Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 19

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Posted: 3 years ago

akjdjalhlkhadlkhfkf!! *squeals at the sheer soft™️ hooman that Aryan is*

Gosh, I really am kaaafi in love with Aryan in general but here in this story, that love specifically jumps out. You're genuinely so so good with stories that deal with human emotions; evolving, adapting, but also steadfast where needed.

At the risk of sounding like a broken record, I'd still say this, but the DOMESTICITY that they exhibit is so darn adorable!!!!! Throw Neel into the mixture and it gets even better. Love, love, looveddd Aryan's interactions with Neel, and looking forward to more in the next updates. ❤️

p.s. THANK YOUUU for the Aryan pov in chapter 5! It made me fall like x10 more for him, but his love for Imlie is so beautiful!!! The fact that he tried his best not to intervene with her decision (knowing fully that he could steer it) removed any doubts that ever popped up about their progression feeling slightly maneuvered by him. And, Imlie didn't see it coming, but that one altered condition is gonna make her go weak in the knees sooner than even Aryan saw it coming 😁

p.p.s manila envelope hmm, seen that float around a couple of times, what's cooking there?

(might turn into a silent reader for the next couple of weeks, but these morning updates really do make my day, and would make sure I let you know that every chance I get 💗)

Edited by peculiaris - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

I love this so much!!!


You’ve stayed true to who both Aryan and Imlie are, what they’d be like in love, the care they have for one another, the quiet understanding, they already have but deeper and more comfortable when they’re in love.

This last chapter, uff my heart. The way Aryan just accepts little Neel, because Neel isn’t his parents, he’s an innocent child that’s done nothing wrong. Plus, if Imlie love Neel then there’s no question that Aryan will too. His quiet thoughtfulness when thinking about what Neel would need to be comfortable.

I do also like that Imlie’s relationship with Malini is being focused on here. They don’t have a good history but it’s times like these that you realize. I appreciate that Imlie has forgiven her, not just because Malini needs it but because Imlie has no reason not to.

Like I said, all of it is so true to character. I have no doubt that Aryan wouldn’t step up to protect and fight for those that Imlie loves, even if he had no reason to. It would be reason enough that she loves them.

I can’t wait until the next update. Bravo again!!! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

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Posted: 3 years ago

It was heart warming. Aryan's bond with neel is a delight to watch. Aryan teased Imlie with his punishment.❤️😆loved this chapter.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeee re mori Sita maiyaaaaaa

I am totally loving this version of Aryan Singh Rathore and Imaliya

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: peculiaris

akjdjalhlkhadlkhfkf!! *squeals at the sheer soft™️ hooman that Aryan is*

Gosh, I really am kaaafi in love with Aryan in general but here in this story, that love specifically jumps out. You're genuinely so so good with stories that deal with human emotions; evolving, adapting, but also steadfast where needed.

At the risk of sounding like a broken record, I'd still say this, but the DOMESTICITY that they exhibit is so darn adorable!!!!! Throw Neel into the mixture and it gets even better. Love, love, looveddd Aryan's interactions with Neel, and looking forward to more in the next updates. ❤️

p.s. THANK YOUUU for the Aryan pov in chapter 5! It made me fall like x10 more for him, but his love for Imlie is so beautiful!!! The fact that he tried his best not to intervene with her decision (knowing fully that he could steer it) removed any doubts that ever popped up about their progression feeling slightly maneuvered by him. And, Imlie didn't see it coming, but that one altered condition is gonna make her go weak in the knees sooner than even Aryan saw it coming 😁

p.p.s manila envelope hmm, seen that float around a couple of times, what's cooking there?

(might turn into a silent reader for the next couple of weeks, but these morning updates really do make my day, and would make sure I let you know that every chance I get 💗)

I will make sure I tag you, my friend given the busy schedule you keep. I love your comments. The Manila envelop surprise is coming up in the next chapter. Hopefully people will like it. This is how I envision Imlie becoming a confident woman with a well rounded personality. Some of these sections could be an OS on their own!

I would love to develop Aryan and Neel’s bond, let’s see if I can, I will write more about them,

Edited by mltr16 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: PreetD

I love this so much!!!


You’ve stayed true to who both Aryan and Imlie are, what they’d be like in love, the care they have for one another, the quiet understanding, they already have but deeper and more comfortable when they’re in love.

This last chapter, uff my heart. The way Aryan just accepts little Neel, because Neel isn’t his parents, he’s an innocent child that’s done nothing wrong. Plus, if Imlie love Neel then there’s no question that Aryan will too. His quiet thoughtfulness when thinking about what Neel would need to be comfortable.

I do also like that Imlie’s relationship with Malini is being focused on here. They don’t have a good history but it’s times like these that you realize. I appreciate that Imlie has forgiven her, not just because Malini needs it but because Imlie has no reason not to.

Like I said, all of it is so true to character. I have no doubt that Aryan wouldn’t step up to protect and fight for those that Imlie loves, even if he had no reason to. It would be reason enough that she loves them.

I can’t wait until the next update. Bravo again!!! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽


THANK YOU @PreetD! For taking a chance and reading their story.

Imlie and Malini’s closure was very important to me. The following are my views, not meant to offend anyone but my outlook on life…..and therefore death.

As a rule, I hate that families hold grudges and therefore ruin relationships. There must be a point where people should let go of those grudges, sometimes it is a grave illness or impending death, but I have witnessed people not being able to bring themselves to forgive and forget even at the end.


And that is how we remain in this eternal cycle of life and death. How many times have you met someone and connected instantly, like you have known them before or seen them before or the bond goes from 0 to 100 within hours. Imlie and Malini are like that, their debts to each other are old and unless both are willing to forgive and forget that karmic bond of Ill will and retribution will continue.

Imlie unknowingly is going to set both their souls free, if they meet again in another lifetime it will be an amicable relationship. To me that is the real Happily Ever After. This is only one chapter in their book of karmic relations.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awwwwww, this chapter cute.

Aru is right, c'mon birth them babies later, enjoyyyyyy now 😌😎

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: captain_waffle

Awwwwww, this chapter cute.

Aru is right, c'mon birth them babies later, enjoyyyyyy now 😌😎


Trust me having them later in life is a pain. One thinks because you are more. mature, so they will be better parents, but the sheer energy that child rearing requires, that has dwindled to like 60% of your twenties, by your mid thirties. The struggle to keep up is real!

But Aryan’s concerns are legit. It’s sweet that he actually reflects on pieces she has written about working mothers and is applying it to their life. Shaatir dimaag.

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Posted: 3 years ago

How wonderful .Aryan and Imlie’s healthy marriage with tons of spice .It was a great read .The intimacy has been penned down so well that I had to blush 🔥

Neel & Aryan -Looking forward to more .The icebreaking done in total male gender bonding style and ways .

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Posted: 3 years ago

I couldnt see the update?

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