MG SS - Rakshak #2 Updated Epilogue, Pg 66 Feb 13 - Page 35

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Posted: 3 years ago

Happy New Year!

thanks for updating


Part 17

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Splendid update…. Awesomely written

this separation is indeed hard for Maan and Geet

hope this time apart makes their relationship stronger

great that Geet was clear with her dad regarding Maan's place in her heart

of cos she loves her dad but Maan she also loves Maan immensely

sad that her dad is only concerned about status

liked that she made it clear that she was the one that forced Maan to marry her

upset that her dad feels Maan's actions was an act

glad that firm that she does not want to prove Maan

so Maan has finalised the deal to rent the haveli and got a 3 bedroom apartment as part of the deal

Maan is intelligent and is thinking about his career

at least Maan is aware of his strengths and will work on that

loved that he wants to make his mom and Geet proud of himself

I am sure Maan will soon be successful

pleased that he wants to give him mom and Geet the best

however she needs to realise that Geet does not need a luxurious life

nice that he also wants to Mohinder to be proud of him and assure him that he can give Geet the best

well Maan does understand why Mohinder does not accept him

Maan's thoughts are reasonable that Mohinder should accept him as a son

well Maan craves a father's figure

happy that he is determined that no one will separate Geet from him

and he will not sacrifice is love

adore that he he cannot hurt and will not hurt Geet

admire Maan's confidence in his capabilities

good that he has a plan in place and will commence his education

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Waiting for next update..... .

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update


Maaneet separated for time being


Geet hv argument cum conversation with her dad ... Both r right on their own way


Maan cracked good deal for haveli n his stay


Maan future planning is set to do n he wants everyone to be proud of him including mohinder as he miss father in his life ... Nice thinking 👌


Maan never wants to do sacrifice n leave geet ... Great 👏🏻 i like that

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Part 18

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Maan decided to start with business and along with it he will carry over his education. Education was his goal todo MBA from best school, before that he would do any 3-year graduation course with correspondence. This will give him time to focus on his business along with completing his education. Thus he enrolled for Correspondence course for B Com.

Geet, as landed to Mumbai received call from Maan. Ohh it was a video call. She picked immediately

Ohh she was so happy to get to look at his face “Maa-aan” she almost jumped up and down. Mohinder was surprised to see her excitement for Maan.

New Phone? When did you buy? How much did it cost?” Mohinder could not believe his princess would ever talk on price of a cellphone

Bas Bas kitne sawal? Ok,now I saw you, I am going on normal call” “Noooo, I wanna keep seeing you” All the dullness and frustration of her face was gone

No, I don’t want Gabbar to listen to our talk” “Gabbar?” and then her eyes went on face of her Dad, who was so irritated, she giggled and went back to normal phone.

He keeps calling your Dad with name and you enjoy it” Geet ignored her Dad. She knew how much Maan respected her Dad.

She went on normal call and ran to her room as she entered the mansion “Love you Love you love you… already missing you….

Missing you too… Just got this phone so I can” “I know, you will never spend for your luxury. Mujhe bhej diya khud se door isliye

hmmm” He suddenly sounded low to her “Maa-aan” “Hmmm

Bolo na” “Hmmm” they kept quiet for a while feeling each other

Ok, you take rest now.. hmmm” “Hmmm

Ok listen” “Hmmm” she just wanted to keep listening to him “Moving with Maa to Chandigarh next week

He told her about his course enrollment. Geet was so happy. He was planning for his career. Now no one could stop him. She had such deep faith in him. She knew no one other than Maan himself could stop him for rising high.

Maan I want to be part of your wonderful career” “Hmmm abhi start hua nahi, and you already made it wonderful” “Shut Up. You are going to be the best, Samjhe Tum

Ok baba. Can I disobey you? Have I anytime?” she smiled “I love you.. love you so much

She heard the knock on the door and then Mohinder was inside her room.

Chalo Bye, your Gabbar is here” she said in low voice “Bye.. Love U” he laughed

Yes Dad” she said with straight face. He did not like that.she could giggle with that Bodyguard and make face with her Dad.

Let’s have dinner” “You could have sent anyone to call me.”

But she left with him. While they were having dinner “I am throwing Garnd party in your honor tomorrow. So you can be back with your high profile dressing till you are staying in Mumbai and present yourself with class of Geet Handa, Daughter of Mohinder Handa

Dad, seriously I don’t want these party and all. My exams are approaching and I need to focus on my studies. Maan expects me to get best result. I can’t disappoint him

He wants good result for you. Khud kitna parda likha hai woh

He is simply brilliant Dad. Best in whatever he touches. Don’t you remember, he was best in his job here.”

There are so many things in him, your daughter just can’t stop falling for him…” Mohinder cut her

Ok, I am not interested.” He paused “You are attending the Party tomorrow. And yes, I am not any less worried for your result, do you get that. But we have our class and status to maintain alongside

Ok fine, I will be there in Party and with your standard.fine?” Mohinder was relieved. He has to start showing the difference and many more thing. She needed to be back to this world.

Gee went to her room, locked it and dialed her hubby

Hmmm dinner done?” “Hmm yours” “Hmmm. Maa is missing you too. It took her late to sleep tonight.”

Geet did not say anything. Maan knew how much attached she has become with his Mom

Ok Listen, Dad has kept party tomorrow. I don’t want to go.I know what he is trying to do” Maan explained her to keep her calm and attend the party and call him after. They cut the call after, advising each other to focus on their career.

Before cutting the call “Ok, stay focused and study. Love yaa… Bye “Maan cut the call immediately Geet was little disappointed. She wanted more romance. She could never get enough of him.

