MaAn OS: O Re Piya! - Page 3

It was beyond amazing Ritu!👏 I didn't find it long because I never wanted it to end! ❤️Loved Mukku the cute cupid! Aww! The terms you used for Anuj- most special Kapadia, Anupama ke fan club ka admin! 😳❤️Anu counting hours since she saw Anuj last took me back in time! I used to count down the hours between Saturday afternoon and Monday morning when I would see my shayar Kapadia again! Munnabhai movie had released back then and I would spend my Sundays humming "pal, pal, pal, pal, kaise katega pal, har pal, har pal!"Loved Anuj's surprise entry! As always anupama ke ghar ka darwaza khula HI rehta hai!😆 Chalo Yahaan MaAn ka fayda ho gaya! ☺️The last part was really the best!☺️Had a great time reading it!

So cute so sweet 😃😃

Simplicity at its best.

Thanks Riya, glad i finally made time to read this. Co-incidentally, this made my night too beautiful, serene ❤️

Ok first things first...your vocabulary 🙌

I mean i love your choice of words yaar...even if i was not a maan fan then also i would have loved reading this just for the way it is written 😍😍

Anu referring Anuj as special kapadia 😳awwww kitni cute hai yaar ye

And let me be honest jab door bell baji na to anu se zyada mai khush huyi...i was like aa gaya mera majnu deewar kood kar 🤣

But then it turned out to be mukku🤡

I was like ok seh lenge thora🥲

Fir i thought ki ye gadha aayega to zaroor...Riya aise to dhokha nahi de sakti hume afterall story ka naam oo re piya hai oo ree nanadwa nahi🤪

And ye Anuj apna sharam lihaaj kya apne Car k backseat par rakh k aaya tha🤣 i mean na idhar na udhar seedha godi par hi attack kiya 😂😭😂😭

Mukku must be like yaar mera bhai kitna despo hai🤣🤣

Ek to accha hai ki they are practicing chumma chaati in front of mukku abhi se hi bcz jaisa Anuj ka room hai (bina door ka) pakka mukku aur gk kaka live telecast dekhenge in k suhaag raat ka🤣

Ek to yaar, form where do you get these cute ideas of romance...peechli baar chits me flirting aur is baar messages k through

Sahi hai tarakki par hai dono Laila majnu😳

Overall it was a fantastic read dear...it worked as an instant mood lifter for me❤️

Such a beautiful little OS!! 🥺❤️🤧

Be still my heart!❤️🥺

Itna pyaara kuch koi kaise likh sakta hain bhai? 🥺

I melted by the time I reached the end! Such a sweet short story!🤧 Something I would love to actually watch on the show some day! 🥺

Loved it!❤️ Gonna read it a million times now! 🤧 Because once is not enough!

Love,

Riddhi ❤️

Originally posted by: Neenzm

Riya, it is amazing . You weaved the words so beautifully.

I have read your other OS as well. Your style of writing always impress the readers.

Thank you so much, Neen! ❤️❤️

Everything becomes extra special when my writing is being praised. Much love!

Originally posted by: Amy211307

This was Uber romantic. love love love it 💗💗💗💗😍💗

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! ❤️

Originally posted by: V_ka_attitude

Super cute, loved the bond between the three of them - wish the makers continue with such sweet normal banter at home -

Thank you so much! Glad that you enjoyed it! ❤️

Originally posted by: screen22

This is heaven when these three people are together as one and can find peace with each other. How adorable 🥰 The ease of coming to Anupama’s home and just making themselves feel comfortable where Anupama is that is where home is.

My Hindi is not good so please translate into English if possible

I agree! These three like this are very adorable and cute! I know things are changing in the show now but I'm sure they'll come around for good, soon!

Thank you so much for your precious feedback! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Kras1

ooooo riyaaaa 🤪

it's so beautiful yr

you portrayed anu's emotions so perfectly maine ek baar boli thi yehi baat ki anu ka yehi haal hoga jab bhi wo kapadia house chodegi shah house chodkar use takleef thi but khalipan akelapan use mehsus nahi hota tha use darata nahi tha but kapadia house chodkar use wo akela ghar khane ko daudega

but the sweetest kapadias jinki jaan basti h anu mein wo use kaela thodi chod sakte h issiliye uske peeche peeche aa gaye

anu was looking for anuj but mukku aa gayi but anu ko disappointment bilkul nahi mili kyunki peeche peeche anuj bhi to aaya 😆

kya embarrassing moment hoga sach dono ke liye aur upar se mukku waise hi koi mauka thodi chodti h unhe pareshan karne ka chedne ka🤣

OMG their message talk was so cute

oye anu kissed anuj 😳

bhale hi forehead kiss kiya but kiya to sahi

bechari mukku apne bhai ko hi gadha bol diya🤣

cute OS yr

Thank you so much, Ree!! ❤️

I know! These Kapadias are just shooo kooott. Ek dusre ke Bina reh bhi nahi sakte aur ek dusre se keh bhi nahi sakte!

I'm glad you could enjoy this piece!