105
finally maan is not able to hide n control his feeling but they come out in the shade of refusal
105
finally maan is not able to hide n control his feeling but they come out in the shade of refusal
Liza and Mona's plan works and Maan get jealous and show his authority on Geet
He confess what's bothering him but half he have to open up share his thoughts
Geet not bother about Raj 😂😂 Raj thought Geet calling him baby
thanks for the update
Part 105
Fantabulous update.... remarkably written
the world and time has stopped for Geet
she is drawn to Maan and her heart beats faster
but then Maan sees Raj and gets possessive
Geet is happy being in his arms
so Maan realises his actions and leaves Geet
Gosh this Raj....
can he now see that Geet has eyes only for Maan
as expected Maan decided to leave
at least his cousins tried to make him stay
hate Raj nagging Geet
of cos Maan tells him to leave Geet alone and lunges for Raj
well Geet intervenes
how can Raj think Geet was calling him baby
Liked that Maan correct him and says he is Geet's baby
glad that Lisa and Mona's plan worked
not surprised that Maan took Geet with him
now Raj knows he has no chance with Geet
sad seeing Maan drinking
Geet is correct that he is a mess
great seeing her concern for her
finally a drunken Maan opens up
dismayed he thinks that he is a loser and that she hates him
loved that she assures him
hope that they reconcile
update soon
So sad. His mom really messed him up. He is so afraid to let anyone in his life afraid they might hate him too.
That is probably why he pushed geet away till now
but I guess he cannot keep away from her. Also he is too possessive of her. Did not like Raj being ther with her
Part 105
Nice update
Maan cannot hide his emotions anymore
I love how 💗 maan & geet get lost in each other
Maan’s jealousy was super cute when he told Raj that only he is her baby 😆
I love that part
And did I read correctly, did geet almost confess 😲
Can’t wait to read next update
Thank you 🤗
Awesome part 👍
Baby part was superb loved it😂
Atlast they are talking hope they clarify all misunderstanding
Update soon can't wait
Aww Maan was so funnily cute when he referred to himself as Geet’s baby 🤣❤️
Part 106
Maan with Geet on one side and his bottle of vodka on the another
He is whistling
She is looking at him
G- You look like a mess
She says whipping off some sweat off his forehead
M- bcoz i am a mess...arent i?
He slurs
Geet bhi kya bole
He gazes at her, with his bloodshot eyes
M-Juz stay here
He says tapping at her hand
He takes another swig and then scoffs
M-You are tied down with a loser....babyyyyy
M-go ...go...juzzz leave
M-juz aban-abazo (abandon)...just leave
She holds his hand
M-Gee...my mom haze u...u haze me?
Geet is like ki, iska kya sense banta hai?
G-No...I lo-...I do opposite of that. Why would I be here with you if I would have hated you
He nods
M-izz nic zo have u here....buz i am too drunk
M-juzz take me home with you...i juzz wanna go home
He snuggles to her
G-Okay let’s go home
M-no no...not now...now juz stay here
M-you are the only one here...everybozy is gone...snatched!
He smirks
M-sam would have scolded me zo much...seeing me zis zrunk
M-he goz zo maz at me..when I got zrunk 1st time...i was just 16
G-Who is Sam?
And why was this guy getting drunk at 16
M- u know zam?
He drunkly turns at her surprised
M-he iz my big bro
Takes another large gulp
M-buz he also left
G-Where is he now?
M-dead!
M-cold, lifeless, and super dead
He starts laughing maniacally which turns into sobs
She is numb hearing him
She takes few seconds to process the fact herself
She holds both his hands tightly
It's a big shock
G-How...how did it happen....when…?
M- he killed himself
M-the perzon i loved the moz...gone
M-whoosh
He does a gesture of shooting on the head indicating that his big brother shot himself dead
M-the gooz guy....whoosh...the black sheep...livez
Geet is too shocked to even react
M-everybozy leaves the black sheep....everybozy...dad...sam...mom....
M-u will alzo leave....so leave now
Now she can understand pretty easily ki Maan ka recent behavior is not just coz of his mum
But probably processing the long buried grief of his bro paying away
M-go...
M-ppl i love...die..,
His face is so close to her, she can smell the alcohol in his breath
M-save yourself....go!
He Is holding on tight to Geet, at the same time telling her to go
Such a lying mouth and but honest body
He tries to get up on his feet as Geet doesn’t move
In his drunk mind, if Geet isn’t going...he will go away from her
He is saving her from his fate
His loved ones die, so he is afraid because of him something terrible can happen to Geet
Uske upar he had the insecurity ki Geet will in the end leave him, coz he aren’t good enough. Else wo baaki ladkon se baat kyun karti shaadi ke liye
He is also saving his heart by pushing away Geet
As he was struggling to get u, she pulls him back
G-Where do you think you are going?
She says holding his face between her palms
She tries to sound authoritative, but her voice is breaking due to his grief
Her heart is breaking into pieces seeing him so broken
Such a shock to her... Khud ka processing complete kare ya Maan ko sambhale... To much multiprocessing
She pulls him further, so he is scrambled up on her lap
Last time when he was drunk, khud Geet ke lap pe leta tha, ab Geet ne khud kheench liya
She can feel the moisture on her cheeks
She wonders: its Maan who is sad, why is she crying?
What is wrong with her?
Why has she changed so much?
Where is her sass and indifferent attitude?
M- u zmell zo sexy, Gee (he says smiling drunkly)
She looks down at him & smiles
He gazes at her
M-Call me bavy...again
She smiles
She leans and kisses his cheek
G- You are my baby
She looks into his drunk deep eyes
G-Maan, I have fallen in love with you
More than him, says this to herself, almost admitting the truth
She confesses when he is too drunk to even remember she said it.
No wonder Maan is afraid to love anyone. Will she get him out of that mode?
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