RaYa OS: Meri Priya ( On track) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Bana

Super dee duper! Isme drama tha, romance tha, emotion tha, humour tha, twist bhi tha. Fantastic!!!

Thank you so much . Glad you enjoyed all these elements 🥰

Originally posted by: Dewdrops1995

Beautiful ❤️

Thank you 🥰

Originally posted by: Armansara

Written so beautifully and captures the characters so well. I felt I was watching this on the screen…actually story was so consistent and seemed so true to character for all —Ram’s friends Priya’s family and Ram and Priya…much more consistent than what we are seeing on the show…this probably would be 7-10 episodes on the show…

so much positivity…nice that you left out all the villians…

Please do keep writing

Thank you so much for taking time out and leaving such a descriptive comment, coz it really makes my day ❤️

So happy that you found it consistent with the characters and liked it !!

Khud hi pareshan hun show ke infinte useless characters se iss liye sabko bahar phek diya iss story se 🤣

Originally posted by: Clouds7

Awwww so damn niceeeeeee !! I missed your work :'((

Aww, good to know I was missed and glad that you liked this one ❤️

Originally posted by: NoviceWriter

Lovely OS❤️

Thank you 🥰

Originally posted by: RitikaS99

" Phir shuru ho gaya inka gullu gullu .Aaj ke din toh mujhe attension de dete"

She was about to fold her hands that Ram stopped her.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Oh man it was too funny.👌👌

Kya karu, aap logo ko toh pata hi hai ki kitna sachha pyaar hai mujhe Meera Maa se, ki kahaniyon me bhi uski jhalak dikh hi jaati chahe mai uss pyaar ko chupani ki kitni koshish kyu na karu 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: tina_1234

Cute shot

Thank you 🥰

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Woah!

That was a great Heart Attack I got, in a good way I mean😆

This piece was so splendid...so on point of what both Priya & Ram think of each other.

The hesitation to not say to each other directly what they mean for themselves, Feeding Air to her🤣, her being so innately happy when she realizes he'll stay with her

Damnnnn Good Job yaar👏

As always extremely kind, generous and encouraging with your words ❤️

So happy that you liked it 🥰

Originally posted by: Shivpriya6

Very beautifully written. Loved reading it so much.

Thank you so much 🥰