OUR LITTLE SECRET-RECREATING SHIVI (FF)PART 25 PG 64 - Page 13

My favorite scene is iktara walk......

But i actually want you to recreate the scene where Shiva burns his hand to get Dhara's attention in haveli and Raavi cares for his wound..........

In serial, shiva talked to her rudely..... But i want a cute scene in it......

Please.......

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

My favorite scene is iktara walk......

But i actually want you to recreate the scene where Shiva burns his hand to get Dhara's attention in haveli and Raavi cares for his wound..........

In serial, shiva talked to her rudely..... But i want a cute scene in it......

Please.......

thanks for suggestion😊😊

Originally posted by: virangna2005

I am not sure for iktara walk but I'll definitely go for shiva's hand burning scene😘😘

thanks for suggestion😊😊

I m also with it.. 😍😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥

Ek idea du? Chlo de hi deti hu🙈. Aap na flashback bhi likha ki kaise shiva or ravi ke bich pyar shuru hua. Ok?

hey guys.....here is part 5.......now onwards parts will be bit serious.....can take it as the build up for futher story.....

PART 5

SCENE: next day; morning; pandya niwas

raavi come to pandya niwas early in the morning. Shiva is sleeping on his cot whereas everyone was awake. Raavi admires the cutie shiva for a min or two and leaves to help dhara. Both prepares breakfast. Shiva is still sleeping. Dhara asks raavi to go to him. raavi finds an opportunity to tease him. she picks up a bucket full of cold water and throws it on him. shiva wakes up with jerk and sees raavi standing and grinning😁. ‘abbe chipkali teri toh…..’ yells shiva as he runs behind raavi. Raavi runs all around the house. Due to this Tom & Jerry game, shiva loses his balance and falls. His shoulder hits the sharp corner of the jhula resulting in a mere cut. Raavi gets worried and says ‘shiva….tu thik toh hai….’ as she inspects him. Raavi pulls him to the cot. Shiva for some time forgot about the family who was looking them amused and admired his caring chipkali. He knows that no matter what she does to irritate him but she always cares for him. shiva got back to senses when dhara comes to him. krish brings first aid box and about to give it to dhara but raavi takes it first. Everyone (whole family except suman who is out of station) gets a little shocked. Shiva realizing the situation snatches the box and give to dhara saying ‘aee chipkali…..bhabhi kar dengi…. Teri zaroorat nhi hai’. raavi looks him with 😦 expression. Shiva does an eye gesture to make her understand that where they are present. Raavi realizes and says ‘hn toh thik hai…..main toh insaaniyat ke naate kar rhi thi…..but my fault….insaaniyat insaano ko samjh aati hai jaungali bhaaluo ko nhi’ to make the things neutral. Shiva continues saying ‘hn hu main jungali bhalu’ picking up lota kept near. Raavi picks another utensil and retorts ‘hn hai tu bhaalu……par mujhe bhi damru bajana aata hai….dekh kaise tujhe apni dhun pe nachati hu’. Before shiva could retort, dhara interrupts ‘bas karo tum dono……aur shiva tu…..vo bechari ek toh teri help kar rahi hai upar se tu usse suna raha hai…..ab ja phele naha ke aa phir dawai lagwana…jaa’. Shiva obliges. Everyone leaves.Shiva too heads towards the bathroom thinking ‘already ishaaro pe nacha hi rahi hai tu……aur kitna nachayegi chipkali’.Shiva turns around and finds her looking him with concern. He gives an assuring look to which she passes a smile. This went unnoticed by all except gaura.

Everyone gathers for breakfast.Shivi tries not to get into any other situation, thus avoids eye contacts. All were eating their food when dev’s phone rings. R calling. He cuts the call.Again it rings with the same number. This continues this for 2-3 times more.Gautum asks dev to pick up the call if it’s important. But dev denies. Shivi first looks at dev and then exchanges a look. Both knew dev inside out and suspects something fishy.

SCENE: same day; afternoon; pandya niwas

[changesin the story

fordev-rishita: dev-rishita are dating each other for 2yrs. Some 7-8 months back, pandyas and janardan gets into dispute because to product supply. Because of this shiva highly dislike janardan. But none of the pandyas ever met rishita.Rishita’ family is still unknown to the relationship.]

