Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 2 years ago

105

finally maan is not able to hide n control his feeling but they come out in the shade of refusal 

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 Liza and Mona's plan works and Maan get jealous and show his authority on Geet 

 He confess what's bothering him  but half he have to open up share his thoughts  

 Geet not bother about Raj 😂😂 Raj thought Geet calling him baby 

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Posted: 2 years ago

thanks for the update


Part 105

Fantabulous update.... remarkably written

the world and time has stopped for Geet

she is drawn to Maan and her heart beats faster

but then Maan sees Raj and gets possessive

Geet is happy being in his arms

so Maan realises his actions and leaves Geet

Gosh this Raj.... 

can he now see that Geet has eyes only for Maan

as expected Maan decided to leave

at least his cousins tried to make him stay

hate Raj nagging Geet

of cos Maan tells him to leave Geet alone and lunges for Raj

well Geet intervenes

how can Raj think Geet was calling him baby

Liked that Maan correct him and says he is Geet's baby

glad that Lisa and Mona's plan worked

not surprised that Maan took Geet with him

now Raj knows he has no chance with Geet

sad seeing Maan drinking

Geet is correct that he is a mess

great seeing her concern for her

finally a drunken Maan opens up

dismayed he thinks that he is a loser and that she hates him

loved that she assures him

hope that they reconcile


update soon 

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Posted: 2 years ago

So sad. His mom really messed him up. He is so afraid to let anyone in his life afraid they might hate him too. 

That is probably why he pushed geet away till now


but I guess he cannot keep away from her. Also he is too possessive of her. Did not like Raj being ther with her 

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Part 105 

Nice update 

Maan cannot hide his emotions anymore 

I love how 💗 maan & geet get lost in each other 

Maan’s jealousy was super cute when he told Raj that only he is her baby 😆

I love that part 

And did I read correctly, did geet almost confess 😲

Can’t wait to read next update 

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Awesome part 👍

Baby part was superb loved it😂

Atlast they are talking hope they clarify all misunderstanding


Update soon can't wait

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Aww Maan was so funnily cute when he referred to himself as Geet’s baby 🤣❤️

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Part 106

 

Maan with Geet on one side and his bottle of vodka on the another

 

He is whistling

 

She is looking at him

 

G- You look like a mess

 

She says whipping off some sweat off his forehead

 

M- bcoz i am a mess...arent i?

 

He slurs

 

Geet bhi kya bole

 

He gazes at her, with his bloodshot eyes

 

M-Juz stay here

 

He says tapping at her hand

 

He takes another swig and then scoffs

 

M-You are tied down with a loser....babyyyyy

 

M-go ...go...juzzz leave

 

M-juz aban-abazo (abandon)...just leave

 

She holds his hand

 

M-Gee...my mom haze u...u haze me?

 

Geet is like ki, iska kya sense banta hai?

 

G-No...I lo-...I do opposite of that. Why would I be here with you if I would have hated you

 

He nods

 

M-izz nic zo have u here....buz i am too drunk


M-juzz take me home with you...i juzz wanna go home

 

He snuggles to her

 

G-Okay let’s go home

 

M-no no...not now...now juz stay here

 

M-you are the only one here...everybozy is gone...snatched!

 

He smirks

 

M-sam would have scolded me zo much...seeing me zis zrunk

 

M-he goz zo maz at me..when I got zrunk 1st time...i was just 16

 

G-Who is Sam?

 

And why was this guy getting drunk at 16

 

M- u know zam?

 

He drunkly turns at her surprised

 

M-he iz my big bro

 

Takes another large gulp

 

M-buz he also left

 

G-Where is he now?

 

M-dead!

 

M-cold, lifeless, and super dead

 

He starts laughing maniacally which turns into sobs

 

She is numb hearing him

 

She takes few seconds to process the fact herself

 

She holds both his hands tightly

 

It's a big shock

 

G-How...how did it happen....when…?

 

M- he killed himself

 

M-the perzon i loved the moz...gone

 

M-whoosh

 

He does a gesture of shooting on the head indicating that his big brother shot himself dead

 

M-the gooz guy....whoosh...the black sheep...livez

 

Geet is too shocked to even react

 

M-everybozy leaves the black sheep....everybozy...dad...sam...mom....

 

M-u will alzo leave....so leave now

 

Now she can understand pretty easily ki Maan ka recent behavior is not just coz of his mum

 

But probably processing the long buried grief of his bro paying away

 

M-go...

 

M-ppl i love...die..,

 

His face is so close to her, she can smell the alcohol in his breath

 

M-save yourself....go!

 

He Is holding on tight to Geet, at the same time telling her to go

 

Such a lying mouth and but honest body

 

He tries to get up on his feet as Geet doesn’t move

 

In his drunk mind, if Geet isn’t going...he will go away from her

 

He is saving her from his fate

 

His loved ones die, so he is afraid because of him something terrible can happen to Geet

 

Uske upar he had the insecurity ki Geet will in the end leave him, coz he aren’t good enough. Else wo baaki ladkon se baat kyun karti shaadi ke liye

 

He is also saving his heart by pushing away Geet

 

As he was struggling to get u, she pulls him back

 

G-Where do you think you are going?

 

She says holding his face between her palms

 

She tries to sound authoritative, but her voice is breaking due to his grief

 

Her heart is breaking into pieces seeing him so broken

 

Such a shock to her... Khud ka processing complete kare ya Maan ko sambhale... To much multiprocessing

 

She pulls him further, so he is scrambled up on her lap

 

Last time when he was drunk, khud Geet ke lap pe leta tha, ab Geet ne khud kheench liya

 

She can feel the moisture on her cheeks

 

She wonders: its Maan who is sad, why is she crying?

 

What is wrong with her?

 

Why has she changed so much?

 

Where is her sass and indifferent attitude?

 

M- u zmell zo sexy, Gee (he says smiling drunkly)

 

She looks down at him & smiles

 

He gazes at her

 

M-Call me bavy...again

 

She smiles

 

She leans and kisses his cheek

 

G- You are my baby

 

She looks into his drunk deep eyes

 

G-Maan, I have fallen in love with you

 

More than him, says this to herself, almost admitting the truth

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

She confesses when he is too drunk to even remember she said it.

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No wonder Maan is afraid to love anyone. Will she get him out of that mode?