Dude, that was really good, sorry i was out on birthday staycation, could not come daily here. But hats off man, your writing is quite engaging. Loved it, cant wait for the next part. Noora and sultan i can totally imagine the scenes in my head, just as if happening in front of me like i am watching them, so pretty much i am able to say that your writing creates imagination so well for the reader, as if its really happening man. Next chaper i am expecting more noora and sultan, nageen ka character khatam karo , dafa karo š¤£.
Once again, completely loved it.ā¤ļø I hope you are doing good ashley. Sorry for not being active, i think humari timing hi galat hai, jab aati hun tab kuch hota nai and in my absence quite active the tum log.š
Great efforts bro š
Damn main ispe reply hi karna bhool gayi thi š¤£
I am so glad that you enjoyed it, and I love how honest you both are, it helps me improve ā¤ļø
@bold: Iss honi ko kaun taal sakta hai š¤£
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