FF: Dooriyan aur Nazdeekiyan part 31 pg 116 - Page 2

Originally posted by: tanu90

Thank you so much! Angry anuj is such a welcome change na! I mean kabhi toh usko bhi daat khane ki jagah daatne ka mauka, manane ki jagah roothne ka mauka milna chahiye!

Thanks for tagging others! 

but in other shows male ko gussa karne ka koi haq nahi hota kyunki uski sahi baat bhi is tarah bulwayi jati h usse ki wo janwar lagta h villain lagta male lead nahi 

and fl ka jhadoo se marna bhi funny ho jata h uski har galat cheej bhi bechari aur uske aasuon ke peeche chupa di jati h ye itv ka rule h jo sadiyo se chala aa raha hamesha chalta rahega i think

i hope is show mein aisa kuch na ho

Hi Noorie, loved this  such a cute fic, love all the roothana between the both of them and I hope next time we'll get a super cute plan that where Anu will manao Anuj. I'm also curious about why they're fighting, so I'm excited to read the next one!

Fabulously Written 🙌❤️.. update soon the nxt part 

Oh this is so cute! I love the idea of Anu like this. Her having to get to Anuj etc will be so cute. 

Great setup! 

Amazing. Anu and Anuj ke beech ye restlessness pehli baar dikh raha hai warna show pe pata nhi kab hoga. Eagerly waiting for next part and this is a great plot btw. 

You are a newbie so u cant tag ppl now but once you cross 50 posts you will be able to tag and share links also

Swagat che forum par. very well written and the restlessness is so endearing. i love the fact that she is not awkward about it with her son. 

send her to Rajkot asap and ask her to bring some bandhni silk please 😆

loved the songs used, gori radha is a craze here in Baroda during Navratri, now on it will remind me of MaAn.

Also my fav for them is tari madmeethi madmeethi vate maru man mohi lidhu..😛❤️

Originally posted by: iamcurious

Swagat che forum par. very well written and the restlessness is so endearing. i love the fact that she is not awkward about it with her son. 

send her to Rajkot asap and ask her to bring some bandhni silk please 😆

loved the songs used, gori radha is a craze here in Baroda during Navratri, now on it will remind me of MaAn.

Also my fav for them is tari madmeethi madmeethi vate maru man mohi lidhu..😛❤️

Swagat badal tamaro aabhar! Thank you so much dear for the kind words! Believe it or not Rajkot bandhani and Patan patola are going to be a part of this SS. Gori radha is a craze here in Amdavad too. And I've been thinking of MaAn while hearing any and every song these days. I love madmeethi too! It's sad they haven't used much of Gujarati culture song/dance poetry in the show. Instead of that jalebi fafda thing on Dussera I wish they would've included some nice song/poetry.

Excited for next update 

Welcome Noorie

Beautiful work..

Such a nice plot and so well written.

This roothna manana, that too with Anuj going away lovely..

Please continue, waiting for next update.

Thank you for reading, liking and commenting on the FF!  I'm sorry I couldn't reply to all the comments but I loved each one! 

Part 2

Though Anupama was skeptical about going to Rajkot, the thought of meeting Anuj in a different setting, away from home and workplace was too tempting to dismiss. 

Samar had to shake her shoulder to get her attention.

"Aapko sirf Anuj k bare me sochkar smile karna hai ya.. unse milne jana bhi hai!?"

"Chup! Anuj k bare me.. nahi soch rahi thi!" she lied. "Bol ne, kya plan hai?"

"Surprise dena hai! Lekin sirf Anuj ko nahi, kisi aur ko bhi!"

"Kisi aur ko matlab.. GK kaka bhi.. saath me.. aayenge kya?"

Samar heard the disappointment in her voice and decided to end the suspense.

"Main, aap aur mama buddy kal subha volvo se moti baa se milne Jamnagar jayenge. Jamnagar toh Rajkot se do hi ghante door hai na?"

Anupama nodded, trying to make sense of the plan.

"Yeh surprise hoga moti baa ke liye! Aap unk liye kuch achcha sa banakar le chalna. Hum unk saath lunch karenge. Phir mama buddy kuch dino ke liye unke pass ruk jayenge aur hum dono dopeher ki bus se Rajkot aa jayenge."

"Aur tu ghar pe kya bolega ki humein Rajkot kyun jana hai?"

