Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 33

Update 6: You light my fire

So I began writing this chapter and as I'd planned, it was supposed to be in 3 parts but Part 1 turned out to be so long that I decided it warranted being a chapter by itself. So here it is. I figured I'd post it since it was finished up early, but the next updates may not happen this quickly.

Thank you all for reading and for all the love you've given this little fic of mine! 🤗 I'll be forever grateful! 🤗

Summary: Raavi contemplates marriage to Dev amid familial pressure and Shiva deals with jealousy. A chance encounter, however, leaves them both flustered as intense emotions and desires threaten to take over.

Content warning: This is strictly 18+ content, so I'm gonna put it under the tag.

Also, a lot of this update is just Raavi and Shiva's feelings and so won't have too much dialogue. I hope that's not a bummer for y'all and you still enjoy this! Please, please leave your likes and comments even if it's just a line. They truly motivate me to write more!

Riya.. Bookmarked to read during my lunch break!!

Oh my oh my!!!

This was very very intense!!! And very very hot even though nothing really "happened". You're a master at writing sexual tension! Your line was accurate.. You could cut it with a knife, and that's not to say that there was no progress in their feelings.

We got a glimpse of Dev's reason to marry, how Prafulla really feels (which is again Canon) and both Raavi and Shiva's thoughts.

They're both hyper aware of the physical desire and the fact that there is something between them. Shiva's possessive thoughts of her is again Canon as is cautious Raavi. My thoughts are jumbled for a fic which is very rare so I'll maybe comment again later.

Also dressing up is the new undressing!!I loved it!! As all your work this is definitely going in the re read bookmark!!

Oh my! That was hot!😆 Mature part was indeed on some other level. Their desires were clearly stated😆

So Raavi hasn't said yes but Dev has Why did he have to break up with Rishita?😔

Shiva and Raavi's thoughts are clear and both want each other but are in sacrificial mode especially Raavi. I hope better sense prevails and she says No to Dev before it's too late.

I am curious to see what's in store in the next part❤️

RES RES RES RES RES🥳☺️

UNRES

She’s mine, a crazed voice in his head was saying, and I’ll be damned if I let anyone else have her!

Holy Lord What just happened?!☺️

There was just- too much heat here-..

Temperature is beyond the solar system currently!

NOT EVEN KIDDING.

I'm really irritated by Maami not listening to her man like...Dude please!

She isn't wrong about the emotional blackmail though.

Every woman has it at one point in her life. SUCKS. 🤢

Up, down, In, out. Grunt. Push. Thrust. Grunt.

*Fans herself dramatically and faints*☢️

Weights? Shirtless? Grunts?

COMA. ACTUAL COMA.🤡

Can we all agree that Dev needs to get a refund on all the fees he has given to the MBA institute because it ain't doing any good to anyone.

The college didn't do its job! 😆

Consent was important to him, and he suspected, to Raavi too.

I LOVE HIM. There's no going back, I'm so in love with this Shiva. Nothing would have made me put him on a pedestal like this line...literally~❤️❤️🤗

Wait did he actually stop the tread mill mid run??!

Damn she has balance, I would have fallen so bad! Broken the teeth and everything.🤣

“I believe congratulations are in order.”

I thought there was another intense fight upcoming like the pool scene, but anyway the redressing? WHOOOSHHH! took my breath away.😲

I cannot wait I absolutely cannot this was exhilarating!

And I read the next one is going to take long. How will I survive this agony?! Oh Lord how?

I want to know what happens next..How are they going to get outta that wedding mess.

When are you updating next?!

Imma want both chapters together! I can't wait for another one and then again for another one its too intense of a torture!

Lots of love,

Ritu.❤️

Lizzie, You're making me an addict to your stories.😆

The sexual tension is too much to handle.☺️😆

This was an awesome update.🤗❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

Oh my! That was hot!😆 Mature part was indeed on some other level. Their desires were clearly stated😆

So Raavi hasn't said yes but Dev has Why did he have to break up with Rishita?😔

Shiva and Raavi's thoughts are clear and both want each other but are in sacrificial mode especially Raavi. I hope better sense prevails and she says No to Dev before it's too late.

I am curious to see what's in store in the next part❤️

Premziee aap bhi 18+ padti hai 😃

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Premziee aap bhi 18+ padti hai 😃

Tu stock kar le sabko pehle phir padhna theek hai? 🤣🤣

#DobiMaxPro

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Tu stock kar le sabko pehle phir padhna theek hai? 🤣🤣

#DobiMaxPro

Ha mein dobi nahi hoon samjhi na 😡

Isko observation bolte hai mein unko kabhi 18+ par comment karte nahi dekha hai isliye