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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 123

 

M-What?

 

G- I am confused

 

G-I really wanted to get married to you at some point

 

He is looking at her

 

M- You want to break up?

 

G- You already broke up with me

 

M-I never said that. You assumed that. I said I want a break, not break up

 

She rolls her eyes

 

G-See! See! That’s why. Marriage is a big step, big responsibilities. It requires commitment, transparency. You hardly share your feelings with me.... maybe you don’t trust me enough. I don’t blame you for that. You don’t have to justify yourself or your actions. But that’s how it is. So, I want to wait for the day when I gain that trust

 

M- I wanted to protect you!

 

G- I know! And the best way you thought of was to push me away. Isn’t it? This whole push pull might be exciting for an affair or a young relationship, but for marriage it needs stability

 

M- Then what do you want to do?

 

G- Don’t know, that’s why we are discussing this, isn’t it? I want this relationship to turn into marriage because we both want it that we...because we want to share our life with each other.... not any other reason like, we are staying in a live in for this long, ladki se aur kaun shaadi karega, blah blah blah

 

M- But I need you

 

G- You don’t. Right now, you need professional therapy...not me. I am not a rehabilitation center for your damaged emotions, I can support you to heal but you have the reins of your life in your hand, and you can choose to turn it any way you like. See; there is no taboo in therapy.... I need one and I am in one, and you need one and you should be in one. I want our relationship to be fulfilling and complete not symbiotic

 

She moves closer and holds his hand

 

G-I love you

 

He nods and looks down

 

M-I love you too

 

They keep looking into each other’s eyes for few moments

 

M-By the way, I have this for you

 

He produces the ring. This is the heirloom ring he got for her to propose. But ab aisa kuch ho nahi raha toh, phir bhi he wants her to keep the ring

 

M- Keep this with you

 

She takes it

 

G-Thanks. I will keep this with me

 

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Dono room se bahar nikalte hain

 

Mom dad bahar khade hain in anticipation

 

Kuch rishtedaar bhi ghar pe hain

 

Rishtedaar have expression like ‘ladke ke saath kamre thi!’, gossip mil gai gossip mil gai

 

Geet doesn’t give a damn

 

Maan looks around

 

M- Main pyaar karta hoon Geet se...shaadi karna chahta hoon

 

Rishtedaar go like- Kya??? Pyaar?

 

Mom looks at Geet, who was walking but had stopped hearing Maan

 

Mom-Geet?

 

M-Geet ...nahi karna chahti


G-Abhi...abhi nahi karna chahti

 

M-Abhi nahi karna chahti

 

Rishtedaar-Shaadi karni hai toh abhi hi karlo

 

Mom is trying to diffuse the situation

 

Mom-Khana lag gaya hai khana khaa lete hain

 

Khana laga diya, rishtedaar bhi chale gaye

 

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Dad-Shaadi karni hai toh abhi karlo

 

G-Abhi nahi karni hai

 

M-We have to sort few stuff

 

Mom-What stuff? Jo itne din saath rehke sort nahi hua woh ab kaise hoga?

 

M-Main Geet ke layak banna chahta hoon

 

Mom-tum doctor toh nahi ho, waise bhi uske layak kaise banoge

 

Dad-Architect toh hai naa

 

G-Maan ke ghar mein kuch problems hain toh abhi shaadi nahi kar sakte

 

Mom-Kya problem hai tumhare ghar pe?

 

Mom directs the question at Maan

 

Mom is not afraid or respectful of Maan just because of his money or status. She treats him like she would treat any guy of his age

 

G- Maan's mom recently passed away

 

Geet answers instead of Maan

 

Mom-Oh...I am sorry

 

She is remorseful


Mom-Nahi nahi .... koi baat nahi tum time lo....ek saal baad kar lenge

 

Dad-Haan haan

 

M-Thanks. Mujhe abb chalna chahiye

 

Mom-Tum ek kaam karo yahin ruk jao

 

G-Huh?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

 Geet able to make Maan understand he want treatment before getting marry both confess their love Maan gave their khandani ring to her 

 Geet family too confuse after knowing they want to get marry but not now so Geet told about his mom passed away 

 So Geet family said ok they can get marry after year so now Maan is their hone wala damad

Edited by sanum23 - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

I am glad that they finally spoke!

Now Hopefully they’ll sort out their problems and get together ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗😌🙏

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I must say I thought she was just waiting for a "I Love You". Girl you have his one foot in the house one foot out like I feel there is a tug go war going lol. Well at least they know they need to work on their relationship. Geets mom is funny can't figure out she likes or dislikes Maan

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Posted: 2 years ago

123

maan n geet's talk is productive

maan's truth n dismiss of his mother create different or change in view of geet's mother who ask maan to stay with them surprising geet 

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Posted: 2 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 123

Fabulous update..... terrifically written

glad that they had this discussion

at least they understand each other

Geet did have valid points

they both need to want to get married

liked how Geet explained to Maan about therapy

agree that their relationship should be fulfilling

loved that they confessed and that he gave her the ring

pleased that Maan told Geet's parents that he loves her and wants to marry her

great that he told them that Geet does not want to get married as yet

well Maan wants to be better for Geet

nice that her dad knows he is an architect

at least Geet revealed that Maan's mom passed away

so now the wedding can even take place after a year

wow Geet's mom told Maan to stay

Geet is indeed shocked

update soon 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Part 123 

Interesting turn of events !!! 👍🏼

Geet finally bursts & tells maan her thoughts ..... & she speaks wisely ..... marriage is not a game ..... it is a long term commitment...... & trust is the foundation of this commitment...... if maan can not trust geet enough to share his thoughts then the foundation of this relationship is rocky & they can not build a stable marriage on a rocky foundation b/c it will come crumbling down. 

