Dear forum members,
I am giving a closure to my fictions here for 2021 as 2022 will return to work environment . I will be busy so not sure if would continue writing.
This year was working from home and plastered to the hse walls. Thanks to covid mata ki endless journey with new versions updated frequently.
I work as a lecturer and colleges will run as usual next year at my place(Malaysia) after a year break of online classes.
A closure to angad mann track with major unexpected twists. UD writers lost their brains after the EMA. If they still have some percentage left they should bring this onscreen giving happy ending to KVG. Angad won many hearts and tejang fans are disappointed with him uniting fatejo.
I don't ship fatejo or tejang but want a cheerful end note to angad. I hope makers listen to my story
I tagged majority active members . Others pls join . U can leave ur comments after reading. An apology if i missed tagging u . I hope the forum enjoyed this piece of work
A treat for Christmas 🎄🎄 and new year 🙏
The magic wand- the unexpected major twist
The last few episodes of KVG
After uniting tejo with her ex , angad decided to leave for London and cherish his life with her memories. He knew he had developed feelings for her but it was only one sided. It was hurting him. A change of environment would do wonders in the healing. Will he ever heal?? Will he find his true love?
He won riya's custody and all credit went to tejo . She found a loophole. Riya's nani ran her laundry business without license and had some unclear debts. She was blacklisted by a finance company. So the court granted the custody to angad. Riya left few days ago with his secretary' to London. He stayed behind to settle a business deal. The truth was he didn't want to leave moga. Still hoping tejoji will run into his arms and say . "Take me with u angadji. I love u ".
He lived in his self made fantasies.
As he munched the tuna sandwich for lunch while seated on a wooden bench in front of his office entrance at moga , he was deep in thoughts. He pined for her. Wished she felt the same for him. Alas, it was only one sided
Just then
A beggar appeared and requested for food. He gave the old man some money to purchase a meal for himself. Even handed over his business card for further assistance. The stranger was grateful .
As he walked away , he said to angad
The magic wand is on its way. Crossing ur path my boy. Be prepared. The fruit of ur karma.
Angad didn't understand but smiled and waved at him . Thank u , he said . But he was confused
Magic wand??? What was that
Little did he know that a miracle was coming in his way .The fruit of karma. He was a good man, after all.
He sighed. "What karma?? I only rcvd sorrow. Lost my family . All alone. Now tejoji also." He walked into his office to close the deal. He packed his bags and was ready to leave for the airport forever to London when his dadi called.
Dadi ; go to Ludhiana . Buy mangalsutra
Angad:. for whom
Dadi: for ur dada
Angad ; what
Dadi : idiot, for ur bride to be. I am searching a girl for u here in London. Purchase it from dada's friend's gold emporium in Ludhiana.
Angad: if i don't purchase
Dadi: i will throw u out of my life. Now get going.
He cancelled his ticket to London and took a train to Ludhiana instead. "Arey yeh dadi bi na , last minute shopping for mangalsutra" . He was annoyed. He wanted only tejoji and no one else
The next morning at 9 am , Ludhiana
As soon as he reached the city, he went to a gurdwara which was located next to the emporium and kneeled at the alter .
"Babaji pls do smtg. I only like tejoji. I don't want to get married. Pls spare me from dadi's wrath"
As he was about to stand up ,a little girl came running with a red gold embroided bridal dupatta and slipped out of sudden. He managed to rescue her and the dupatta rested in his arms . Her mother then came and scolded her for running away with the piece of fabric which was just tailored from the gurdwara . Her friend's daughter's marriage . She apologized to angad and took it away .
He understood at once. It was the signal. He sighed. Babaji turned out to be a partner in crime with his grandma. He was gonna get hitched . He said. "Not fair babaji"
Little did he know that the Almighty was ready with his magic wand . A miracle was on his way. The fruit of his karma
An hour later at the gold emporium.
He purchased a beautiful mangalsutra sutra worth 10 lakhs with a heavy heart. Wished tejoji was here and said shyly. "What u waiting for. Put na". He lived in his own fantasy. He sighed ." No tejoji, only sorrow. How am i going to live without u tejoji".
As he walked out of the front exit carrying the mangalsutra box in his right hand , he saw a crowd of people gathered a few metres away infront of a small banquet hall . A marriage was going on. But the people looked unhappy. Some were shouting
"Tumhari beti mey kemi hain. Isliye shadi nehin hui."
He approached , puzzled.
The bride was seating at one corner weeping. He couldn't see her face. She was in ghungat. Her parents were crying badly. Public taunting them. He was upset and enquired the person standing beside him. He was told that the baraat didn't turn up and groom side demanded 50 lakh in dowri last minute. The girl is a villager and not a graduate. She is the only child. Completed till class tenth in punjabi school. Doesn't even know how to speak and write in English.
Angad was very much annoyed. The person continued . The bride's parents couldn't fulfill their demands and now going through humiliation. The girl is twenty six yrs old. No one wanted to marry her because of her poor background. The parents already spent all savings on the banquet hall rental and some jewelleries. The bride was a humble person and loved charity work. She was a kind soul. Angad was hurt. This was very unfair.
Just then something caught his eyes
The bride's dupatta
. It was exactly the same that fell in his arms in the gurdwara two hours ago.
Strange. What can be his connections with her??
The magic wand. His destiny was knocking on his doors with a major unexpected twist.
He sympathized with her condition but couldn't help her in any way. As he was about to take a leave, a gust of wind blew from nowhere and her face was left uncovered by the shift of her dupatta with the direction of the wind.
