CHAL GHAR CHALEIN (part 7 pg 17) completed - Page 9

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

A very well written story ... 👏👏👏 nishnat n rinka are such an amazing character ... Totally Loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️

PART-VI

It ha been one month since ronak and nishat frequently visited pandya niwas. They bith filled the sir of pandya niwas with bliss and joy and the Gaura were the happiest as the kids give contentment to there hearts. They both used to have proper conversation on the loss they had but now they have accepted the fact and these kids even helped them to heal faster.

Here ShiVi were flourishing as a couple both used to talk to each other, tease each other and love each other. Raavi's both gems nishant and ronak were just a shining star to the family but ehen they used to go back everyone would have frown on there faces.

One such day nishant and ronak were doing there homework with Dhara and Shiva comes and says,

"Bhabhi jaane ka time ho gya hai........... Toh nishant ronak bag pack kar lo...... "

Nishant ronak oacked there bags a sad smile appear on dhara's face but it was unnoticed by everyone except Raavi. Raavi saw tge whole scenario and went near them and nishant and ronak hugged her bid a good bye.

Raavi sits with dhara holds her hand and says,

"Dhara dii...... Kya hua.... "

A lone tear escaped from dhara's eyes and she says,

"Vo bache chale gaye....... "

"Unhe toh jaan hi tha na dii....... "

Dhara nods her head and tries to leave. Raavi stops her and says,

"Dii apke dil mein koii bhi baat hai app mujhse kar sakte ho...... "

Dhara sits and says,

"Raavi tu toh meri apni bachi hai............ Jitna laagav mujhe tujhse inn teeno bandaro se hain na..... Pata nahi kaise utna hi laagav inn bacho se bhi ho gaya hain....... Maine apne bache ko khoya hai Raavi par inko dekhti hu na toh maan mein ikk khushi ki leher uth jaati hain....... Inko jata hua dekhti hoon na toh man karta hain apne paas chupa kar rakh lu.......... "

Dhara says this with twinkle in her eyes and dreamily and Raavi speaks,

"Toh rakh lo na dii....... "

Dhara give her a questioning look and Raavi continues,

"Jo cheez apko khushi de.....apko apne gham se dur kare unhe hamesha ke liye apne paas rakh lena chahiye.......... Maine ronak aur nishu ko dekha hai dii yeh dono haste muskurate rehte hain par na inke maan mein hamesha ikk khalipaan hai jo mere dono bache kisi ko nahi dikhate bas jisko udaas dekhte hai na unko khush karne mein lagg jaaate hain......Ronak toh bhut bhola hai nishant bhi dil ka saaf hain baas thoda gusse wala hain dono ikk duste ko sambhalte aaye hai.......

Par inko bhi toh koii chahiye na sambhalne vala...... App inhe chupa kar rakhna chahte ho na......

Toh chupa lo inhe par hamesha ke liye....... "

Saying this Raavi leaves and dhara looks at her retreating figure.than Dhara wakes up still in her thoudmghts and move to her room upstairs.This scene is witnessed by suman.

Suman goes to the kitchen and saw Raavi doing work and humming some song. Suman says,

"Raavi beta idhar aa.... "

"Ji kaki....... "

"Baith idhar....... "

Raavi sits near her and suman says,

"Maine suna jo tune dhara ko kaha........ "

Raavi looks at her and says perplexed,

"Kaki maine kuch galat kaha kya.... I am sorry main dhara dii ko bhi bol dungi ki meri batein ko jyada naa soche..... Main toh kuch bhi bolti rehti hoon...."

Suman chuckles and says,

"Aree saans toh le...... Sahi kehta mera beta........tu sach mein mere shuva ki dobi hain........."

Raavi also smiles and suman olaces a hand on her head and caresses her hair alone tear escaped Raavi's eyes as she has also craved for a motherly touch and suman wipes her tear and says,

"Sabko khush karne ki koshish karti hain.. . .. . .. . Par khud ke andar jo khalipan hain.. . .. . Uske bare mein kisi ko bhi nahi batati.. . .. . Koii bhi khush na ho iss ghar mein tu sabse pehli hoti hain jo khud pareshan ho jati hain aur uss insan ko khush karne mein lggi rehti hain.. . .. .

Par teri khushi.. . .. . Tere saath shiva ne kitna kuch kiya aur usne ikk kadam uthaya teri taraf aur tu maan gayi..........itna massoom kon hota hai.........maine itna bura kiya tujhe kya kuch nahi kaha tune kabhi bhi mudkar mujhe nahi sunaya.. . .. . .. Itna saaf dil kiska hota hai.. . .. . . Khalipaan toh tere andar hain.. . .. . Par humne kabhi dekha hi nahi tujhe hamesha dard dete gaye aur tu hume maaf karti rahi....... Aur teri issi baat ka fayda uthaya hum logon ne......... Hume maaf karde beta..... Mujhe maaf karde...... "

Saying this started crying and Raavi who herself was crying hugged her. Bith remained like this for sometime and seperate and Raavi says,

"Apko maafi mangne ki jaroorat nahi hain..... Maa....... "

After saying this Raavi gives a toothy smile to suman and leaves from there and suman also smiles at tge word maa as Raavi has never addressed her like this may be she was at fault eho never gave her a motherly feeling so that she can say her maa. And now she said xause of just a little assurance and a little gesture she said her Maa..... How can someone be so pure. Suman than moves from there to her room having a small smile on her face as a new contentment settle in her heart.

