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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kristmas

Mami and Shiva 💔❤️ I can’t, their relationship is so complex but I love that she realised her wrong this time. She really loves Raavi a lot ❤️

Shiva Raavi scenes were just ❤️❤️🥺🥺

Glad Raavi is back and forgave him poor guy was going through so much regret 😭❤️

this was such a good update ❤️

a mother always loves her child😘😘

show me dimag kam hai prafulla ke pass toh kya hua..meri wali achi hai😁😁

both were sorry because somwhere both were wrong...and both are accepting their faults💖💖💖💖

glad you liked it😘😘😘

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: nolee3097

Raavi so forgiving and innocent ❤️
The way she handled Shiva was beautiful😭

glad you liked it💖💖
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Posted: 3 years ago

Shiva immediately rushes to the terrace. There he finds raavi sitting on the ground crying.

Kailash Kher, Paresh Kamath, Naresh Kamath - Saiyyan - YouTube

[a/n: listen to this song while reading…..alag hi feel aayegi……and do tell how was this..because I'm a bit unsure about this one]

Heere moti main na chaahoo
Main toh chaahoo samgam tera
Main toh teri saiyyan
Tu hai mera

Shiva goes to her wipes her tears and nods his head in no.

saiyyan, saiyyan

Raavi hugs him and cries in his embrace.

Tu jo chhoo le pyaar se
Aaraam se mar jaaoo

Shiva slowly pats her back calming her down. He continues to do this till raavi gets okay.

Aaja chanda bahoo mein
Tujh mein hi gum ho jaaoo
Main tere naam mein kho jaaoo

He slowly breaks the hug and caresses her hair setting them.

Saiyyan, saiyyan

Raavi looks him lovingly and thankfully. Shiva kisses her forehead.

(music)

Shiva makes her stand and takes her to the room. Raavi goes inside. Her eyes lands on the heart in which she wrote I love. Seeing it joint with tape raavi gives a questioning lok to shiva. he makes face of ‘you know meright’. Raavi smiles. Shiva takes his pillow and starts to go outside.

Mere din khushi se jhoome gaaye raate
Pal pal mujhe dubaaye jaate jaate

Raavi holds his hand and looks him with pleading eyes. A tear escapes her eyes.

Tujhe jeet jeet haaroo yeh praan praan varoo
Hay aise main nihaaroo teri aartee utaaroo
Tere naam se jude hai saare naate

Shiva immediately wipes them away and nods his head in no. He keeps his pillow back on bed and sits down. Both exchanges smile.

saiyyan, saiyyan

Raavi lies on bed adjusting her head on his lap.

Banke maala prem ki
Tere tan pe jhar jhar jaaoo

Shiva chuckles at her gesture. He kisses her forehead and lovingly caresses her hairs.

Baithoo naiya preet ki
Sansaar se thar jaaoo
Tere pyaar se tar jaaoo

Raavi feels satisfied, contented. She holds his hand and kisses his palm.

Saiyyan, saiyyan

Both drifts to a peaceful sleep after a long time…..

1 month later……

Raavi slowly enters her room with a cake in her hand followed by whole family except shiva who was peacefully on the bed. All gathers around bed. Dev looks at his phone and slowly whispers ‘bas do min’. allget ready. As clock strikes 12AM everyone shouts ‘HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHIVA…’. shiva wakes up with jerks with a heavily pounding heart.

Everyone: happy birthday shiva

Ra: (smiling widely) happy birthday bhoothnath

Sh: (huffs) ye kya tha?.....birthday ke din heart attack deke maarne ka iraada tha kya?...(everyone glares him)…acha sorry baba….

Shiva gets off bed and touches suman feet taking blessing. Then, he goes to gaura and taking their blessing. Then, dev-rishita and krish hug him wishing. At last, he goes to raavi and exchanges smile with her. Raavi forwards him the cake. Shiva cuts the cake and feed it to everyone. As he feeds raavi, both get lost in each other.Whole family chuckles breaking their eye-contact. After a small teasing session, everyone leaves to their room. Shiva was enjoying the cake when raavi suddenly kisses him and gives a wide smile. After somtime, both settle themselves on bed. Raavi hugs him and drifts to sleep. Shiva kisses her hair.He is happy to she her happy but he also knows that something is still hurting her hurting her.