For Maan, he was going all crazy missing her and it being night, he was missing her more. He needed to get hold.

Next morning Geet did not get call from Maan, only message of staying focused and enjoy the Party. She was so very upset. But study with full concentration as he had wished but she was pissed of.

Mohinder tried to talk to her but all she said “Dad will meet at party. Need to go to college

Mohinder let her be, there was no hurry for him. His daughter was at last with him. Mohinder made calls for getting office ready for Geet.

Maan on other side, went to different sites. His course will start in 10 days, till then he wanted to get started. He went to several bank for loan but all rejected his plea as he had no job. He showed them his performance, he explained them in so many ways “Trust me it will be only benefit for you. I will give 5% share to any bank which finance me now” Most laughed on him, the boy didn’t even have any job, his only source of income was the good amount of rent for his Haveli and he was planning for the Start Up company and its 5 % share. None of these broke Maan. Determination was only building.

So many times he wished to call Geet, she was his strength but he did not want to trouble her with his issues, especially when she has to cope up with her studies and her Dad’s unending tricks to brainwash her.

Geet, in college, luckily did not see her friends. She least wanted to see them. She went to clerk’s office, got her documents ready for exams.

In The Evening – Elegant Party Hall

Mohinder had invited, all his circles and business associates with Families. He wanted to reinstall his daughter’s position in the circle. He had called her friends except Ronit. After realizing what the truth is he had made sure Ronit is stuck in Jail. His life was ruined.

Everyone waited for her. Mohinder knew all would have so many questions for his disappearance of his daughter. All Geet’s friend were strictly directed to not mention about her marriage. So he had tried to keep thing about her marriage under wrap.

Geet made her much awaited entry to the party. From far she looked all so elegant in her off shoulder evening gown, high heels, elegant pearl set adoring her neck and ears. Mohinder felt proud of his daughter. But this pride was short lived when Geet approached. She was very elegant but waht took off Mohinder’s mind was the vermillion on head, which was less visible due to hair do but her Mangalsutra in her neck. She adored it proudly.

What happened to your class Geet? Does it suit to my daughter?” he said in super irked tone

Now what happened Dad? I came to party for you, not at all interested in it. Still I am here

Get this thing off you. Here I am trying to bring you back to the circle but you are hell bent on spoiling things.”

Dad!! How can you?” she held her Mangalsutra. “Geet what have happened to your class.”

Dad, if you want I can leave this party now, you can explain all your classy circle.”

Ok, At least hide it somewhere. Please Geet for your Dad” Geet didn’t want to make scene. Especially knowing Maan would not approve her making scene in her Dad’s party.

Geet took it tied in her hand like a bracelet. Her heart bleeded doing that. These were so many reasons she did not want to come to Mumbai… She was so happy in world of her Maan and Maa… their sweet little world. She was so missing him badly and he had not called her today.

Geet later placed a plastic face and met the old circle. Her Dad proudly making her part of everyone and introducing her especially to all high class bachelors who were son of businessman of his class or few even taking business lead. Some carrying attitude, yet trying to get her attention and some becoming friendly and showing charm. Geet was the most beautiful one, center of charm and most wanted, whole sole successor of HANDA Group. Geet just ignored them all, madly waiting for call from her darling Hubby, who she knew will not call her today as it was too late.

Precap :- Maan Pleasing wifey

Part 19


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Pyar Hua Chupke Se - Part 13

Edited by tellyme - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Lovely update

Waiting for next update...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome on pt

Maan video call was surprise for Geet bz she knows he don't waste money to get any luxury item for him self and this mobile also for Geet happiness to see him and he see Geet mohi hating seeing excitement of his call on Geet face he called mohi as Gabar Geet giggle 🤭 she ignore what her father saying she went to her room and they talked till mohinder came to call her for dinner their he announced about throwing party Geet was not interested but know Maan don't like she disobey her father but she talked to Maan about party and her father's plan Maan told her to attend the party

Maan to starting his career and education same time he have made his mind to continue his studies with business he went to many bank for loans to start his own company but banker's rejecting bz he is jobless but Maan keep trying not disappoint from their remakes or rejection

In party her father have objection on her wearing mangalsutra so she wear it on her wrist like bracelet

Mohinder intro many ppl to Geet but her mind is stuck on Maan call she missing his call but now she knows he won't call her late nights

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Fighting manipulation with manipulation by Mohinder Handa...

Does he think his daughter is so shallow to break her relationship just because of class difference?

Is that how he raised her? Very disappointed in his thought process. More than anything he's distancing himself from his daughter.

can't believe a father trying to break his daughter's marriage even if he doesn't approve of it... And after seeing how much she loves him and come anything maan will always protect her that's not hidden from him as well.


I just love geet's passive aggressive behaviour of wearing marriage symbols for the party. I was like that's my girl 😆

And the rage of mohi totally on point.

Am i a sadist in enjoying his plight? ... I don't care 🤣

Gabbar gets his due 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the update waiting for next part

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update


Maaneet talk on phone was lovely


Mohinder trying his best to brainwash geet but.... nothing effecting her


Maan trying to set his startup .... Hopefully he will get his chance soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

How adorable. Look at the excitement in her voice when Maan called. Mohinder so upset. But he dies not realise he much respect Maan has for him. And how talented he is. Driven too mainly because of geet. Wants to give her and his ma a good life

loved their talks

Poor Maan being rejected. He will not give up though gif sure


geet too so upset her dad asked her to remove her mangaldutra. But she kept quiet for now. Let’s see


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