AT NIGHT,

Everyone returned from the store and had there food and retired to there room and Dhara says to gaumbi,

"Gaumbi tumse ikk baat karni hai.. . ."

"Haa bol.. . .. . "

"Gaumbi... . .. Yeh jo nishant aur ronak hai.. . .. . . Tumhe kaise ladte hain...... "

"Kaise lagte hain ka kya matlab.... Bhut hi pyaare bache hain...... Kisi ko bhi unse laagav ho jaye..... "

"Gaumbi main soch rahi thi kii mujhe unn bacho se na kuch alag sa connection ho gaya hain............ Mujhe unka jaana acha nahi lagta.........kio na hum unko apni family ka hissa bana le..........."

Gaumbi looks at dhara and says,

"Kya kehna chahti hai dhara...... "

"Main unn bacho ko ikk parivaar dena chahti hoon aur usse bhi jyada apne liye unn dono ko apne bache banana chahti hoon....... Main unhe adopt karne ka soch rahi thi........ "

Gaumbi looks at dhara and hugs her ,

"Tu sach mein karna chahti hain and dhara........ Mujhe bhi vo bache bhut pasand hain........ Par main tujhse iss liye baat nahi kar raha tha kio kii mujhe laga kahin tujhe bura na lage.......... "

Dhara also hugs him and both thought to talk about this to Raavi. And both were sure she must be in the kitchen and went there to talk to her.

Raavi was in the kitchen cleaning the platform when Shiva came and sat on the platform,

"Ae chipkali kitna kaam karegi tu..........."

Raavi says,

"Bas panch minute ho gya..... "

Shiva pulls her between his legs and rests his hand on her waist and says,

"Rest kiya kar thoda...... Aur mujh par bhi dhyaan diya kar...... "

Raavi looks at him and nuzzles her nose with his and leck tip of his of his nose and says,

"Shiva tu na ikk dum bacho jaise lata hain jab ause baat karta hain"

Shiva looks at her and says,

"Acha bachu....... "

And he starts rubbing his beard on Raavi's face and Raavi felt tiklish and she giggles.Dhara and gaumbi came and started coughing Shiva and Raavi seperate and Dhara teases them,

"Vaise gaymbi inka romance bhi ikk dum alag hain........ Aise beard chubha kar kon romance karta hain........ "

Shiva and Raavi blushed and Shiva says,

"Kya bhabhi...... Acha apko koii kaam tha kya....... "

And dhara says,

"Kaam toh tha.......... Raavi tujhse ikk baat karni hai...... "

Dhara and gaumbi told shiva and Raavi about the adoption and ShiVi were more than happy and dhara says,

"Raavi tu unn dono se baat karegi na........ "

Raavi's smile changes into a serious look and she says,

"Dii neri baat ka bura mat manna..... Par agar main kahungi toh vo dono mujhe kabhi mana nahi karenge........... Par adopt apko karna hain toh main chahti hoon ki vo dono apni marji se app logon ko chune........... Toh app dono ko hi baat karni ho gi....... "

Gaumbi looks at Raavi and says,

"Raavi sahi keh rahi hai....... Hume hi unse baat karni hogi..... Kio kii yeh hamari aur unki jindagi ka sabse ahem faisla hain...... "

Dhara looks at Raavi and hugs her and mumbles,

"Mujhe idea dene ke liye thank you..... "

Raaci pats her back and gaumbi says,

"Hum kal hi jayenge unke paas...... "

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Hey guys this was all for this part, hope you all like this........

Do drop your comments and share your views.

Yours.

ODETTE_DELUSION

Dil le lo....Dil le lo🤗

Such a beautiful chapter♥️

Dhara deserves her happiness tooo🥰

Shiva Raavi

Loved it❤️

My heart melted reading this. ❤️❤️❤️ This was so beautiful and heartwarming.🤗

Originally posted by: Paru95

Dil le lo....Dil le lo🤗

Such a beautiful chapter♥️

Dhara deserves her happiness tooo🥰

Shiva Raavi

Loved it❤️

Catched your heart 💕💕

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

My heart melted reading this. ❤️❤️❤️ This was so beautiful and heartwarming.🤗

Ps: actually i wanted to tell you from very first day i read you name.....

I have pooh a teddy........

He is my favorite was gifted to me by my parents on my first b-day😇😇

Just random thought

Loved how suman understood raavi and apologize to her 💖

Gaura taking sensible option of adoption has all my heart and really loved dhara and raavi convo 💗

Excited for next chapter

How lovely ❤️
Bonds between Raavi-Dhara, Raavi-Suman, beautiful!

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Loved how suman understood raavi and apologize to her 💖

Gaura taking sensible option of adoption has all my heart and really loved dhara and raavi convo 💗

Excited for next chapter

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

thank you so much😘🥰😍

Ps: actually i wanted to tell you from very first day i read you name.....

I have pooh a teddy........

He is my favorite was gifted to me by my parents on my first b-day😇😇

Just random thought

😆 I also had a Winnie the pooh plush😳 I got it when I was young but then it got lost when we moved our house.😒 It was a good one too. The quality was nice and it smelled good and it had pants too 😆