Geet’s dad seems to like maan but geet’s mom not so much ...,. She even gives him attitude...... she sounds remorseful when she hears about the passing of his mom 

However she totally suprised me when she asked maan to stay there ?!?? Is she truly accepting him or is she upto something ??? 

Thank you for the remarkable update !!! 🤗


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Part 124

 

Mom-Nahi nahi .... koi baat nahi tum time lo....ek saal baad kar lenge

 

Dad-Haan haan

 

M-Thanks. Mujhe abb chalna chahiye

 

Mom-Tum ek kaam karo yahin ruk jao

 

G-Huh?

 

Dad-Haan ab toh rishta ho hi gaya hai toh...

 

G-Mummy, log kya kahenge...abhi toh shaadi

 

Mom-Humein kyun karni hai logon ki chintaa? Logon ki chinta kar rahi hoti naa main toh akeli beti ko bahar padhne nahi bhejti, sheher se bahar nahi rakhti, videsh nahi bhejti

 

Geet toh hairaan ho gai

 

Maan bhi hairaan hai

 

He thought uske parents small town conservative type honge. That’s the picture Geet painted

 

Saara middle class akad and psychological pressure Geet ko hi tha bas starting se. She made that her personality. Maybe coz of outside high society people influence in school college or initial work places

 

M-Geet, jaisa tumne kaha tha waise toh tumhare parents nahi hai

 

Geet parents-Kya kaha tha Geet ne?

 

Geet is like, ye Maan apna mooh nahi band rakh sakta?

 

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Maan ko guest room mein sula dete hain Geet ke parents

 

Subah- subah ma chatt pe jaati hai toh dekti hai Maan khada hai wahan

 

Mom-Tum?

 

M-emm..wo jet lag...neend nahi aa rahi thi

 

She nods mom

 

Mom-Kuch chahiye ho toh batana

 

Mom chatt pe kuch samaan rakh ke jaane lagti hai

 

M-Aap mujhe bilkul pasand nahi karti naa

 

She stops mid-way, and smiles to herself

 

Mom-Tumhe aisa kisne keh diya?

 

She turns to face Maan

 

He shrugs

 

Mom-Waise mujhe ye jaanke acha laga ki tumhe ye parwah hai ki main kya sochti hoon

 

Maan is silent

 

She walks towards Maan

 

Mom-Waise sach kahun....mujhe nahi pata main kya sochti hoon tumhare baare mein....

 

She sighs

 

Mom- Maine apni beti ko inn kuch hafton mein haste hue dekha hai, par uss hassi mein kahin khushi nahi thi...tumhare aane ke baad itne dino baad ek sukoon dikha hai mujhe uske chehre pe. Meri ek hi beti hai, sab ne kaha tha...bass ek hi beti...ek aur beta karlo...beti kya kar legi..., meri beti ne apni mehnat se sabka mooh band kiya...hamara sarr garv se uncha kar diya....bohot naaz hai humein apni beti pe

 

Mom-Mujhe ye naraazgi bhi thi ki aisa kaun hai jiski wajah se meri beti itna tadap rahi hai.....mujhe toh ye bhi yakeen tha tum nahi aoge....tum aaye usse main bohot confused hoon.

 

M-Main kaise nahi aata....mujhe toh aana hi tha...Geet yahan thi...mujhe toh aana hi tha

 

Mom- Mujhe pata hai tum saath mein rehte the....mujhe laga tum dno ka rishta utna tak hi hoga...aajkal ke bachche hain...Geet toh emotional hai...chupaati hai par bohot hai....

 

Maan nods

 

Mom-Waise ek baat kahun?

 

M-Hmm

 

Mom-Tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki tumhe kisi ki validation ki zarurat hai? Tumhe kisi ki validation ki koi zarurat nahi hai...naa meri na kisi aur ki....

 

M-Aap bade hain toh…

 

Mom-Haan hum bade hain....par bade bhi galtiyan karte hain....misjudge karte hain....bade bhi insaan hote hain...unko insaan hi rehne do....unse perfection expect mat karo...aur naa hi khud se karo

 

He nods

 

Mom starts to go

 

M-Aunty!

 

She stops

 

M-Main bass Geet ko khush rakhna chahta hoon

 

Mom-Main jaanti hoon isliye hum iss rishte ke liye raazi huye hain

 

Maan realizes, although hard on surface, Geet’s ultimately has her kid’s best interest in her heart... she is not prejudiced and actually very easy to get along with

 

He understands the contrast between his mother and Geet’s mother

 

He feels that people are multi-faceted, and he was wrong to think that he would turn up like his mum…he psychological burden reduces even further

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That was a sweet conversation between Maan and Geet’s mom ❤️ I really liked what she said about him not needing anyone’s validation!