It has been 1 month since raavi came back home and broke all ties with her maasi. In this one month, whole pandya family got their happiness back. Suman stopped accusing rishita for the faults her aunt did and love all her three daughter-in-laws as her own child. Dhara and gautum decided to adopt a child and after many pleadings suman also agreed. Gaura adopted a 18 months baby girl and named her tara. Dev and rishita cleared all there misunderstanding and living their life peacefully.Rishita was back to her job and this time with the support of complete family. Shivi developed their relation with love and trust. Both were happy with this phase of their life. the last one month had been perfect for them. But raavi still had the pain of betrayal from her mother and sister. This side, prafulla led a sad life. she yarning to see her daughter, talk to her but raavi broke all ties with her a month ago. Since then, she didn’t even looked at them. At this point of time, prafulla was all alone. Though anita was there with her but prafulla neither talk nor cared about what she was doing. The only thing prafulla did was to provide anita with 3 meals a day and money for living. Jagat was also very disappointed with anita. He used to do only kaam ki baat with her. Even the neighbours were ignoring anita after knowing her deeds. She was left abdomaned. Anita knew that this was her punishment and she had to accept it.

Next morning

Sh: (strenly) nhi krish…no party….(to rishita) Bhabhi samjhao na isse…

Ri: kya samjhau…sahi toh bol raha hai voh…..shiva tu duniya pehla insaan hoga jisse birthday party nhi karni…..

Kr: hn(annoyed)

Sh: aree…maine bol na koi party nhi….

Ra: (coming to hall with breakfast) tere bolne se kya hota hai?...(firmly) party hogi matalb hogi....final….no more argument…..

Sh: aree…par-

Dh: (cutting him) par var kuch nhi…bol diya na...party hogi…matlab hogi….bas….

ra: hn(firmly)

Sh: (sighs in defeat) thik hai…

Ra: (happily) yesss….

All have their breakfast. Suddenly, something strikes shiva’s mind.

Sh: mere do guest bhi rahenge….thik hai na?

Kr: bhai tere birthday....jisse chahe usse bula….

Sh: (completing his breakfast) hn…acha dukan jaane se pehle maa milke aata hu…..

Shiva goes to suman’s room and other gets engaged in their work.

Whole day went in preparations for evening. Raavi was hell excited about shiva’s b’day party. She took care of all things. She wanted the party to be prefect.

Shiva, dev and gombi returns back home in evening. All get ready for the party.

Shiva decides to wear the shirt raavi gave him. shiva was setting his hair when raavi comes to the room. She gets mesmerised seeing him.

Sh: kaisa lag rha hu?....

Ra: (checking him) bilkul hero….kitni achi lag rhi hai tere upar ye shirt…. perfect….

Sh: (pulling her closer) ab meri chipkali ne pasand ki hai….aise kaise perfect nhi lagegi….

Ra: ek aur cheez layi hai teri chipkali….

Sh: acha de…

Ra: abhi thodi….bas ture turn gift dene ki soch…..

Saying this raavi leaves.

Sh: (smiles) return gift ready hai…..

All guests arrive at the party.

Dh: shiva tere guest nhi aaye….call karke puch…

Sh: ji…..

Shiva goes to a side and calls.

Sh: (over the call)hn…aajaiye aap dono….

After this, shiva goes to dhara and tells that his guest will arrive shortly. He goes to his brother and chit-chats.

Raavi was talking with rishita when her eyes land on the door where two people were standing. Raavi gets shocked aeeing them. They were none other than her maasi and masa pa. shiva notices her expressions. At first raavi was happy, but as soon as she recalls the things happened one month ago. She walks up to them angrily. She hugs her masa pa but refuses to even look at her maasi.

Ra: (calmly) aap log yahan kyun aaye ho?....jaanti hu masa pa aap bahut pyaar karte ho mujhse…lekin maine uss ghar se saare rishte to chuki hu….

Pr: (emotionally) raavi beta main-

Ra: (angrily) main kya?....shiva ka b’day kharab karne aaye ho?.....aapko kisine invite nhi kiya hai yahan

maine kiya hai” says shiva from behind. Raavi gets shocked at his words. Shiva goes to them.

Sh: maine bulaya hai mama-mami ko…

Ra: (shocked) shiva tune kyun….

Sh: (sarcastic) ladne keliye…..aree chipkali b’day party ke liye hi toh bulaya hoga……

Ra: (strenly) nhi shiva ye party me nhi reh sakti….

Sh: (sighs) dekh raavi….baat gol gol nhi ghumaunga….ek mahina ho gya hai….bhul ja jo hua…..maaf kade maami ko….

Ra: shiva tu bhul gya kya inhone kya kiya tha?.....main inhe kabhi maaf nhi kar sakti…(prafulla bows herhead down)…..

Sh: (calmly) nhi bhula…lekin raavi agr maa mami ko maaf kar sakti hai toh kyun nhi…..tera dukh maa se bada hai kya…bol….

