FF: Dooriyan aur Nazdeekiyan part 31 pg 116 - Page 24

Originally posted by: Cheryl38

Just read all the 3 updates from the last few days. They are so adorable together & Why is Anuj so cute..🥺 Hey dear! What shall I call you? Thanks for appreciating my story! 🤗Means a lot! ❤️

I wanna see what will happen when they are in Ahmedabad. Intezaar karo! Still some time before they leave for ahmedabad.

P.S. I was unwell for a few days couldn’t read any new stories thanks for the tag. Hope you're feeling better now. Take care.

Me in red

Originally posted by: isyhm

Beautifully written Thank you so much dear! ❤️

I am tired of vanraj in the show

Especially after the whitewashing they have been doing

It's not okay to show an abuser to reap the benefits of somebody else's hardwork. They made emotional abuse a joke for everyone. So true! Can't believe the producer let his personal equation with an actor interfere with the story! At one point MaAn had so much promise!

Atleast you give me good updates.

Thank you for the Lovely update. Pleasure! Glad you liked it! Thanks for sharing your feedback!🤗

Me in red

Originally posted by: SKCS

Thank you for tagging me! My pleasure!❤️

Such a beautiful story, I have loved reading every chapter so far and am so looking forward for the rest of this beautiful fairytale to unfold🙌🏽✨👏🏽❤️ Thanks for saying that dear! You made my day! 🤗

My replies in blue

A/N: Flashback in blue font.

Part 11

"Thank you so much sweetheart! I love you!"
"I love you too, sweetie!"
Anuj cocked an eyebrow.
"Sweetie?! Kal toh koi keh raha tha ki mujhse.. ghadiye-phadiye/ bar bar I love you nahi bola jayega! Aur aaj sweetie!?"
"Ha toh.. main kya karun? Aap toh "kem chho? Maja ma?" jaise baat baat par.. "I love you!" bolte rehte hain! Toh phir maine bhi.. kehna seekh liya!"
"I see! Yeh 'sweetie' ka kya chakkar hai?"
"Woh.. Maine dekha hai ki Tosu aur Kinjal aapas me "baby, baby" karte rehte hain! Samar aur Nandini "lol".. Unka alag hi chalta hai! Mujhe.. sweetie ke alava kuch soojha nahi toh.."

He smiled at her honest reply.
"Waise 'I love you' ke aage kuch lagana hi padega aisa zuroori nahi hai!"
"Samajh gayi. Ab aap uthiye aur mujhe sochne dijiye ki main.. ghar pe kya keh sakti hoon. Mujhe kuch nahi soojh raha hai!"
"Tum tension mat lo! Main tumhe yahan rok raha hoon lekin main tumhari insult nahi hone dunga!"
"Main kal aur parso kis bahane se yahan aaungi? Opphice band hoga. Agar maine kaha ki aapke saath baithkar kaam karna hai toh sabse pehle Kavya phir Mr. Shah sunayenge! Phir ba kahengi ki moti baa ke pass toh ruki nahi aur Rajkot me ruk gayi!"
"Sunane ke alava aur karte kya hai woh dono!? Anyways.."
He opened a document in his tablet and passed it to her.
"Yeh dekh lo. Kal AK ventures ne ABC hall me capacity building ke liye group training organize ki hai. Isme garib bachchon ko skill development sikhaya jayega."
"Chhutti ke din.. training? Aur mera aisi training me achanak se jana.. Matlab pehle se bataya kyun nahi aisa hi poochhenge.."
She seemed skeptical about the idea.
"Training toh chhutti ke din bhi hoti hai! Tum keh dena ki jab mujhe pata chala ki tum Rajkot aayi ho toh maine tumse mere saath training me chalne ke liye kaha. CSR initiative hai. Kisiko koi problem nahi hogi. Mr and Mrs Shah ko legitimate reason de dogi toh wo bakwas nahi kar payenge! Aur Pinakin ki family tumse koi sawal kyun karegi?"
He held her hands and assured her.
"Main tumhe rukne ke liye keh raha hoon par us wajah se main tumhari badnami nahi hone dunga! Never!"
"Thank you Anuj! Main toh chotila wali baat ko lekar hi ghabra gayi thi. Yeh toh pata nahi kaise..!"
"It's okay. Main baitha hoon na! Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai! Samar aa jaye phir call kar dena toh chotila wali baat bhi chhup jayegi. Main soch raha tha ki.. lunch order kar doon? Tum kya khaogi batao."

