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Part 121

 

M-I’ll hang around here then

 

Geet ki maa se ab dekha nahi jaa raha

 

Mom-Mr jo bhi…aap abhi yahan naashta karke jaiye…sight-seeing kariye. Hum log yaha ke functions se free hokar milte hain aapse aaram se. Looks like aapka nashta ho chuka hai.. fir...

 

She pulls away Maan ka ka plate... ki iska khana ho gaya

 

M-I am not-

 

G- Maan. Go

 

Maan looks at Geet’s dad ki kaisi biwi bachai hai tumharai

 

Geet’s ka dad feels caught in middle

 

He is afraid of Maan’s gangsta ways. He is afraid ki agar in dono par chid gaya toh this will force Maan to drop the nice guy mask and start shooting people maybe or at least start blackmailing people at gun point

 

Dad hurries over ki,

 

Dad- Arre! Abhi to pakode nahi khaye inhone. Tum dono bhi abhi aise hi ho? Taiyaar nahi hona hai kya? Chalo chalo! Jaldi naha lo…baad mei bathroom bhi free nahi milega. Main tum logo ka naashta room mein bhijwata hoon

 

He turns to Maan

 

Dad- Khurana saab aap .. cooffee.. coffee aur lata hoon main…aap baithiye. Ye cooler ki hawa aa rahi hai na aapko? Ye mei fan extra lagwata hoon idhar ek. Chotu!!

 

Dad- Haan bhai sab log. Adhe ghante mein ready hokar xyz location ke liye nikalna hai. Jaldi karo, bhai!

 

Geet ki mum wants to kick Maan out still

 

But ultimately Geet ko smajha ki scene avoid karne ke liye let her dad deal with Maan. Maybe he can get through to him

 

Geet ma ko pakad kar andar le gai

Everyone goes back to hurrying up…jitna masala expect kiya mila nahi

 

Andar Geet ki maa usko suna rahi hai

 

Ma- Ye! Ye pasand aaya hai tumko? Ye ladka?

 

Geet bhag li andar shower mein ki kuch sunai nahi de raha lalalalalala

 

Geet ki mom ko ladke se ye extra problem hai ki wo doctor nahi hai, gunda type hai, sanskari nahi hai, manners bhi lacking hain, badon ko izzat kaise dete hain Maan ko nahi aata. Koi namaste yaa charansparsh nahi. High class snobby attitude

 

More or less the same problems and misconceptions Geet had about Maan in the beginning

 

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Ye ladkiya andar ayi to Maan ne bhi muh khol kar thoda effort kiya and invited Geet’s dad to sit, relax, have tea with him

 

He saw the man flitting around managing everything and everyone

 

Geet ke dad was also nervous ki do ko chup karaya ab ye teesra naa bhadakne lage

 

Surprisingly Maan doesn’t say anything else to him

 

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Sab log ab taiyaar hokar nikal rahe hain

 

Unknowingly Maan ki gaadi mei bhi 4-5 logo ko fit kar diya ki chalo ab sab log xyz location chalenge jaldi-jaldi

 

Maan ko bhi nahi pata how he ended up chauffeuring car for unknown people

 

Khana kha kar Maan bhi bheed mein bahar nikal raha tha

 

Old dadi relative- Beta, mera purse pakadna

 

Maan ne apni gaadi ka gate khola tha (suv types)

 

Dadi- Arre beta, ye gaadi to unchi hai, isne main nahi jaa pungi. Sonuuuuuuuu!!! Aaja. Tu, Chintu aur Babli isme aajao. Main wo kaali wali mein baithti hoon

 

And tells Maan ki

Dadi- Haan bachchon ko dhyan se le aana beta

 

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Geet bahar nikali, didn't see Maan. Assumed he left

 

Sab log jaldi mein the

 

Wo bhi nikal li

 

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Maan chup chaap gaadi chala kar jaldi pouhauncha

 

Toh logon ne kaha ki beta aur log wait kar rahe hain. Tum unko le ao jakar wapas

 

Maan wants to say no, lekin itni der mei uski gaadi mei daabe load ho gaye hain ki ye jab rishtedar log jayenge toh unko dena hai.