He stood still staring at her. Shocked from head to toe. He rubbed his eyes, even pinched his left arm. No it wasn't hallucination. It was real . It was her.
Tejo's duplicate.
The exact figure, the face, the eye and everything else. But she wasn't tejo. She was a stranger who looked exactly like her.
There's a saying few people in the world looked alike. Here it was. He was amazed. Then he recalled the beggar's words . The magic wand. The fruit of his karma. His grandma sending him to Ludhiana and the bridal dupatta falling in his arms. Then he looked at the box with the mangalsutra inside it. It was all planned. His destiny . The unexpected twist.
Tears rolled down his cheeks . He controlled his emotions. This was it. She was the one. He couldn't believe. Tejoji ki humshakal. What was her name?? He asked someone in the crowd.
" Ladki ka naam kya hain?"
" Preeto Gill"
Was the reply he received.
He turned to look at the gurdwara which was just a few blocks away and smiled.
" Tusi great ho , babaji. Kya kemal ka twist diya. Tejoji ki jegah preetoji mil geyi. O bhalle bhalle. Thank u . I love u babaji "
The magic wand. The fruit of his karma. Tejo's humshakal. Exactly her carbon copy. Looks and personality wise.
He knew what he had to do . Just create a drama.
So he began his act in the crowd.
" Sharm aani chahiye. Aek ledki key sath itna bura hua aur koi kuch bhi nehin kar raha".
Hoping her parents will say smtg. Marry our daughter. But they were silent. He was disappointed and went on .
" Look at that poor bride. Kon shadi karega bichari sey. Kitni sad leg rehi hain". Silence. No one spoke. He was hoping for someone to say smtg . Damn
Then he continued.
" Is bechari ka toh future hi kherab ho geya".
Finally someone in the crowd spoke.
" Toh ap karlo na shadi. Bechari ko sahara dedo".
His pulses raised with tons of ladoos in his stomach. Yes, act of smpathy worked.
" Karunga, main shadi karunga aur abhi isi waqt karunga"
He walked towards her, held her hand in a dramatic way looking into her eye controlling his excitement pretending to be upset
" Tumhare sath bahut galat hua aur main angad mann aur galat nehin hone dunga. Palkon per bithakar rakhunga. Mere pas paisa hain gadhi hain bangla hain. Sab kuch hain. Tujhey kisi cheez ki kemmi nehin hongi. Baraat nehin aayi toh kya hua. Dulha toh hazir hain".
He wiped her tears gently and said, "thoda muskuradey soniye", to which she gave a weak smile.
Angad mann married preeto gill at the mandap rite away .
The irony was that he bought the mangalsutra and took his bride along coincidentally.
Mangalsutra bhi kheredliya aur pehenney wali ko bhi leygeya . Sala aek number ka kamina nikla
Just becoz she was tejo's look alike.
Three hours later at a hotel nearby
He rang his dadi and spilled the details. She was glad. She planned a lavish marriage ceremony in London Instructed him to bring his bride rite away. But he was keen with smtg else at the moment.
Suhagraat.
He was excited and started decorating the room. She was still at her parents place who were preparing for her vidaai.
He sprayed perfume all over. Ready in his white pyjama kurta . Cant wait to jump on the bed . He waited anxiously for few hours .
It was about 9 pm that her mother rang and stated in punjabi (english translation)
"We would want to keep our daughter a virgin till proper marriage rituals takes place as her father was unhappy with how the marriage was completed . We went through lots of humiliation".
He was annoyed. His suhagraat ruined. He pretended to be understanding hiding his frustrations.
" No problem mumiji, we can get married in the gurdwara tmrow itself"
She nodded in agreement.
The next morning he applied for her passport and visa for London. He bribed his contacts. The work would be completed in a week's time. He had full seven days of enjoyment with his bride. He was pleased.
In the evening , they were married off one more time with full rituals at the gurdwara .
He decorated the room once again. Couldn't control his excitement and preeto was at her friends' place. They wanted to spend some time with her .
It was 8 pm and she rang him, speaking sweetly
" O ji , meri seheli kehti hain na aaj raat yehin ruk jaun . Vo mujhey bahut yaad karti hain. Toh mey idhar hi so jati hun. Shub ratri. " She hung up before he could reply.
" Jo main miss karta hun uska kya". He sighed and surrendered to his sleep.
The next evening again he redecorated the room and waited excitedly. It was 10 pm. Still no sign of her. She was still at her friend's place Then his phone rang. It was her mother stating her husband had fever so preeto stayed back to take care. She will join him after four days once her father recovered. He pretended to be understanding hiding his frustrations.
As soon as he rcvd her passport and visa docs, he instantly booked tickets for London.
The night before leaving
He didn't do any decorations. Was busy shopping for grandma's last minute demands. After all, preeto will still be at her parents place. Just as he unlocked the hotel room door, there she was seated on his bed in bridal attire smiling at him sweetly.
" Ap pura din kahan reh geye".
He didn't answer. Threw the shopping bags away at one corner. Removed his shirt and jumped on the bed, switching off the lights.
Suhaag raat finally accomplished.
The next day(The last scene)
At the airport . They smiiled , clicking photos together.
He was relieved. Finally, his ladylove was with him. He thanked the Almighty once again.
Minutes later,
London flight taking off .
So , angad didn't get tejo but her humshakal preeto .
The end
Merry Christmas 🎄🎄🎄 and a happy new year ahead