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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

😂😂😂 Karan shergilll hain candles nahi mashal jalayga.😂😂

Khaane ka naam pai acha ande, salad khilayga bolega roz roz diwali nahi hoti ki junk food khaye.😂😂😂😜

Exit point na hua toh pura academy ko bahar paheradaar banake security srrange karvaiga taaki madam phir koi kaand karke behosh na ho.😂😂😂😂

Soch lo cave mein le jaaoge toh phir se makers tumhe aur mujhe sparkling ✨ dress pehna denge taaki cave ke ander ki lighting mein bachat kar sake😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: peacenfun

Confession tak toh 1 aur AT bhar denge, confession ka precap is enough for 1 AT worth material 🤣

aaj aa gaya toh..AT toh hamari khatam nahi huyi hai..😁

chances kam hai waise toh aaj aane ke..😂

Naya title udhaar rakh lenge..kal tak toh scene aa hi jaana chahiye..😁

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

😂😂😂 Karan shergilll hain candles nahi mashal jalayga.😂😂

Khaane ka naam pai acha ande, salad khilayga bolega roz roz diwali nahi hoti ki junk food khaye.😂😂😂😜

Exit point na hua toh pura academy ko bahar paheradaar banake security srrange karvaiga taaki madam phir koi kaand karke behosh na ho.😂😂😂😂

tumhara wala version itna bhi unromantic nahi hoga..😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

A GRAND PROPOSAL: A TALE OF SATISFYING HEARTBREAK


I am assuming that the cadets can see Karan and Monami's love. The two haven't confessed to each other.


Monami tied her hair in a ponytail, as she walked to the mess, pausing behind all the cadets, who were standing in the doorway.

"Koi andar kyun nahi jaa raha hai?" Monami asked, standing on her tiptoes and trying to see what was happening. The mess was decorated, from one corner to the other, with balloons and lights.

The cadets all slowly walked in, gazing around.

"Sid Bhai ji", Bala said. "Hume toh kisi ne iss party mein bulaaya hi nahi."

"Me neither, bro", Sid said.

"#Not me either", Chitra said.

A soft music suddenly started playing, and Aneesh entered from the kitchen, stopping right in front of Monami.

Sid slapped a hand on his mouth, as he watched the scene. 'Aneesh bro and Monu bro? Yuck! No, no, no!'

Monami stared at him in confusion, glancing around, finding half as confused as her, and the other half watching with a mix of amusement, disbelief or excitement.

The three trainers strode in, talking to each other, before pausing and staring at the mess's decoration, and then at the cadets, before their gaze finally rested on Aneesh and Monami.

Karan's jaw clenched, and he exchanged a look with Faizi, who was looking half impressed, and half defeated.

"Janaab, yeh toh fast nikla. Aap peeche reh gaye", Faizi muttered. Karan elbowed him harshly, making him hunch over a little, as he clutched his stomach.

"Monami, I love you", Aneesh declared, and Monami's jaw dropped open. "Main jaanta hoon tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho." She watched with wide eyes, as he clutched her hands, kissing her knuckles. "Shaadi ki date tum apne hisaab se fix kar sakti ho. Aaj, kal. Par maximum, ek hafta, okay? And mujhe teen bacche chahiye."

Karan's jaw dropped, staring at the two in disbelief? Bacche? Girlfriend aur fiance waala stage kahan gaya? Aur shaadi?

"Shaadi?" She shrieked, ripping her hands away from her grip. "Bacche?"

"Yeh toh bahut zyaada fast hai", Faizi said. "Bacchon tak pahunch gaya?"

"Haan", Aneesh said. "Shaadi. Ab pyaar karte hain, toh shaadi toh karenge hi. Aur shaadi ke baad bacche toh honge hi."

"N-N-Nahi!" She said, taking a step away. "K-Kisne kaha ki main tumse pyaar karti hoon? Main nahi pyaar karti tumse."

"Haaye, hathodhe se maar kar Doctor Madam ne todha Aneesh Bhai ji ka dil", Bala said dramatically, clutching his chest.

"Kya bol rahi ho, Monami?" Aneesh said. "Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai."

"Dil toota par dimaag ko pata nahi chala?" Bala continued confusedly.

"#Poor coordination, Bala", Chitra said.

"Is mein ke nahi samajh aa raho isko?" Sanju said to the two male trainers, tilting her head. "Doctor hai, na? Itno dimaag toh hoga?"

"Hume iski degree par toh day 1 se doubt ho raha hai", Faizi said.

