A Shade Darker ~ An Arylie TS (Last part updated pg6!!!) - Page 3

Originally posted by: monaghosh

Lovely update wtrite soon

Thank you! new part out now!

Originally posted by: hurrom

Nice....Interesting.....update soon....😊

Thank you! part two out now!

Originally posted by: raveena0605

Aww..so beautiful

Thank you... new part is updated!

Originally posted by: LexM

This is pure fire .Wonderful .

Wishing to see such a scene onscreen. the actors will pull this off well .

Thank you! I hope for something like this onscreen too! BTW new update is out!

Originally posted by: Casper13

Wow❤️!! This looks so promising.🌸✨!! ❤️ loved it.

Aww thank you! New part out!

Originally posted by: Marybarton

I liked how it started and really defined the pain of Aryan's brother-in-law. Mob lynchings are a menace to society and desi countries do not do enough to punish the whole mob as they should. Aryan's anger should also be directed to the factory workers (his factory workers) along with Aditya for inciting this violence.

You stayed with the lavender scent, I see. I like that as Aryan's scent of choice, because it is soothing. There is a scene, I have planned also, about the scar because I think it really adds to his character.

That was very well written :)

Thank you! I saw what you wrote for the scar... fencing (love it!) 🤪

New part out!

Originally posted by: chotoranii

i love this, can't wait for more!

Thank you! New part out!

Originally posted by: SundariP

I'm too busy at least this week... Sunday se I'll be able to give more time to reading... Work pressure will reduce

Pooja now you have to catch up with two parts 🤪

Originally posted by: lovereading14

Pooja now you have to catch up with two parts 🤪

No worries 😆

Not too busy anymore 🤣🤣

O wow this is so amazing...