 

Abhi Geet ke ghar unload hoga ye saamaan

 

Abhi Maan had to go back 2-3 times

 

Yahi sab confusion mein sab logon ke samne Geet ko call karne ya message karne ko bhi nahi hua

 

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Finally, thaka haara, kaam poora hua…people pulled him ki chalo lunch lag gaya

 

Khana kha raha tha

 

Geet ki maa sees and she can't believe her eyes

 

What kind of chep cockroach type personality is this!!!

 

Maa wants to go and confront him, but she is surrounded by bride side relatives saying bye-bye

 

But Geet’s dad found out

 

Last trip to unhone he lagwayi thi Maan ki for petty revenge for giving him psychological burden and the property issue that happened long back and for dating his daughter without his permission

 

Ab dad ne mom ko bataya ki Maan abhi bhi yahan hai, usne hi saara kaam kiya aur abhi lunch area mein dekha usse

 

Mom -Haan mujhe pata hai. Ye kaisa chupku hai!

 

Inki conversation Geet ne sunn li jo inn sab cheezon se bekhabar thi

 

She rushes to the food area

 

She sees ki Maan haath mein plate leke bass nivaala lene hi jaa raha hai

 

Aas paas uske rishtedaar bhi hain

 

She rushes to him and takes the plate off his hand and keeps it aside and pulls him into a khopcha

 

Maan ko khopche mein le gai and she hangs onto him planting a kiss

 

She is overwhelmed ki isko main soch rahi thi ki, he will look down upon me for being middle class...now he is in worst family situation ever...aise situation mein toh main khud pareshaan ho jaati hoon...phir bhi he is nonchalant

 

Dhup hai ki garmi...yaa her emotions but her face has turned red

 

He smiles, putting a loose strand of her hair behind her ear

 

M-I missed you

 

She nods

 

G- I love you

 

He grins

 

M-So will you marry me?

 

She shakes her head

 

He frowns ki ye kya hai

 

M-You won’t marry me?

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Part 120 

Now I know where geet gets her craziness from 😆....... her mommie dearest 

And why is maan acting like such a Duffus?? 

The only one that seems a bit sensible is geet’s dad 

I don’t think that geet’s mom will approve now that she knows he is gun yielding boyfriend. 

Thank you 🤗

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WOW he is impressing his in laws but his MIL is being the villain here lol. Bechara stuck amongst people he doesn't know but is doing everything for his love but WTF say you love her jeez otherwise iske nakhre nahi katam honge.

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Aww. Poor Maan made to work. Someone who has or lifted a finger till now. Crazy family. Dad taking his own revenge by making Maan do another trip 

also very interesting that Maan actually likes all this food and is eating without any complains 


but of course geets family never seen To allow him to finish any meal 

adorable how geet is so impressed by him and kisses him too. But is she still refusing to marry him 


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Part 121

Yeah !!!

Maan passes the test & geet is happy that he is not looking down on her relatives 

& the secret kiss 😘 

But I am guessing she is saying no to marriage b/c he did not propose properly ?? 

Thank you 🤗

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Gosh such a crazy 🤪 couple made for each other 😁 

Bechara Maan family drama mein phas gaya 😄

Chalo Geet tho impress hogayi 😎

Waiting for next 😁 

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Thanks for updating so soon


Part 121

Stupendous update..... well written

So Geet's dad intervened

of cos her mom wants to kick Maan out

as expected Geet's mom blasts her on her choice

she has already judged Maan without knowing him

at least Maan told Geet's dad to relax and have tea with him

so Maan ended up playing chauffeur to the relatives 

looks like her dad is happy but her mom is yet to be impressed 

well Geet does not see Maan and thinks he left

glad that Geet heard her parents convo

liked how Geet pulled Maan away and kissed him

great that he told her that he missed her

why did he not confess that he loves her?

