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Loved thiss ❤️

So beautifully written 🤩

Rains and shiviii 🥺🥺

The way you have described their feelings for each other is a treat to read, thanks for this Ritu 🤩

OMG🔥 ShiVi☺️

Loved it dear🤗

I loved it babe! The song the concept the writing everything! And of course the story! My ShiVi heart is thumping too hehehe

How beautifully poetic was this Ritu!💓

So so so wonderful uffff, I'm in love.

And tune bhi varish ke baare mein likh diya? Hehehe we're on the same wavelength 🤗

Anything to do with rain gets me hooked instantly. This felt so soothing to read. The sense of peace and satisfaction I felt after is unparalleled!

Simply Beautiful 🥰

Your words flow so smoothly, both the rain and Shivi just adds to the emotion of the whole story, making their world not only intimate but romantic also💕💕💕💕

Mujhe bhi nahi pata ki yeh humari conversation se hai ya nahi. Main bhool gayi😆 But I wanted a Saree sequence. Toh agar koyi credit nahi leraha toh mein le hi leti hoon.🤪😆🐷

Ritu, I really loved this. You were right that I'm gonna love it. 🤗❤️ I really enjoyed reading this.

Have to read again though cuz I was sleepy reading. 😆 I'm gonna love it anyway so it's all good.❤️

🔥🔥

Since I've never heard this song, I ended up reading it again after I played the video.

Your imagination is 🔥

mujhe mat karna tag tum kabhi bhi 😭💔

Originally posted by: Kfof

Ritu, it was awesome😍❤

So poetic yet so intense🔥❤

Loved it ❤❤

thank you so much for reading! 🤗

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I'm here!

The sheer beauty of the intimacy and the way you've described it just makes me go *chef's kiss*

The fact that a simple rainy weather could turn up the heat in the room is just so..... ♥️

Loved it :)

Aww thanks a lot bub! ❤️