"Main kahunga ki hum Pinakin se milne ja rahe hain. Aur agle din subha humein Chotila jakar Mataji ke darshan hain toh Rajkot me raat ko rukna hi achchha hoga. Phir agli sham ko hum Ahmedabad k liye nikal jayenge."

"Matlab.. hume milvane ke liye tune khud ko,   Mataji, mamaji, moti ba.. sabko saamil kar liya, aem/aisa!?"

"Achcha hai na mummy! Mataji ke darshan na sahi, thoda punya hi mil jayega humein!"

"Matlab.. tu mere saath Chotila nahi aayega?"

"Maine toh mandir dekha hai. Aap Anuj ko dikhana! Itne saalon tak woh US me the. Kya pata us se pehle unhone yeh mandir dekha hoga ya nahi!?"

Anupama pinched his cheek. 

"Maro dahyo chhokro/Mera sayana beta!"

"Aap ba ke saamne kamzor mat padhna mummy! Agar unko is trip se koi bhi problem hui toh main unko apne tareeqe se handle karunga! Aap bas mera saath dena, theek hai?"

"Pakka!"

"Partnership me dono partners ka baraabari ka haq hona chahiye na?"

And just like that the smile disappeared from her face. 

"Tu aisa kyun poochh raha hai?"

"Kyunki aapke alava bhi koi hai jo almost dus dino se aapki aawaaz sunna chahtein hain!"

"Nahi Samar! Main.."

She swallowed several gulps before speaking again. 

"Mujhe baat karni hoti toh main.. tab hi kar leti ne jab Anuj ka phone aaya tha. Mujhse.. nahi hoga! Main ro padhungi toh.. woh ghabra jayenge!"

"Baat kiye bina hi, indirectly aapki aawaaz un tak pahucha doon toh..? Unki pareshaani kam ho jayegi aur aapki mushqil nahi badhegi."

"Par.. kaise?"

"Batata hoon. Pehle hum academy ki location dekh lein?"

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As expected, ba was totally against the idea of including Rajkot in the trip. 

"Meri ba ko kaisa lagega? Yeh Samar toh naadaan hai par Anupama, tujhe bhi meri baa ki bhavna ka khayal nahi aaya?! Tu kya utni door bas bhailu ko chhodne aur khana pahuchane ja rahi hai?!"

"Nahi ba.."

Anupama immediately felt guilty. 

"Kam se kam do din toh ruko uske pass toh usko bhi achcha lagega. Us hi din Rajkot kyun jana hai?"

"Par ba mummy ko office aur mujhe academy ka kaam dekhna hai na.. Do din nahi ruk payenge."

"Toh Rajkot mat jao! Agli bar chale jana!"

Anupama gave a pleading look to Samar who,in turn, gave the same look to bapuji. 

"Areh Leela, jara samajh. Hum sab saath me jayenge na Jamnagar! Ek bar Mataji ke darshan ka kehkar yeh nahi jayenge toh kya baa ko ya Mataji ko khushi hogi?"

Ba made a face before making a statement.

"Theek hai. Rajkot jana lekin kal nahi, parso subha chale jana. Phir darsan ke bad wapis aa jana."

"Par maine Pinakin ko already bol diya hai. Woh meri raah dekh raha hai."

"Teri?" Ba exclaimed suspiciously.

"Matlab.. humari.."

"Bhaley. Anupama, ab tu Rajkot ja hi rahi hai toh jara Nandini k liye bandhani saree lekar aana. Uski sagaai me kaam aayegi. Aur mere liye Patan patola saree lana!"

"Theek chhe baa!"

Kinjal gave a box to Anupama. 

"Isme pain relief balm aur bandage hai, mummy. Aaj aapko Samar ki bike par baithne me problem ho rahi thi. Chotila me toh bahut sari seedhiyan hain. Aapko iski zaroorat padhegi."

"Don't worry bhabs! Woh akeli nahi hongi wahaan, unka sahara hoga unke saath!"

Anupama smacked his arm while chiding "Dodh dahyo/oversmart!"

"I know Samar! Par bus me chadhte time agar mummy ko knee pain hua toh woh.."

"Kinjal, woh balm ki badboo pure bus me phail jayegi! Koi so nahi payega! Aur.. bus me bandage kaise?.."