"Hmm. Kuch bhi. Sada khana mangvaiyega.."
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After lunch Anuj Recieved a call from his team member regarding the site visit.

Anupama left a message for Bhavesh and sent a voice note to Devika, enquiring about her schedule.

Anuj returned some time later.

"Ha, ab hum tumhari salary wali baat kar le, jahan se yeh Rajkot wala mamla shuru hua tha?"
"Main woh hi kehne wali thi.."
She recollected the events of the day when she had had an argument with Anuj.
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It had been a couple of days since Anuj had resumed going to office and Anupama had returned to her house.
One evening she was busy working on her laptop when Anuj came back from a meeting.
"Aapki meeting bahot lambi chali?"
"Ha, kuch legal issues the. Tumhara presentation ready hai?"
"Ha. Aapko mail karti hoon."
"Hmm. Main.. tumse ek baat karna chahta tha.."
The serious tone made her look up from the laptop.
"Kya hua?"
"Karkhane ka issue sort out nahi ho pa raha hai, Anu. Main use khareed nahi pa raha hoon isiliye ab.. Next month se tumhari salary se har mahine ek fixed amount katega."
"Theek chhe. Main dugni mehnat karungi par pura karja chuka dungi! Dance academy me bhi online extra class chal hi rahi hai. Toh aap jara bhi chinta mat kariye!"
"Mujhe karze ki nahi tumhari chinta ho rahi hai! As a friend main.. tumse kuch.. poochh sakta hoon? If you don't mind.. "
She took a moment or two before nodding.
"Yeh 40 lakh ka pura loan tum.. kyun repay kar rahi ho? I mean.. Karkhana bapuji ka hai. Mr Shah ka cafe bhi waheen chal raha hai. Besides, Paritosh, Kinjal, Samar teeno kama rahe hain. Toh phir yeh sab apna contribution tumhe kyun nahi dete?"
"Yeh.. 40 lakh ka loan.. humare sar par aaya hi.. meri wajah se hai!"
She tells him about the original loan amount, the subsequent bank fraud and Rakhi Dave's involvement in the matter.
A dumbfounded Anuj shakes his head.
"I don't believe this!"
"Main hi murakh thi jo.. bina padhe, bina samjhe kagaj sign karne ki bhool kar di!"
"I agree. Tumne galti ki par galti sirf tumhari kaise huyi? Samar ki bhi utni hi galti hai. Use toh papers padhne chahiye the! Bapuji ki bhi galti hai! Unhone Mrs Dave ka nature jante huye bhi, unse help lene ke liye tumhe.. utni raat ko akele jane kaise diya? Kuch ho jata toh?"
"Aap kuch nahi jante. Bapuji ki galti nahi hai! Woh karkhana unke bapuji ki nisani hai isiliye.."
"I understand woh emotional hain use lekar. Lekin uske liye unhone ghar ka hissa girvi rakhne diya? Woh bhi Mrs Dave ke pass?! Koi aur bhi hai jiski galti hai. Par usne bahot conveniently sara blame tum par dalkar apne sir se loan hata diya!"
"Kaun?" She left him shocked with her query.
"Vanraj Shah aur kaun!? Bapuji ki age ho gayi hai. Unko property tax ka dhyan nahi raha par Vanraj ko bhi nahi raha? Jab cafe khola tab check nahi kiya? Jab pata chala tab uski responsibility nahi banti hai ki tumse kahe ke.. At least original amount ka adha hissa woh tumhe installments me pay karega but no! He's not bothered."
"Woh kahan se bharenge? Unki naukri chali gayi hai. Caphe bhi utna chala nahi hai.."
"Savings hongi, I'm sure. Tumne apna career itna late shuru kiya hai. Rent bhi bhar rahi ho. Din raat office me aur dance academy me mehnat kar rahi ho. Par financially tumhara ex nahi, bachche nahi.. koi tumhari help nahi kar rahe hain! And you're okay with it?!"
"Mujhe kisi ki madad ki jaroorat nahi hai!"