Raavi looks at suman who gives her a positive look and slightly smiles.

Sh: (holds raavi’s shoulder) raavi maine dekha isse har pal khud ko koste hue….ek mahine se saza kaat rahi hai….kya vo kam hai….tujhe pta hai roj jab tu lunch leke aati hai dukaan pe…ye durr se khade hoke tujhe dekhti rehti hai….roj maa ko ya dhara Bhabhi ko call karke tere baare me puchti rehti hai…..jis maami ne kabhi mujhse seedhe muh baat nhi ki usne mere saamane haath jode the jab tu mil nhi rahi thi….maanta hu galti hui hai isse par tere liye iske pyaar me koi kami nhi hai……

Raavi looks at shiva astonished and then looks at prafulla who was looking her with pleading eyes filled with tears.

Jagat(ja): hn beta…pichle ek mahine me ek din aisa nhi gya jis din isne tujhe yaad kiya ho iske aasun naaaye ho…..zindagi me kabhi itna pachtava nhi kiya isne jitna ek mahine me karliya…..

Pr: (joining her hand) maaf karde mujhe raavi...ek mauka de de….main apni saari galti sudhara dungi….

Raavi couldn’t hold anymore. She hugs prafulla and cries. Prafulla too cries.

Ra: (crying) please aise mat kiya karo maasi….sirf jaanti hu ki maine aapko kitna miss kiya hai….. I’m sorry maasi….main aapse bahut bure tareeke se baat ki…..par main bahut gussa thi…

Pr: tera gussa bilkul jayaz tha raavi beta……mujhe maaf karde…maine apne dhanmand tujhe bahut dukh diya…maafkarde mujhe….

Ra: (breaking the hug) agli baar toh aise hurt nhi karoge na?…..

Pr: (wiping raavi’s tear)nhi….kabhi nhi…..ab toh vajha bhi khatam ho gyi hai…….kyun daamad ji…

Sh: (chuckles) bilkul…….

Raavi looks at both of them thankfully. Everyone gets teary seeing this emotional reunion.

Kr: agr aap sabka emotional reunion ho gya ho toh caje cut kare?

Everyone gathers and shiva cuts the cake. First he feeds raavi, then suman, then other. As shiva feedscakes to prafulla, raavi adores them. She thanks god for making everything okay b/w the two family. Raavi gives shiva the gift. shiva opens it and finds a beautiful wrist watch. shiva immediately wears it and tanks raavi.

Now it was time for dance. Everyone dance on 👇this song.

Aankhein Khuli Song | Mohabbatein | Shah Rukh Khan, Aishwarya Rai | Lata Mangeshkar, Udit Narayan - YouTube

[a/n: shivi, dev-rishita and gaura ko imagine karlo iss song pe dancekarte hue…baaki members ko adjust kar lena…..I widh jo dance sequence maine imagine kiya vo me bata paati😅]

Everyone dance happily without noticing the person satnding on the door. This is none other than anita. She looks at two families dancing happily. She regrets her deeds. ‘gautam pe dorre dalne kevajha maine apne pariwaar ko samhala hota toh sayad aaj..’ she thinks. She leaves the place knowing that now she can never be the part of this.

After that day everything went smoothly b/w the two families.

Shivi’s life was filled only joy…….



so finally I am ending this ff...hope you guys liked it.....comment and review....mention your favourite scene or part.....

thanks foryour love guys....

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Posted: 3 years ago

THIS STORY IS COMPLETED....INSIST YOU YOU READ....

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THIS STORY IS COMPLETED....INSIST YOU YOU READ....

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THIS STORY IS COMPLETED....INSIST YOU YOU READ.......

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful virangana😘🥰😍

Loved this story will surely come again and read this❣️❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Virangna🤗

This was such a fantastic story♥️

Iam glad that Maami and Anita were punished...and Maami redeemed herself👍🏼

And The justice....Our Angel Raavi is at last given her khushiyaaan woth her family and love😍🧿

This will always be a happy read for me..and i will always come back to this story❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the ending 💞

Accha laga ki raavi ne instantly maaf nahi kia maami ko balki apna time liya and for the first time i felt maami's love to be genuine 💗

And the punishment anita got👏👏💯

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Posted: 3 years ago

Virangna this was such a good readsmiley31

I am glad Anita got her punishment nothing can be more painful then being left alone serves her right.

Maami had her share of punishment by staying away from Raavi.

Saiyan sequence was so subtlesmiley42

I loved this happy ending where our Raavi finally got her happiness ❤️

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