"Curtain hoga na mummy! Curtain kheechkar bandh lena!"

"Kai jaroor nathi/Koi zaroorat nahi hai!"

Samar made a silent prayer for his mother. 

"Dhyan rakhjo Kanhaji! Mummy bus me bandage lagane se itna sharma rahi hai. Jab unko Anuj se apne man ki baat kehni hogi toh pata nahi kya hoga!"

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Anuj crashed on the bed as soon as he reached his suite. 

He had been living up to the term "workaholic" ever since he landed in Rajkot. 

He was about to toss his phone on the bedside table when a notification bearing Samar's name caught his attention.

"Usk friend ka number bheja hoga aur kya!"

Right then another notification popped up.

This one also from Samar, albeit a voice note. 

He downloaded it out of curiosity and frowned when he heard Pakhis voice. 

"Kya winter! Tujhe yeh hi time mila tha kya mujhe pareshan karne ke liye?"

"Shut up Sweety! Tune is bar nahi padha na toh anda aayega agle Hindi test me!"

The frown lines eased on Anuj's forehead. 

"Lagta hai galti se.."

"Mummy iski baat mat suniye! Mujhe abhi nahi padhna hai!"

"Kyun.. Sweety?"

"Anu!"

Every tired cell in his body was magically restored with energy! Now he listened with rapt attention!

"Woh.. kavita samajhni thi ne tujhe. Aaj samjha deti hoon."

"Woh mujhe kabhi yaad nahi hogi! Bahut ajeeb se words hain!"

"Main samjhati hoon ne! Bhavarth/ meaning samajh jayegi toh sabd apbeaap samajh me aa jayenge!De.. 

Suni main Hari aawan ki aawaaj,

Mahal chadhi chadhi jaun, mori sajni, 

Kab aave Maharaj?

Matlab.. Meerabai.. Kanhaji ke aane ka intejaar kar rahi hain. Mahal ki chhat par jakar raah.. dekh rahi hain. 

Dadur, mor, papeeha bole

Koyal madhur saaj! 

Umagyo Indra chahu dis barsey,

Damini.. chhodi laaj! 

Sare pasu-paksi Meerabai ko sanket de rahe hain ki.. Kanhaji aane wale hain! Jordar baaris ho rahi hai aur.. Bijli bhi kadak rahi hai. 

Dharti roop nava nava dharya 

Indra milan ke kaaj! 

Meera ke Prabhu Girdhar Nagar, 

Beg milo Maharaj! 

Matlab.. Dharti baaris se.. milne ke liye taiyyar ho rahi hai! Aur Meerabai.."

"Woh toh pata chala mummy!"

The voice note ended at that point. 

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Anuj wiped the tears blurring his vision and let out the breath that he had been holding. 

"Thank you, thank you, thank you so much Kanhaji! I... can't thank you enough!"

He replayed the voice note several times. 

"9 din 9 saal jitne lambey lag rahe the! Ek sapna nahi aaya!? Na jagte huye na sote huye.. dil ko chayn hi nahi mila!"

Fresh tears cascaded down his cheeks. 

"Main toh haqeeqat aur sapne, dono ke liye tadap raha tha!"

He hit the back of his head. 

"Mere jaise idiot, gadhe ne itni baar usse call kiya par.. Ek bhi call record nahi kiya! Shayad.. kabhi yeh khayaal hi nahi aaya ki.. humare beechh bhi kabhi.. baat-cheet.. band ho jayegi!"

He stared longingly at their first selfie. 

"Anu.. Main mar raha tha tumhari aawaaz sunne ke liye! Kuch bhi.. bas mera naam ya.. Jai Shri Krishna sunne ke liye. Par aisa nahi hua toh.. laga ki sirf tum hi nahi, Kanhaji bhi mujhse naraaz hain!"

He kissed his phone wallpaper. 

"Par.. ab Kanhaji maan gaye hain toh ummeed jagi hai ki.. tum bhi maan jaogi! Main mana lunga.. Koi bhi argument, koi bhi baat tumse badhkar nahi hai mere liye! Ab main tumhe khud se door nahi karunga, Anu!"

He sent a voice note to thank Samar before calling up GK. 

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Hope it was worth the read! 

Cheers, 

Noorie

Part 3 on page 5

P. S.  Anuj's shayari in the next part.