ShiVi OS: Phases - Page 3

this was so beautiful..........all brothers lived separately was shocking but good.......

gudgudi to hogi he shivi ko......hehe

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

BLISSWA THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL MY HEART DID GUDGUDI WHILE READING THIS SJXKSKWKWKW

pleej write more I beg u😭❤️

aw thank you meg ❤️

Awwwww this was so feel-sy!

The different phases of Shiva and Raavi's life and their relationship was so nice to read ❤️

And ShiVi having a baby was the icing on the cake.. I loved it!

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Blissyyy ❤️❤️❤️

This piece had everything!

Baarish, childhood shivi to teenager shivi to shivi as parents, could it be anymore perfect? 😍😍

How beautifully you have shown their journeyy 👏👏

This one has my heart,loved it ❤️

Aw thanks Pixie!🤗

Glad you enjoyed it ❤️

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

This has me all sorts of emo. I didn’t know I needed this beautiful kids to married ShiVi but now that I have it in all kinds of 🥰🥰🥰

and very well portrayed. Also I loved amaya and Vihaan!

Thank you Suparna!❤️

I'm glad you enjoyed Amaya and Vihaan 🤗

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

Mannnnnn🥺

So much mush mush vibes ❣️

Loved it through and through !

Aw thank you!❤️

I know, the mush was too real in this one 😆

I'm glad you loved it 🤗

Originally posted by: mpks1

This is so beautiful! And it is possible to imagine this only in Shyna’s story. Thank you for writing this❤️

Thank you Prema ❤️

Originally posted by: Oeindrila

Such a wholesome shot it was😍!!!

The journey from childhood to becoming parents... You described it so beautifully❤.

And that hug hearing the thunder made my cliché-lover heart so happy🙈😍.

Thank you sm hun ❤️

I'm super glad you enjoyed it!

I have a thing for hugs like that so had to include it here too 😆

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

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Shyna❤️! This fic is all heart, really... And no amount of fluff is ever quite enough in my opinion...

The way they're both a laughing mess in the childhood scene, both of them so nonchalant in each other's presence, just that moment of pure hearted joy...

And then, in the late teen scene, the way Shiva is observing Raavi... The sudden knowledge of her beauty leaves him in shock in every version of Shivi, doesn't it? And Raavi's innocent enjoyment of the rain was all he could see...

With the last part, the dynamics of a married couple, of the children was beautiful too... I love how his love for all three is equal but is still tied to Raavi, the first person he loved to that extent. Also, you moved them out of the joint family structure, something I found very interesting....

Thank you Sathii ❤️

Reading your comments always makes me happy, you always notice the details, which at times I'm not even aware of when I write 😆

I'm glad you loved the fluff, and I agree, no amount of fluff is ever enough!!

I initially wasn't going to write about the kids, it was going to end with Shiva realizing he didn't hate the rain, but then a vision of his little princess running towards him flashed in my mind and I melted

Yesss, I did move them out of the joint family structure 😆 It's something I'd love to see in the show, even if they were to return one day. I get tired of all the meddling and emotional manipulation that go on in that household. Wish shivi could live a happy and prosperous life elsewhere, but that's only happening in the FFs 😆

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Blisssy!! My HHAAAARRTTTTT!!

Tune bhi baarish par likh dala?

apan writing shishtaarsss!

Maine bhi baarish ghusaya apne piece me.

Shivi ke bache.. hayeee kab ayenge ye?

Fluff tha but sara mood sahi hogya padh ke by god// ❤️

Thank you Rituu ❤️

We have some sort of telepathy going on, sab barish ke baare mein likhne mein magan the 😆