not surprised that she confessed that she loves him

loved that he asked to marry him

not surprised that she refused

does it have to do with the fact that he did not confess his feelings again and did not propose?


update soon

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121

superb update

maan got kiss as reward after doing 2 -3 trips to server the gust maintaining cool 

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 Geet get to know how her family made Maan work she get overwhelmed she ran to him and pulled him aside and kissed him but when he asked for marriage she denied y she joking with him or she serious

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Part 122

 

M-I missed you

 

She nods

 

G- I love you

 

He grins

 

M-So will you marry me?

 

She shakes her head

 

He frowns ki ye kya hai

 

M-You won’t marry me?

 

G-No

 

M-Why? You are marrying someone else?

 

G-No

 

Tab tak maa baap aa jaate hain

 

Mom-Tumse kaha tha naa shaam ko aane ko...tum...hamari society mein izzat hai!!

 

Maan is like ki, har galti meri kyun ho jaati hai

 

Mom-Geet! Ghar chalo

 

M- Main chod deta hoon

 

Geet nudges him ki, go-go

 

Geet Maan ko bhaga deti hai ki shaam ko aana

 

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Maan ko time nahi bataya

 

Toh woh aa gaya 6 baje

Ghar ke andar ghusa toh dekha, Geet dining table pe baithke maggi khaa rahi hai

 

M-Arre! You are again eating all these unhealthy foods. Tum doctor ho yaa...

 

Geet frowns

 

M- Hypocrisy ki bhi seema hoti hai

 

Udhar se maa ki awaaz aati hai

 

Ma-Geet...tune phir se maggi khaayi!

 

Maa aati hai Geet ko daantne....

 

Ma- Saara din maggi khaati rehti hai!

 

Maa notices Maan there

 

Ma-Tum phir se idhar aa gaye!

 

G-Yaar mummy shaam ko bhook lagi thi

 

Maa Geet ke sarr pe marr ke chali gai

 

Then to Maan she says,

 

Ma-Tum baitho.  Chaaye piyoge?

 

Maan was smiling ki Geet ko maar pari, maa ko dekh ke serious ho gaya

 

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Ab baithke chai pii rahe hain sab, but silence hai…kaun kya baat kare

 

Dad- Arre aap pakode lijiye, Mr Khurana

 

M-Thanks....wo...aap mujhe Maan keh sakte hain. By the way, ye main laaya tha

 

Mom-Mithai? Kyun?

 

M-Woh...Mona ne kaha tha

 

G-Mona...cousin hai

 

Dad-Mithai laane ki kya zarurat thi

 

M- Mona ne kaha, shubh kaam ke liye...

 

Mom-Kaunsa shubh kaam?

 

M-Shaadi

 

Dad- Shaadi pe toh aapne bohot kaam kiya hai, aur shaadi toh hamare ghar mein thi toh mithai toh humein khilaani chahiye

 

M- Nahi nahi, I meant hamari shaadi.

 

He says pointing at Geet and himself

 

Mom- Par Geet toh keh rahi thi usse shaadi nahi karni

 

Maan looks at Geet

 

M-Aapko shayad nahi pata...we are in a relationship...

 

G-Wo....mujhe iss baare mein tumse baat karni hai, Maan

 

G-Akele mein

 

She adds

 

Geet starts walking, Maan gets up to follow

 

Ma- Kahan jaa rahi ho?

 

G-Kamre mein, yahan baat karenge kya?

 

Ma-Par...

 

G-Kya??? Main 15 saal ki bachchi hoon kya?

 

Maa looks away

 

She takes him to her room

 

M-Tum mujse shaadi nahi karna chahti?

 

She sighs


M-What?

 

G- I am confused

 

G-I really wanted to get married to you at some point

 

He is looking at her

 

M- You want to break up?

 

G- You already broke up with me

 

M-I never said that. You assumed that. I said I want a break, not break up

 

She rolls her eyes