"Hume bhi ho raho hai, Sir ji", she agreed.

"I am... I am sorry, Aneesh. But main tumhe sirf dost ki tarah dekhti hoon. Aur kuch nahi hai humaare beech."

Aneesh tilted his head, looking utterly confused. "Par tumne mere saath ice cream khaayi, shopping kari, itna time spend kiya, uska kya?"

"Friends, Aneesh", she said. "Friends!"

"Pehle, mere saath rahi, mujhe lead on kara, phir uske baad, ab pyaari aur shaadi ki baat aayi, toh tum mana kar rahi ho?" Aneesh snapped. "Tum aisi ladki ho, yeh expected nahi tha."

Sid narrowed his eyes, taking a step forward as he opened his mouth. No one insulted his bro. Monami held up a hand, as anger overtook every other emotion in her eyes.

She stepped closer to Aneesh, glaring furiously at him. "Tum meri friendship ko pyaar ka naam doge, toh us mein meri nahi, tumhaari galti hai", she said, pointing a finger straight at her face. "Maine tumhe apna dost samjha, trust kiya, aur tum mere baare mein yeh sab sochte ho? Main tumhaari capabilities aur kaam ko respect karti thi, par mujhe nahi pata tha ki ek rejection ke baad, tum yeh sab bhi bol sakte ho, mujhe publicly embarrass aur humiliate kar sakte ho, yeh nahi socha tha. Main tumse pyaar NAHI karti hoon, Aneesh Malhotra. Do you get it?" She jabbed a finger harshly in his chest, making him stumble back a little. "Mujhse jitna door ho sake, utna door raho."

She held his gaze for a few seconds, before turning around and stalking out of the room. Everyone watched silently, before they all turned to Aneesh.

He clenched his fists, before trying to walk past the trainers as well. Karan kept a hand on his shoulder, holding him back.

"Chodho mujhe", he snapped.

Sanju moved in front of him, and Faizi on the other side, restricting any chance of him moving away.

"Humaare yahan", Sanju said, "Pyaar ki, samman ki, bahut izzat hai. Tu toh dono karto hai Monami se. Toh ab taufo toh milno chahiyo."

"Karan, wahi waala taufa jo Siddharth ko mila tha?" Faizi asked.

"Nahi", Karan said, tilting his head and smirking a little. "Doc sahab ko alag taufa milna chahiye. Ab pyaar alag toh same gift achha nahi lagta. Siddharth waala nahi. Iss ke liye kuch aur."

"Mujhe koi gift wift nahi chahiye", Aneesh snapped, trying to get out of his hold.

"We insist, doc", he said.

Faizi led him away, Sanju and Karan following as they cracked their knuckles.

Chitra looked at Bala, who seemed to be deep in thought. "Kya #soch rahe ho?"

"Sanju Madam thi Karan Bhai ji ki behen jaisi, toh Karan Bhai ji ne Sid Bhai ji ko jail mein daal diya, aur khaana nahi diya. Ab Monami Madam se toh Karan Bhai ji ILU ILU karte hain, toh ab yeh Aneesh Bhai ji ka kya hoga?"

Chitra tilted her head in wonder, and stared out of the door the four had disappeared out of. "#Good Luck."

"Suman ji ko toh wo Aneesh bilkul pasand nahi tha", Suman ji said.

"Abhi se 'tha'?" Sid said. "Maana ke Karan Sir use nahi chodhenge Monu ke baare mein yeh kehne ke liye. Par abhi mara nahi hoga."

"Toh ho jayegi mrityu", Prem ji said. "Honi toh hai hi."

"Assuming mrit- whatever means death, I agree", Sid said. "I doubt, kisi ko milegi Aneesh ki body."

"Kaun Aneesh?" Bala said. "Iss naam ka insaan hai academy mein?"

"Nahi", the rest said, shaking their heads, as they sat down on the table, eating their food with their normal cheerfulness.


NOTE- Yeh out of character hai thoda, aur thoda unrealistic, par I think tum ise zyaada enjoy karo rather than totally realistic and logical. Toh... yeh lo.

Bakwaas hai, par maine tum logon ki demand poori kar di. Baaki sab tumhaari problem.