Shiva comes back home to collect some bills but he’s unable to find them. He goes to kitchen to asks dhara but doesn’t find her. He checks gaura’s and suman’s room but both suman and dhara were not there. Suddenly he hears some sound from terrace. He rushes up thinking that it must be dhara. As he goes near terrace’s door, voice becomes clear. it was dev and raavi talking. he was about to enter, when he heard raavi saying ‘bata do dev…isse phele derr ho jaye…….’. shiva gets confused at this. Raavi continue ‘do saal hogye hai….ab bata sakte ho tum’to which dev retorts ‘itna aasan nhi hai raavi…..tum pata nhi kya dono families ke relation’. Shiva gets more confused. what the hell they both are talking about? Before shiva could further think or assume anything, he hears raavi saying ‘dev……jab tum usse pyaar karte ho…vo tum se pyaar karti hai toh families ko batane me kya dikkathai…….intial stage nhi hai jo secret rakhna chah rahe ho….aur voh bhi chahti hai sabko batana……’. Dev replies ‘raavi tum samjh nhi rhi-’ but stops as he hears shiva saying ‘kisse pyaar karta hai tu dev?......’ who can’t control himself from interrupting. Dev gets tensed on seeing shiva. raavi gestures dev to speak up and signals shiva to be calm with the situation. Shiva goes near dev andcalmly asks ‘bol bahi kisse pyaar karta hai tu?.......’. dev is still tensed about telling this especially toshiva. raavi assures dev by saying ‘dekhodev bata do…….humare liye tumhari khushi se badkar koi cheez nhi hai……’. Shiva also says ‘hn bhai…….tu jaanta hai tere liye jaan bhi haazir hai….bol toh sahi ek baar’. Dev takes deep breath and says ‘rishita…..janardan seth ki beti, rishita’.Shiva gets shocked, so much shocked that he was unable to speak for a min. ‘main rishta se pyaar karta hu…..problem bas ye hai parivaar wale nhi mane ge….’ continues dev. ‘janardan ki beti…….tu janardan ki beti se pyaar karta hai……..’says shiva in shocked voice. Dev nods his head in yes. Shiva turns to raavi and asks ‘tujhse kab se-’ but dev immediately cuts him saying ‘usse kuch mat kah……use bhi aaj hi pta chala hai……’ and raavi continues saying ‘hn….dhara di ne mujhe achaar lene ko kaha tha aur achaar ki barni upar thi…….jab main upar aayi….tab maine dev ko rishita se baat karte suna……..’. shiva sighs at this. Shiva highly dislikes janardan because of some professional issues. ‘dev tujhe pata bhi hai tu kya kar raha hai……..uss janardan, janardan ki beti sepyaar karta hai tu…….’ yells shiva. dev was afraid of this only. He knew how much shiva hated janardan and dev was ready for this reaction. ‘shiva, vo dono do saal se pyaar karte hai…..inhe kya pta tha ki families me terms itne kharab ho jaye ge…..’ says raavi in support of dev. Shiva rolls his eyes and says ‘ye nhi pta tha….ye bhi nhi pta tha ki janardan kaisa insaan hai……..(to dev)janardan humara dushman hai dev….tu galt kar rha hai’. Dev looks shivain disbelief whereas raavi retorts being a bit hurt ‘phir toh tu bhi galt hai na shiva….’. at this shiva looks raavi in shocked and dev gets confused. dev asks being confused ‘shiva bhi galt hai matlab?......’. Raavi realises what she saidand immediately replies ‘mera matlab shiva galt hai….pyaar pe kiska zor thodi hota hai…….aur zaroori nhi ki rishita apne papa jaisi hi ho……..’. ‘hn shiva….rishita apne papa se bahut alg hai……vo bahut achi hai…..please bhai meri baat ko samjh….’ Dev pleads. ‘rishita nh ihai janardan jaisi….par janardan toh janardan hai na……vo kabhi nhi manega’ says shiva. Raavi assures him by saying ‘dev,tum fikr mat karo……main tumhare saath hu okay?......and if rishita is comfortable toh main ek baar milna chaahugi usse😊’. Dev takes raavi in a friendly hug and says ‘thank you so much raavi……thank you………’.Dev breaks the hug and says ‘kal tum dono rishita se milne chalna…….shiva tu please aana…tu use ek baar milegana tohtu samjh jaaye ga voh kaisi hai……please.’ Shiva couldn’t help but nod in yes. Dev leaves the place leaving shivi alone. Shiva knows that raavi is bit hurt because of his statement. Shiva tries to talk saying ‘raavi mera matl-’ but raavi cuts him saying ‘nhishiva….. phele tu ek baar decide kar le…kahin tujhe apni kisi galti ke liye pachtana na pade…….’. raavi looks him with hurt and disappointment and leaves. Shiva curses himself saying those words. He punches the wall on side out of anger. Elsewhere, raavi feels like crying. ‘shiva tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hai…….kya tu humare pyaar ko ek galti samjhta hai😭’ thinks raavi. That night shiva tried to talk to raavi but raavi denies. Both couldn’t sleep that whole night.

