ShiVi OS: Jis Ore Teri Shehnaai, Us Ore Main Bhaagun Re - Page 3

ML🤗!!!!! You're so good at writing mush!!!!! You should really write more!!! That aside, I loved Shiva and Raavi's conversation. Shiva's fear that Raavi will take back her maafi was such a Shiva thing to do! She made chole bature for him? With the kind of foodie Shiva is, he would've really enjoyed that gesture. Plus, I loved Rishita in that scene, telling Krish to not tease them until they get out of the awkwardness phase... ❤️

With Shiva moving back into the room, I was melting the whole time, but I think the best moment for me was seeing Raavi apologise to him on her own. Her needing that to move on peacefully with him. And they cuddled!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳

Summary: Loved it ML. 😆

Such a beautiful os it is... ❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍

OMG, ML This was so beautiful.❤️❤️❤️ I really wish you were a writer to PS.😆 I've been waiting for a proper closure for Shiva's room mystery and this felt so real and heartwarming. Their conversation was love.

A wholesome package🤗

Loved it totally!!!❤️❤️

Raavi apologized for her mistakes in so simple way

And cherry on cake: Shiva is finally back in his room🥳

This is being a biggest mystery nowadays for me🤪

These type of conversation are much much needed in any relationship

And in Shivi's case this is needed and suited too👏

Read your work after a long time will wait for awesome piece in future too

Beautiful!!!! Just perfectly written so happy to read this.. But why are you saying last attempt plz we don't want to loose such an amazing writer

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Thank you! I will I will. Do you know how long it will be? I may wait until it's over though, cause I simply don't have patience to wait.

do one thing.....read it by saturday.....you'll get 4 or 5 parts by then😊😊

Beautiful

Loved it

ML.. glad you finally wrote an OS! I have been waiting for you to write something since so long 😆

This was really good! I have been waiting for a ShiVi night scene from ages.. glad to see that Shiva finally came back to his room, and Raavi apologized for her mistakes ❤️

Is this really your last OS? 😒 Would love to read more from you if possible!

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

ML🤗!!!!! You're so good at writing mush!!!!! You should really write more!!! That aside, I loved Shiva and Raavi's conversation. Shiva's fear that Raavi will take back her maafi was such a Shiva thing to do! She made chole bature for him? With the kind of foodie Shiva is, he would've really enjoyed that gesture. Plus, I loved Rishita in that scene, telling Krish to not tease them until they get out of the awkwardness phase... ❤️

With Shiva moving back into the room, I was melting the whole time, but I think the best moment for me was seeing Raavi apologise to him on her own. Her needing that to move on peacefully with him. And they cuddled!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳

Summary: Loved it ML. 😆

Thank you! 🤗

Haha, I love reading mush, so glad I was able to entertain you guys writing it too.

Glad you liked it. ❤️

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

Beautiful!!!! Just perfectly written so happy to read this.. But why are you saying last attempt plz we don't want to loose such an amazing writer

Thank you! Glad you liked it!❤️

Haha last attempt at OS. If I think of anything and crave mushy things with Shivi, I'll pen down drabbles❤️