"Kyun? Tum koi machine ho, jo bina thakey lagatar kam kar sakti ho?! Mujhe nazar aa raha hai ki tumhari health par uska asar padh raha hai, par tum manna nahi chahti!"
"Jahan parivar ki baat aati hai wahan.."
He interrupts her "Wahan pure parivar ko contribute karna chahiye! Yeh nahi ki jisne bina padhe document sign kiya ho uske sir par pura blame dal diya aur use loan chukane diya! Tumhe bhi yeh baat unke dhyan me lani chahiye."
"Chhodiye ne.. Mujhe unki arthik madad nahi chahiye. Main dekh lungi mujhe kya karna hai!"
He felt he had overstepped and decided to end the matter there.
"Okay. Fine. Agar maine.. koi line cross ki ho toh.. I'm sorry!"
"Aapko.. Aisa toh.." she gulped several times.
Anuj extended his hand across the table upon seeing her crestfallen face.
"Annu.. I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to hurt you."
"Aapko aisa toh nahi lag raha ne ki.. jaise maine apne parivar ka.. nuksan karva diya.. bina dekhe sign kar diya waise hi.. Kal ko aapki opphice me.. "
"Of course not! Main kya keh raha hoon aur tum kya samajh rahi ho!"
"Mujhe laga puri baat sunkar.. aap yeh soch rahe hain ki main.. aapki partnersip ke.. laayak nahi hoon!"
"Main kyun aisa sochunga, Anu? Maine jo bhi kaha.. Don't take it personally!"
Anupama placed her laptop in its sleeve.
"Jai Shri Krishna!"
He got up from his chair.
"Areh, tum kahan ja rahi ho? Dekho mujhe galat mat samjho.. "
"Ha, main toh sab kuch galat hi samajhti hoon! Jara bhi akkal nahi hai mujh me! Lekin itni bhi kamjor nahi hoon.. ki apne parivar par bojh dal doon!"
"Hadd ho gayi! Zimmedari ko bojh kyun samajh rahi ho tum? Annuu! Meri baat toh suno!"
He tried his best to stop her but she left.
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Anupama leaned closer to Anuj.
"Sori Anuj! Aap toh mere bhale ki baat kar rahe the lekin.. mere man me chhupa hua dar sawal bankar bahar aa gaya. Itne bade bujiness man ke saath.. bujiness karne ke laayak main hoon ya nahi? Kahin itne dino tak kam karne ke bad yeh sab sunkar unko mujhe apni partner banane par pachhtava toh nahi hua? Woh hi sab sochne lagi. Aapko galat samajh liya aur naraj kar diya!"
He wiped her tears and placed an arm around her.
"Pehle toh mujhe bahot gussa aaya ki tum baat ko samajhne ke bajaay kahin aur hi le gayi! Raat ko jab Rajkot ki trip fix hui toh tumhe batane ke liye call kiya tha. Tum naraz thi toh call recieve nahi kiya tumne."
"Mujhe laga phir se behes ho jayegi. Mujhe kya pata tha yeh baat hai! Aap agle din nikalne se pehle phone kar sakte the ne? Kyun nahi kiya?"
"Tumne phone nahi uthaya toh mujhe aur gussa aa gaya ki yeh ladki toh apne bare me sochna hi nahi chahti hai! Apni priority list me khud ko last me rakhti hai! Meri baat agar itni hi chubh rahi hai toh baat karne ka fayda kya hai! Gussa mujh par haavi ho gaya aur main Rajkot chala aaya."
He locked his gaze with her.
"Tumhe yahaan aane ke saath hi miss karne laga! Andar andar se do din me maan gaya tha ki tumhari priorities alag hai.. lekin upari gussa dikha raha tha. Actually.. wait kar raha tha ki tum manaogi! Tumhe jaise GK se pata chalega ki main Rajkot me hoon, mujhe phone karke mana logi. Yeh hi socha tha."
Anupama couldn't believe herself.
"Aur maine soch liya ki maine aapki baat maanne se saaph mana kar diya isiliye aap naraj hokar chale gaye! Ya aapko sach me mujh par.. saq hone laga hai. Mujhe kya pata ki aap toh mere bare me soch rahe the! Jab ek din nikal gaya aur phone nahi aaya, message bhi nahi toh mera saq aur bhi pakka ho gaya! Aapko.. yaad toh main bhi.. kar rahi thi! Cabin me akele baith nahi pa rahi thi!"