guys marna mat.......choti si fight hai next part me over ho jayegi........

hope you enjoyed it....do review, positive or negative all are accepted ....added dev-rishita story for janardan stuff......so thoda tolrate karlo....😊😊😊

part6 pg 22

Originally posted by: Jiyakumari

Ek idea du? Chlo de hi deti hu🙈. Aap na flashback bhi likha ki kaise shiva or ravi ke bich pyar shuru hua. Ok?

koi idea ho toh please suggest karo😊

odette and aimmy☝☝iske liye idea ho toh batao yaar😁😁

Originally posted by: virangna2005

ye idea mujhe bhi aaya tha😅😅par samjh nhi aa raha ki kya likhu......koi idea nhi aa raha tha

koi idea ho toh please suggest karo😊

odette and aimmy☝☝iske liye idea ho toh batao yaar😁😁

Continue the story from the latest update only........

Shiva tries to convince Raavi and takes her to their favourite spot the tree and apologixes to her and than assures her that he will help dev

after having a heart felt conversation about their relationship and Raavi connects their situation as they are also in dev and Rishita's foot so ask Shiva about he will leave her as he said to dev and she have tears.........

Shiva consoles her and says firmly that he loves her and will support her..........

Than entwin their hands and Raavi put her head on his shoulder and Shiva holds ger protectively and Shiva tries to lightens her mood saying that he never thought they can be in a relationship and Raavi giggles and than flashback start how they started....

Flashback can be.......

They were arch enemies but have a soft corner for each other.One day Shiva loses his locket which his father gave him and he is upset and after searching a lot he didn't get that no one noticed that he was sad but Raavi did she kept on irritating him to distract him but didn't got any reaction........

So she one day saw Shiva crying on his tree and looking at his bare neck so Raavi understands that he needs his locket she searches it the whole day and at last suceeds and Raavi gave it to him and an emotional Shiva hugs her and since than he had a heart were her name was imprint but was not sure of Raavi.........

Here Raavi liked him but her heart was not yet of his and one day Raavi got her periods and her her dress gets stain and she didn't knew that but everyone was looking at her and she was feeling awkward and some boys were mockingly looking at her when Shiva came and look that and figure out tge situation and immediately hugs her from behind Raavi got startled but didn't panick as she knew it was Shiva and than she was about to move when Shiva whispers her about her situation and takes her from their still covering her as he knew prople with that conservative and dirty minds think the periods are something to be ashamed and something to mock at and Shiva than help her to go and change and he stands protectively outside the public washroom.......

Since than Raavi's heart was not hers it belonged to Shiva......

Both loved but never confessed having own set of fear.....

One have that he is not capable fir her and one had fear of loosing.......

Than one day, maami had a nasty fight with pandyas abd Shiva in anger blurts out bad things to Raavi about her parents and all and Raavi runs from their and cries ehen Shiva realises what he did he goes to Raavi who is crying at lakeside and tries to console firstly she didn't reacted but than after sometime of trying Shiva hugs her and confesses his feelings and apologize and she gives in and says about her side of story about her parents and says about her fear and than both hugged like their life is dependant on it and Shiva promises that he will not hurt her........ And their relationship era started........

Flashback ends......

Hope you like the idea you can add what ever you want and i know will write a good one out of this idea.....

Idea toh ekdum mast hai👍👍👌👌👌

par, dekh gussa mat hona, already made a sketch of next 4-5 parts and if I will include this right now then it will take lots of my efforts........but I have one more place to give this one.......from part 1 I showed that shiva is counting raavi's i love you for him and when it hits century he would give her a gift....there I'll include it......shivi remembering their story on a special day

ps: gussa toh nhi hai na🥺🥺🥺

Originally posted by: virangna2005

Idea toh ekdum mast hai👍👍👌👌👌

par, dekh gussa mat hona, already made a sketch of next 4-5 parts and if I will include this right now then it will take lots of my efforts........but I have one more place to give this one.......from part 1 I showed that shiva is counting raavi's i love you for him and when it hits century he would give her a gift....there I'll include it......shivi remembering their story on a special day

ps: gussa toh nhi hai na🥺🥺🥺

And apun gussa nahi hua😘😂😋

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

i know you will shape it nicely in the story........

And apun gussa nahi hua😘😂😋

btw possesive angry shiva on his way😆