Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 35

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Posted: 3 years ago

AAAAAAH will you tag me too for the next chapters?


this was SO GOOD, I cannot wait for this discussion. I feel like he should get his head straight on enough for that convo for Neel's sake, but not his or malinis bc lol both of them are booty

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awwww, Aru gives good daddy vibes (both types)

Dayummmm, Imlie handling the men like a bawss.

Is Aditya gonna start spewing his crap again 😷

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: chotoranii

AAAAAAH will you tag me too for the next chapters?


this was SO GOOD, I cannot wait for this discussion. I feel like he should get his head straight on enough for that convo for Neel's sake, but not his or malinis bc lol both of them are booty


Sorry! I forgot. Next time, pakka. Next update, Thursday. 😃

Edited by mltr16 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for the tag!


First the lovely bond Aryan has formed with Neel just melts my heart 😍!


The Rathore's are love all around! The way they taking care of Neel and also Aditya (with the clothes and the driver)!


Aryan is always proud of his wife! Loved how she said she learned from Mr. Calculator!


When AKT went home the first thing that made me gasp was he was going for the alcohol! But how lovely you have put the distraction of Neel's picture to stop him from taking the bottle!


Now the confrontation between ASR and AKT! Looking forward to how they talk and hopefully resolve the matter!


Amazing update 😊!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for tagging M ! Will come back in the evening to give my feedback/ shower my love ❤️ But just in the heat of the moment after reading it, I really can't help but applaud your brilliant insight on a character especially a character like Aditya, the previous chapter was also a beautiful delve in the psyche of a complex character that is Aditya and I thoroughly enjoyed them both. There's something so mournful yet tragic about the regrets we leave behind and once we sit down to contemplate them, we are filled with the worst emotion in humankind that is helplessnes and you just portrayed that beautifully. Aditya has emotionally abused Imlie many a times but he is an irrefutable victim as well. I never watched the show before AryLie but going by all the posts, clips and wiki, I can't help but feel a little bad for him. Characters like him who from a hero transit into a villain of someone's life are hard to find and it is harder to take an accurate reading of them without any biases. You did all that and more. I am just in awe of your writing skills honestly !

Take love for this whole FF (and the OS's) which is a work of art and I am treating this as my parallel AryLie universe and extra love for the previous two chapters which I found really intriguing. ❤️

The next comment might as well be a whole book on AryLie because I missed out commenting on your OS's and this FF in regards to them as well so be prepared and sorry for the super long comment 😅

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Posted: 3 years ago

I love you for updating! 😭


I can’t wait to see how you play this out. I really want to know what Aditya is going to say. Also I just love Aryan acting so fatherly 🥺 makes my little heart melt.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

Thanks for tagging M ! Will come back in the evening to give my feedback/ shower my love ❤️ But just in the heat of the moment after reading it, I really can't help but applaud your brilliant insight on a character especially a character like Aditya, the previous chapter was also a beautiful delve in the psyche of a complex character that is Aditya and I thoroughly enjoyed them both. There's something so mournful yet tragic about the regrets we leave behind and once we sit down to contemplate them, we are filled with the worst emotion in humankind that is helplessnes and you just portrayed that beautifully. Aditya has emotionally abused Imlie many a times but he is an irrefutable victim as well. I never watched the show before AryLie but going by all the posts, clips and wiki, I can't help but feel a little bad for him. Characters like him who from a hero transit into a villain of someone's life are hard to find and it is harder to take an accurate reading of them without any biases. You did all that and more. I am just in awe of your writing skills honestly !

Take love for this whole FF (and the OS's) which is a work of art and I am treating this as my parallel AryLie universe and extra love for the previous two chapters which I found really intriguing. ❤️

The next comment might as well be a whole book on AryLie because I missed out commenting on your OS's and this FF in regards to them as well so be prepared and sorry for the super long comment 😅


Awww, I love books!!! You are absolutely right! Aditya is complex and not liked at all by many on the forum. But in this story, he is human like all of us. Find me one person who has never had a moment of pure selfishness, a moment of weakness, jealousy, envy, pride, anger in their life. One person who has not done something stupid in their life, hurt another human being with their words or actions.

Life is full of mistakes and regrets. But a lucky few are granted the opportunity and the ability to reflect, introspect. One can introspect all they want but only a handful will find the courage to make a change. Aditya was a principled man, a disciplined man who fell. But does that mean, he is irredeemable? You may or may not feel sympathy for him, but every one deserves another chance, especially if that attempt is sincere. Every one must give themselves a chance to mature and put their old selves behind...bring about a core change. Every one must have a chance to repay their karmic debts.

My impetus to write this story, is to make us introspect. Who am I? Why was I born into this particular set of circumstances? What is my purpose - not just academic, professional, but what is my bigger purpose, why was I born at all? Why was I born a human and not a grasshopper? Life must be about reflections, the ability to parse, what is most meaningful and letting go of those things that are not. It must be about keeping our mind steady as we face the dualities of life, birth and death, happiness and sadness. It can take many lifetimes to learn this simple lesson.

The anchor for all characters in this story comes in a surprisingly small package. Neel. It is human tendency to want to protect offspring, a child, the very essence of the untarnished, innocence. Every adult in this story will strive to meet this need, making monumental changes to their own mindset, their purpose. The premise of this story is that all 4 individuals will come Full Circle. Not every one gets a chance to do that in one life time. But these 4, whose lives had been woven together so intricately probably the moment Imlie was conceived, will. Thanks to Neel. I must admit, I have drawn on a lot of personal/professional experiences to write this one. I am so glad you like this story. Keep reading! - ❤️ M

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome as always....Amazingly written..... 😊❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally truth came into light. This story is kind of TV episodes. With each episodes and chapter the feeling of wanting more stir in our heart and what will happen next? This question evades my mind. You have seriously written this story in most thoughtful manner even better than the writers of show.😆❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for the tag, babe

Loved it

This is so interesting

Aditya finding out about Arvind by himself that too by mistake

Please don't tell me that in this AU the toxic BS will try to convince Imlie that Aryan used her to get back to him because that's just plain bullsh*t

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