"Toh khudse call kyun nahi kiya, Anu?"
"Himmat nahi hui! Socha bahut lekin.. jo man me tha woh bol nahi payi. Aapke phone ka intejaar karti rahi ki.. kab aapka gussa thanda hoga, aap phone karenge aur main aapko mana lungi! Sori mujhe kehna tha lekin.. yeh chahti thi ki aap pehel kare, bolo!"
"Main tumhe guilt ke mare call nahi kar paya."
"Guilt.. kis baat ka?"
"Tumne mujh par bharosa kar ke apna personal matter mere saath share kiya. Lekin maine line cross kar di! Anjane me hi sahi, tumhari family ke against, bachchon ke against bol diya. Kuch aisa keh diya jisse tumhe apni qabiliyat/potential pe shaq ho gaya. Tumhe apni hi nazron me kamzor mehsoos karvane ka guilt mehsoos hua mujhe! Shayad mujhe is mamle me bolna hi nahi chahiye tha! Yeh hi sab sochne laga."
He paused briefly to compose himself.
"Laga ki kuch din tum se door rahunga toh tum independently decisions le paogi. Office me tumhari kya jagah hai, kya ehmiyat hai yeh bhi samajhogi. GK toh honge hi guide karne ke liye par akele sab sambhalogi toh tumhara self confidence pehle jaisa ho jayega. Phir.. tumhara khud par se shaq door ho jayega! Yeh hi.. sochkar chup raha. Roz wait karta raha ki tum call ya message karogi. Par.. tumhara voice note sunne ke bad aur chup nahi raha ja raha tha! Call karne ki koshish ki par bhavuk ho gaya aur nahi kar paya! Isiliye message kiya. Kanhaji ni krupa thai!Jis din baat karne ki sochi us din tum khud hi aa gayi! "
She cupped his face.
"Itna kuch socha, itni parvah ki meri.. Lekin roj phone kiya Samar ko!"
"Tumhe.. kaise pata chala?"
Anupama tells him about her conversation with Samar and the voicenote.
"Not fair Anu! Not fair at all! Samar ne bhi mera promise tod diya aur mujhe kuch bataya bhi nahi!"
"Aapne jo kiya woh phair tha? Meri khabar roj poochh li lekin apni khabar nahi di!"
"GK ko di na! Pata tha woh tumhe bata denge."
"Par Samar ko mujhe nahi batane diya!"
"Woh.. Galti ho gayi mujhse.. So sorry!"
"Waise Samar ko maine hi aapko batane se mana kiya tha ki mujhe pata chal gaya hai."
"Aur main yahaan soch raha tha ki main unfair ho raha hoon! Maine tumhari aawaaz sun li lekin tum nahi sun payi."
Anupama tells holds her ears.
"Sori! Bahot, bahot, bahot sori! Aur promise, agli bar main aise.. baat puri kiye bina, aapki baat samjhe bina uthkar nahi jaungi!"
He holds his ears as well.
"Main bhi utna hi sorry! Agli bar main bhi dhyan rakunga ki kab, kya kehna hai aur aise bina bataye kahin nahi jaunga!"
"Aapko jo bhi kehna ho aap kahiye. Chahe loan wali baat hi kyun na ho! Ab main bura nahi manungi!"
He wrapped his arms around her.
"Apni tabiyat ka dhyan rakho na. Thoda sa loan ka pressure reduce karogi toh extra classes toh nahi lene padenge. Bachhhe kamane lage hain aur woh tumhe support kar sakte hain."
"Tosu ki naukri chali gayi hai. Kinjal se main paise kaise le sakti hoon? Samar ki sadi bhi nahi hui hai. Tab uske paise kam aayenge."
"Itni mahan mat bano, Anu! Sab kuch apne upar le logi toh ek din fatigue se gir padogi! Vanraj ka kya hai?! Woh kya sirf tane marne ke liye hai?! Us se uska contribution mango!"
"25 salon tak woh kam kar rahe the aur main ghar par thi. Ab main kam kar rahi hoon aur unke pass kam nahi hai toh.."
"Toh kya!? 25 salon tak ghar, family aur bachchon ki responsibility nibhai na tumne?"
"Ha nibhayi. Par.. paise nahi kamaye."
