SaiRatFF:I want to leave(Epilogue-pg.20) - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: FoodieNaina

Loved this... This is what I want

But I missed Pakhi didi's bezaitti😭

Me too, Sai should snap atleast once at Virat 😈

Also Ashwini should not be spared.😆

I tried to focus on SaiRat in this one... Pakhi didi got alot of space in my previous OSs, however, will try to add some beizzati in the next part☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Lovely.

There is a list of people who are Virat's zimmedari...s

1. Pakhi

2. Sai

3. Shruti

4. A little girl whose father was rescued by Virat and admitted in the hospital. That girl kept playing with Virat's mobile and missed Sai's calls.

5. Utkarsha (Sai's college friend who was harassed by a fellow student, Ranjeet)

6. Pari (a small girl in GC who was kidnapped by Vitthal Mane)

the list is endless. You can add the forum wasis also. Its his responsibility that we dont go insane.

Thank you❤️

That's the issue, Virat is inhumanely zimmedaar😲

Can he be shown lesser zimmedaar for once😆

Wow, you remember names too in point 5, not bad...👍🏼

The thing is he can be and should be zimmedaar but be considerate to other's feelings, be it his wife or family or forum members, or else each one is bound to snap at him...🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Aruna34

Nice start

Loved it.

Waiting for next update

Thank you so much...❤️

Stay tuned ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: nikita05

Thank you❤️

That's the issue, Virat is inhumanely zimmedaar😲

Can he be shown lesser zimmedaar for once😆

Wow, you remember names too in point 5, not bad...👍🏼

The thing is he can be and should be zimmedaar but be considerate to other's feelings, be it his wife or family or forum members, or else each one is bound to snap at him...🤣

He is the most irresponsibly responsible person. He is also responsible for the families of thousands of mosquitoes that I kill as I swing the bat around.

And they are all females...ab kya karein...Virat chavan jyachi pukki jaban.

Agla update kab?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Love it! Its good that Sai is choosing her self respect and peace over love. I know the feeling- on the one hand i feel like Sai is better off without Virat but the fanngirl longs to see happy,, romantic, in love Sairat....why cant Virat on the show think before saying/doing anything.😥

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Wonderful start 👏♥️. Finally Sai taking a much needed stand for her self respect!! Her showing the mirror to both Raja Babu & Aai was much needed! It's high time for Virat to get rudely woken up from his world where he thinks that he is the only victim! He needs to be jolted up & go through fierce redemption for what he has done to Sai in the name of zimmedari 😑. It's not at all wrong to take up zimmedari, the problem arises when one starts neglecting own family for that zimmedari.



Ps- Virat can easily tell Sai everything about Shruti & his promise to Sada, she'll surely help him in finding some way to deal with the situation! This track could be handled in a creative way by not butchering Virat's character any further & also not hurting Sai in any manner. But alas the fierce copy pasting craze has left no creative braincells in cvs minds 🤦🏻.


Eager to read the next part & a part of SaiRat fan in me wants them to be together, but after a short leap where Virat has a clear head & has learnt to not repeat the past mistakes.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

New Os!!!!!!

Wonderfully penned! Dialogues were so clear and meaningful! Loved this!!!❤️

Yesss! Even me being a SaiRat fan girl want them as endgame😳😆

Can't wait to read what u have planned 😃


Pleaj continue soon😛

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Nja91

Love it! Its good that Sai is choosing her self respect and peace over love. I know the feeling- on the one hand i feel like Sai is better off without Virat but the fanngirl longs to see happy,, romantic, in love Sairat....why cant Virat on the show think before saying/doing anything.😥

Thank you❤️

I would love this kind of a scene in the show where Sai is vocal about her feelings, how she was treated for the past 1-1.5 years. They are making her kind of typical ITV bahu, I love sassy Sai Joshi who used to say everything on face.

First, I wrote this much only but then the SaiRat part is taking alot more parts in the OS. Virat should know the consequences of his actions to think before saying or doing anything. He takes sai for granted and this will change after separation...🥺

He is the most juvenile and immature character on the show, more than Pakhi didi and I hate his over glorified Virat Chavan jyaachi pakki zabaan...😵

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: BhatSisters

Wonderful start 👏♥️. Finally Sai taking a much needed stand for her self respect!! Her showing the mirror to both Raja Babu & Aai was much needed! It's high time for Virat to get rudely woken up from his world where he thinks that he is the only victim! He needs to be jolted up & go through fierce redemption for what he has done to Sai in the name of zimmedari 😑. It's not at all wrong to take up zimmedari, the problem arises when one starts neglecting own family for that zimmedari.



Ps- Virat can easily tell Sai everything about Shruti & his promise to Sada, she'll surely help him in finding some way to deal with the situation! This track could be handled in a creative way by not butchering Virat's character any further & also not hurting Sai in any manner. But alas the fierce copy pasting craze has left no creative braincells in cvs minds 🤦🏻.


Eager to read the next part & a part of SaiRat fan in me wants them to be together, but after a short leap where Virat has a clear head & has learnt to not repeat the past mistakes.

Thank you...❤️

You need to be considerate to the feelings of the people you love but Virat never is, never thinks about anyone else but himself. Sai is taken for granted and I hate it.

That's what, he never tells sai about his real feelings towards Pakhi, her advances, now Shruti... Not good, the trust is lacking from his side, which inturn makes sai have trust issues in the relationship. He should not help Shruti like this at the first place, she herself is a naxalite but...🤦

I am on it... Will update soon, stay tuned

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: sairat07

New Os!!!!!!

Wonderfully penned! Dialogues were so clear and meaningful! Loved this!!!❤️

Yesss! Even me being a SaiRat fan girl want them as endgame😳😆

Can't wait to read what u have planned 😃


Pleaj continue soon😛

Thank you girl for detailed analysis...❤️

You know I planned to write only this much as an OS as a Sai Joshi fan but then SaiRat fan in me woke up, don't know why and how and now I am struggling in writing a lamba story...🤣

Stay tuned...🤗

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