Arre full on tofu tha 😂😂😂 kash monami uss aneech ko don chaar ghussa bhi maar deti saath main.😂😂😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Soch lo cave mein le jaaoge toh phir se makers tumhe aur mujhe sparkling ✨ dress pehna denge taaki cave ke ander ki lighting mein bachat kar sake😂😂😂

iss baar khandar nahi koi acchi hi-tech cave lekar jayega..😁

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Soch lo cave mein le jaaoge toh phir se makers tumhe aur mujhe sparkling ✨ dress pehna denge taaki cave ke ander ki lighting mein bachat kar sake😂😂😂

Arre jaani why sparkling dress mashal kis liye hain light ka liye toh hain na. 😜😂😂😂

Aur tumhe woh bhi kaam Laaga toh tumhare phone ki torch light on kar lena.😂😂😂😜😜😜😜

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife


NOTE- Yeh out of character hai thoda, aur thoda unrealistic, par I think tum ise zyaada enjoy karo rather than totally realistic and logical. Toh... yeh lo.

Bakwaas hai, par maine tum logon ki demand poori kar di. Baaki sab tumhaari problem.

Yes thoda out of character hai par fir bhi achha hai❤️

Thanks for writing, maje aaye padh kar😎

Isko as separate post an OS, one-shot bhi post kar sakti ho on main forum, just a suggestion 🤗

Edited by peacenfun - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

Arre full on tofu tha 😂😂😂 kash monami uss aneech ko don chaar ghussa bhi maar deti saath main.😂😂😂😂

sach main..I hope zaroor maare.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

Arre jaani why sparkling dress mashal kis liye hain light ka liye toh hain na. 😜😂😂😂

Aur tumhe woh bhi kaam Laaga toh tumhare phone ki torch light on kar lena.😂😂😂😜😜😜😜

itna kharab arrangment karoge toh tumhare saath koi nahi jaana chahega,Karan..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

A GRAND PROPOSAL: A TALE OF SATISFYING HEARTBREAK


I am assuming that the cadets can see Karan and Monami's love. The two haven't confessed to each other.


Monami tied her hair in a ponytail, as she walked to the mess, pausing behind all the cadets, who were standing in the doorway.

"Koi andar kyun nahi jaa raha hai?" Monami asked, standing on her tiptoes and trying to see what was happening. The mess was decorated, from one corner to the other, with balloons and lights.

The cadets all slowly walked in, gazing around.

"Sid Bhai ji", Bala said. "Hume toh kisi ne iss party mein bulaaya hi nahi."

"Me neither, bro", Sid said.

"#Not me either", Chitra said.

A soft music suddenly started playing, and Aneesh entered from the kitchen, stopping right in front of Monami.

Sid slapped a hand on his mouth, as he watched the scene. 'Aneesh bro and Monu bro? Yuck! No, no, no!'

Monami stared at him in confusion, glancing around, finding half as confused as her, and the other half watching with a mix of amusement, disbelief or excitement.

The three trainers strode in, talking to each other, before pausing and staring at the mess's decoration, and then at the cadets, before their gaze finally rested on Aneesh and Monami.

Karan's jaw clenched, and he exchanged a look with Faizi, who was looking half impressed, and half defeated.

"Janaab, yeh toh fast nikla. Aap peeche reh gaye", Faizi muttered. Karan elbowed him harshly, making him hunch over a little, as he clutched his stomach.

"Monami, I love you", Aneesh declared, and Monami's jaw dropped open. "Main jaanta hoon tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho." She watched with wide eyes, as he clutched her hands, kissing her knuckles. "Shaadi ki date tum apne hisaab se fix kar sakti ho. Aaj, kal. Par maximum, ek hafta, okay? And mujhe teen bacche chahiye."

Karan's jaw dropped, staring at the two in disbelief? Bacche? Girlfriend aur fiance waala stage kahan gaya? Aur shaadi?

"Shaadi?" She shrieked, ripping her hands away from her grip. "Bacche?"

"Yeh toh bahut zyaada fast hai", Faizi said. "Bacchon tak pahunch gaya?"

"Haan", Aneesh said. "Shaadi. Ab pyaar karte hain, toh shaadi toh karenge hi. Aur shaadi ke baad bacche toh honge hi."

"N-N-Nahi!" She said, taking a step away. "K-Kisne kaha ki main tumse pyaar karti hoon? Main nahi pyaar karti tumse."

"Haaye, hathodhe se maar kar Doctor Madam ne todha Aneesh Bhai ji ka dil", Bala said dramatically, clutching his chest.

"Kya bol rahi ho, Monami?" Aneesh said. "Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai."

"Dil toota par dimaag ko pata nahi chala?" Bala continued confusedly.

"#Poor coordination, Bala", Chitra said.

