Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Part 117

 

Mom-Dekhiye, aapko hamari beti se kya kaam....dekhiye woh toh yahan bass...aapko jo chahiye wo hum de denge....but hamari beti ko aap....

 

Maan ko over reaction samajh nahi aa raha ki aisa kya keh diya usne

 

Tab tak khusur pusur mein kisi ne Geet ko bhi bata diya ki aisa hua hai, tumhara naam le raha hai

 

Geet aayi ki, mom dad ko kaun pareshaan kar raha hai

 

She is in a blue lehenga, with a golden transparent shimmery dupatta

 

She half ran picking her lehenga to rescue her parents from the unknown stranger who was bothering them

 

She runs towards her mom dad and stops mid-way seeing Maan there

 

Maan notices Geet

 

M-Geet

 

He utters with relief

 

She walks towards him, mom dad try and stop ki,

 

‘Andar jao!’

 

Geet shows them the hand ki, i will handle this...don’t worry

 

She walks to the side and Maan follows

 

G-Tum? Yahan?

 

She is still in shock seeing Maan

 

Maan is opening and closing is mouth like a fish

 

He wants to say so much, yet nothing is coming out, also she looks so pretty

 

M-Yeah…yeah...you look really beautiful...like...really

 

He grabs some water from the passing waiter, gulps it down

 

Geet is waiting with her arms crossed and lightly tapping her feet

 

Maan finishes the water

 

Now looks at Geet

 

M-emmm...the water was great...thank you

 

He says towards the waiter

 

Geet had enough

 

Mudh ke jaane lagti hai

 

Maan grabs her elbow

 

She turns

 

Then he realizes after hearing gasps from people ki nahi karna chahiye tha

 

Geet gives him a stare

 

M-Lets go outside and talk....please

 

She follows him

 

He thinks ki, kamre mein baat karna was more private but he re-thought ki kamra bolega toh people around with gasp more.

 

As if they weren’t staying together (uski sly smile)

 

G-Why are you smiling?

 

Geet snaps

 

He wonders, was he really smiling?

 

M-No...I..

 

G-Just write an email or something...ghar mein shaadi hai....I need to go

 

M-No!

 

She stops

 

M-Kiski...shaadi hai?

 

He asks sheepishly

 

She points to the board, ki saamne likha hai and why is he even interested

 

G-Saari free ki information le li auntyyon ki tarah? Ab jao

 

M-Why are you mean to me? Man!

 

G-What?????? I mean to you???

 

G-Arghhhh!!

 

G-Jao yahan se warna gamla phenk ke maarungi!

 

M-Whattt?

 

He says putting his arms in front of his face in a defense mode

 

Geet is looking for her gamla

 

M-Main toh bass tumhe propose karne aaya tha.....tumhare ghar walon se milne aaya tha as Mona & Lisa ne kaha ki that’s the right thing to do...aur tum ho ki

 

She stops

 

He straightens up

 

Geet achanak se feet pe heel se maarke, walks away

 

M- Oou!!! Ooou!!! Oooouuu!!!

 

Langdi taang

 

Geet rambo walk mein ghar mein ghusi and walked on inside

 

Mom Dad ne pucha kya hua

 

G- Idiot!

 

She muttered

 

Mom Dad bewildered

 

Waise bhi woh pehle se hi pareshaan the, shaadi mein Geet aur uske parents ko hazaar baar sunne mila tha ki...’beti is over 30 shaadi karado, shaadi karaado’

 

Mom Dad ab aur pareshaan ki

 

‘inko (Maan) hamari beti se kya chahiye, ye bade powerful log hote hain’

 

Kuch younger cousins haste haste aaye ki

 

‘Uss powerful bande ko toh Geet didi ne peet diya’

 

Mom Dad- Kya? Peet diya? Aur wo bhi peet gaya?

 

Mom-Hye Ram! Ye Geet bhi naa, ab naajaane wo kya karega...kaise badla lega

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Chapter 116 

Aww geet returns to India 

But maan follows 😃..... thst’s Our boy 

However there is a wedding, fortunately it is not geet’s but maan does not know that 

Geet’s father recognizes him ..... we have come full circle now 

Hoping that maan asks for geet’s hand in marriage ..... fingers crossed 

Thank you 🤗

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Chapter 117 

Maan is tongue tied seeing his beauty 

But geet’s heel rectified that 😆

That was the lamest proposal I have ever heard 

But hoping that geet’s parents might help patch these two up ...... it is s long shot but you never know

Thank you 🤗

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117

wonderful update

geet beat maan with heel for the way he propose her 

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nice update I liked Geet attitude and also understand the worries of geet's parents but best line  was "‘Uss powerful bande ko toh Geet didi ne peet diya’"

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 Geet beat Maan for proposing her like this hope her parents patch up between them  but now listening about Geet beat him they were worried bz he is powerful and he again try to take revenge for Geet misbehave

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Part 117

Phenomenal update.... marvelously written

Geet is shocked seeing Maan

Maan indeed does not know what to say

at least he complimented her

Geet is frustration

great that she agreed to speak to him

Maan's thoughts well portrayed

so Geet was formal with Maan

Oops wrong way to propose

Geet's act was justified

as expected everyone is talking about what happened

Maan needs to do damage control

will her parents intervene


update soon

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part 116

Geet took care of him until he was well and then left. Maan decided to follow this time.

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Maan got a bit of a shock thinking Geet was getting married.

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Geet is on her way to rescue her parents from the stranger.