| ShiVi OS : Edge Of Eternity | - Page 5

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This was beautiful and intense 😍

And I love angsty and emotional sceness soo much ❤️

Loved it ❤️

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: Iktara22

Beautiful....the intensity and transition you showed...just amazing!!!

Thanks a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: Foxii

Why can’t they give us a scene like this...

It was amazing... liked intense Shiva being all possessive ❤️

Trp ke piche hain sab story jaye bhaad mein 🤔

Thankyou ❤️

Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

This was so fukcing beautiful 👏

This OS is just everything I want to see in the show

Raavi to open up

Shiva to understand that he’s being a total ass

Him to let her know that they are meant to be togther

AHHH I’m still gushing over the kiss ☺️

This was adorable baby

Write more and thanks for the tag ❤️

The kiss was a difficult part as always because well we ain't got any experience. Was afraid it would be too mechanical of blah! 🤣

Thanks for reading ❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Waiting

i commented on that page only

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

This was such a beautiful OS. Their feelings and conflict in their heart was so beautifully shown! And the dialogues also masha allah! Kash show mein Iska 20% bhi mil jaata. Also do tag me whenever you write next!🔥

Thanks a lot bro!

Will keep in mind to tag you in the next one 😉

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

It is beautiful🤗

I don't want to read FF nowadays, Kyun ki uske baad Chaubey's ki adbhutness sehan nahi hoti🤣🤣

But this is exceptional now my level reached high

I have to skip some episodes for my sanity😆

Thank you for tagging😊

Haha Thanks a lot for reading bub. ❤️

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

your writing and shivi makes me

just reading about him whispering in her ear makes me lose my mind. i am a

her anger is justified, but even in her anger she doesnt forget to notice how hot he looks

ladki ka focus dekha......😉

finally both got tired of running away......both understood that they cant live without each other......their angst, longing, anger, love for each other is aptly explored

she was emotionally drained and she told him about what she felt........she cant share him........

he cant see her hurt and defeated........world be damned .....his chipkali and phoolkumari has to feel loved, safe secured and thats what he gave her.......surety ......

shiva raavi sirf ek dusre ke hisse mein aate hai........

and the kiss........

this is every fans dream for dem which you have penned down.....can u replace the writers pls .............

You took my breath away with such a lovely comment.

The hot mess was intentional, totally unapologetic about it. 🤣

I miss the old Shiva the one who said "Tujhe pareshan karne ka haq sirf mera hai" ☺️

Mujhe koi mumbai le jaao yaar main likh dungi 🤣

Thanks for reading. ❤️

Originally posted by: Priyal_10

This is sooo beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Their pain and emotions so well written 🥺❤️

Loved it Ritu🤗

Thankyou so much! 🤗

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

i commented on that page only

Damn!

And I've replied to your comment too.

Where's the brain at man? 🤣🤪