"Is mein ke nahi samajh aa raho isko?" Sanju said to the two male trainers, tilting her head. "Doctor hai, na? Itno dimaag toh hoga?"

"Hume iski degree par toh day 1 se doubt ho raha hai", Faizi said.

"Hume bhi ho raho hai, Sir ji", she agreed.

"I am... I am sorry, Aneesh. But main tumhe sirf dost ki tarah dekhti hoon. Aur kuch nahi hai humaare beech."

Aneesh tilted his head, looking utterly confused. "Par tumne mere saath ice cream khaayi, shopping kari, itna time spend kiya, uska kya?"

"Friends, Aneesh", she said. "Friends!"

"Pehle, mere saath rahi, mujhe lead on kara, phir uske baad, ab pyaari aur shaadi ki baat aayi, toh tum mana kar rahi ho?" Aneesh snapped. "Tum aisi ladki ho, yeh expected nahi tha."

Sid narrowed his eyes, taking a step forward as he opened his mouth. No one insulted his bro. Monami held up a hand, as anger overtook every other emotion in her eyes.

She stepped closer to Aneesh, glaring furiously at him. "Tum meri friendship ko pyaar ka naam doge, toh us mein meri nahi, tumhaari galti hai", she said, pointing a finger straight at her face. "Maine tumhe apna dost samjha, trust kiya, aur tum mere baare mein yeh sab sochte ho? Main tumhaari capabilities aur kaam ko respect karti thi, par mujhe nahi pata tha ki ek rejection ke baad, tum yeh sab bhi bol sakte ho, mujhe publicly embarrass aur humiliate kar sakte ho, yeh nahi socha tha. Main tumse pyaar NAHI karti hoon, Aneesh Malhotra. Do you get it?" She jabbed a finger harshly in his chest, making him stumble back a little. "Mujhse jitna door ho sake, utna door raho."

She held his gaze for a few seconds, before turning around and stalking out of the room. Everyone watched silently, before they all turned to Aneesh.

He clenched his fists, before trying to walk past the trainers as well. Karan kept a hand on his shoulder, holding him back.

"Chodho mujhe", he snapped.

Sanju moved in front of him, and Faizi on the other side, restricting any chance of him moving away.

"Humaare yahan", Sanju said, "Pyaar ki, samman ki, bahut izzat hai. Tu toh dono karto hai Monami se. Toh ab taufo toh milno chahiyo."

"Karan, wahi waala taufa jo Siddharth ko mila tha?" Faizi asked.

"Nahi", Karan said, tilting his head and smirking a little. "Doc sahab ko alag taufa milna chahiye. Ab pyaar alag toh same gift achha nahi lagta. Siddharth waala nahi. Iss ke liye kuch aur."

"Mujhe koi gift wift nahi chahiye", Aneesh snapped, trying to get out of his hold.

"We insist, doc", he said.

Faizi led him away, Sanju and Karan following as they cracked their knuckles.

Chitra looked at Bala, who seemed to be deep in thought. "Kya #soch rahe ho?"

"Sanju Madam thi Karan Bhai ji ki behen jaisi, toh Karan Bhai ji ne Sid Bhai ji ko jail mein daal diya, aur khaana nahi diya. Ab Monami Madam se toh Karan Bhai ji ILU ILU karte hain, toh ab yeh Aneesh Bhai ji ka kya hoga?"

Chitra tilted her head in wonder, and stared out of the door the four had disappeared out of. "#Good Luck."

"Suman ji ko toh wo Aneesh bilkul pasand nahi tha", Suman ji said.

"Abhi se 'tha'?" Sid said. "Maana ke Karan Sir use nahi chodhenge Monu ke baare mein yeh kehne ke liye. Par abhi mara nahi hoga."

"Toh ho jayegi mrityu", Prem ji said. "Honi toh hai hi."

"Assuming mrit- whatever means death, I agree", Sid said. "I doubt, kisi ko milegi Aneesh ki body."

"Kaun Aneesh?" Bala said. "Iss naam ka insaan hai academy mein?"

"Nahi", the rest said, shaking their heads, as they sat down on the table, eating their food with their normal cheerfulness.


NOTE- Yeh out of character hai thoda, aur thoda unrealistic, par I think tum ise zyaada enjoy karo rather than totally realistic and logical. Toh... yeh lo.

Bakwaas hai, par maine tum logon ki demand poori kar di. Baaki sab tumhaari problem.

👏🤣 👏🤣👏 🤣 👏🤣

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