadhi now, you go get rest.”

He came back after making Savitri on bed for some rest. He winked at Geet. She was badly smiling

“So how was it?” “Hmm.. ok ok” “Bas Ok? You want more?”

“I don’t mind” she signaled him to check on Maa. “Fine. She is resting in other room” They were young couple, newly married and staying far for first time after marriage, they loved entertaining each other and loved to openly enjoy each other.

Maan was in full mood to entertain his wifey dear today “Ok, first lets start with preparing Kadhi” He placed all spices and onion and then curd, made it cook and the poured water “Now this Kadhi will be liquidy, just like something liquidy on other side of phone” he winked “Maan, I am gonna kill you” “Caught you”

“For tasty gravy, you need to cook it well” and he placed his hand on his jeans button, Lingered his hand there. “Maan” Geet’s voice barely came out. He raised his eyebrows “I miss you so much” she almost cried out of love. He opened the button of jeans and gravy boiled. Geet could clearly view how hard he was under his under wear

“Now the gravy is very yummy… right Geet” he said sheepishly placing his hand on the rim of his underwear, slightly pulling it out from his skin. Geet blushed hard, clearly knowing his tease on her condition “Now the hard Pakora balls mixed in yummy gravy.. will be treat to relish” Geet was blushing hard. He brought his cheeks in front of camera

“You are the best” she said giving him the kiss “And your dish will be ready as you taught. You can come anytime and have it”

“Thank You” he bowed down. They kept looking at each other for long, with love and desire. Both were missing each other to core.

“Ok Geet. Need to disconnect. It will be time for Maa’s lunch”

“Ok.. but Maan call in evening, I have something important to tell you”

“About Gabbar?” she smiled and nodded for Yes.

Maan had somehow been able to get a small contract. He knew he can make it; one small contract will do. He will take small steps and then get big leap. He also joined as Librarian in private school. He also interviewed for extra tuitions in same school hours. It definitely went great, his fundamentals and explaining style were so good that principle was very impressed. But could not appoint him full time due to his qualification of just12th pass. He himself did not want any time consuming job. During his library hours, he would take tuitions of kids needing it. Recommended by school and in school, many parents would enroll. Principle knew this program is going to rock. After school hours he would focus on his contract that he has got. He would return home at 8pm and then spend time with Savitri. Cook was on leave for 3-4 days so Maan was doing his cooking for the two, these days. At night he would sit, give couple of hours to his B-Com course. That was easy for him so he would catch up easily on that.

So Maan, got busy in his study and missed calling Geet. He received her call at 10 pm

“Sorry missed to call you.” “Shut up. I know how tough it is for you, ten things at one go.. on top, I keep eating up your brain”

“Geet what’s the matter?” “Dad you know…. It’s not giving positive vibes to me.”

“Geet, stop worrying. You don’t trust me?” “I do but today dad was showing me design of office he is planning for me.”

“Let him design. Just keep your calm and finish your exam.”

“Maan I want to work with you” “And I need to you to work with me. Get that fixed in your brain and chill.”


Precap: Maan come to Mumbai after Geet's Exam

They are far and could not do much. But just tried some tease. Hope it came out OK. Please do like and comment. I will take it as gift for myself.


Luv,

-Anu🤗


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Posted: 3 years ago

More than the update ur note caught my attention

They are far so couldn't do much! Really🤣


Babe i don't know whether you ment to be sarcastic or were serious😆


Anyways Enjoy your day

Have a Blast!! And Happy anniversary again🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Happy Valentine Day and happy anniversary to you🥳🥳🥳 enjoy your day🥳🥳

For the update - thank you for the gift and i enjoyed reading it☺️

i love the progression of Maan’s character ! How confident and smart and naughty he has become from a depressed under confident sad person! Geet has really brought out the best in him and he is also doing the same for Geet ❤️


Cant wait to see them getting together after so long 🤪


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