"Usne nahi kamane diye aur tumhe dabaakar rakha! Padhai nahi karne di, kam nahi karne diya, normal social life nahi jeene di, self confident, independent nahi banne diya isiliye tum ghar par rahi! Decision uska tha lekin smartly usne blame pura tum par dal diya!"
He ground his teeth in sheer frustration.
"That mann..! Aaj tak bahot bar mera man kiya ki hockey nikalu aur uska sir phod doon! Kisi din sach me phod dunga!"
"Saant ho jaiye Annuuj!" She rubbed his back.
"Jab tak usse tumhara rishta tha tumne sab seh liya par ab mat saho! Apni savings, apni health, apne future ke bare me socho! Baat ghoom phir ke finally tumhari salary par aa gayi. Agla mahina shuru hone se pehle hi yeh baat ghar pe clear kar dena!"
"Ha. Bata dungi."
He let out an exasperated sigh.
"Isse zyada gyaan main nahi de sakta!"
"Dena bhi mat varna aapka naam 'Anupam' Kapadia padh jayega!"
"Ya, right! Tumhara gyaan dene ka copyright infringe ho jayega!"
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"Annu.. Agli bar mujhse itne dino tak naraz mat rehna, upar upar se bhi nahi!"
He ran his fingers through her hair while stroking her back.
"Aap bhi mat rehna! Haq se mujhe daant dena!"
She warped her arms around his neck. "Waise bhi aapka raudra swarup/angry avatar toh main dekh chuki hoon! Bhumi pujan se dekh rahi hoon!"
"Areh, tumne toh kuch dekha hi nahi hai, meri jaan!"
"Toh dikhaiye ne! Matlab.. college me hockey se acsan (action) karne wale hero Anuj ke bare me toh bataiye mujhe!"
"Sab bataunga. Pehle tum batao, aaj back hug karte waqt haath kyun hata liye?"
"Woh.. hospital wala din yaad aa gaya. Aapki shwas/saas chadh rahi thi par main.. kuch kar nahi pa rahi thi! Maro jeev adhdhar thai gayo hato/Meri jaan nikal rahi thi!"
He shushed her when she started crying.
"Annuuuu! Bas havey! Apne dimag se yeh baat nikal do! Ab main bilkul theek hoon. Doctor ne bhi bol diya hai na? Ab aur kaise tumhe yaqeen dilaun? Batao."
"Aap promise kariye.."
"Nah! Aisa promise main kabhi nahi karunga! Jahan baat tumhari safety ki ho wahan main kisi ki stupidity ko tolerate nahi karunga!"
"Annuujjj!.."
"Ek bar mujhe ladte huye dekh liya toh tumhara yeh haal hai! Phir kehti ho college wale Anuj ke bare me bataiye!"
"Achchha, ab chup rahungi! Aap boliye ne.."
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Hope you like this part.

Cheers,

Noorie

Part 12 on pg 39

Tagging some more Friends

Its good that real problems are also being talked about...❤

Hayeeeee 😭😭😭❤️....kyaa nehi hain tumhare story main yr😍🥰... finally loan ki baat kisine toh uthai😳...uff their promises on not leaving each other like that again🤧💖... update soon ☺️ please monday se pehle kardena 😁

Love it. 👌👌👌

Thank you Noorie, for this Anuj 😘

I am so glad, you touched on this loan topic. This was so so needed, only Anuj can give some buddhi to this mahaan uff gadhi Anupama.

I feel when someone thinks these minute details and care about you, that's true love. It's not about roses and romantic dates.... Anuj's love is so rare and so pure..❤️

Haha, that CSR event, wow, my smart, sassy, suave Anuj is here.

And last but not least.. thank you for retaining the Angry Anuj, good promise nahi kiya...ek din us TrashRaj pe wo hockey zaroor use karna...

Chalo ab Monday ka intezaar rahega.

Thanks Noorie

Bahut sudar likha hai. Small small details you cover are the beauty of your creation. It looks real because of that. So many more important things are there to take care of. I like this Anuj better as a smart business man.

Thanks for the tag girl.❤️