Love, Unrequited T2 [Ch 93 - Pg 144] T3 link Ch 148 - Page 66

Meera

If this wasn't upto the mark, I wonder how wonderful your up to the mark will be!! I am sorry that you are not feeling well 😒 Hope you feel better soon, GN!! 🤗

Don't worry about the polishing. You can always come back and redo the chapters in the way you want. I will be happy to read them again. Regarding your second point, I personally enjoy reading the part of story that leads to the romance more than the romance itself. You have made my heart flutter with many of your scenes so please don't doubt your skills ❤️

About the update - Loved the way you wrote about Kirti taking the Meera-route. She is completely submerged in what she thinks is a one-sided affection for Nishit. All her waking (and non-waking) moments are ruled by Nishit. She knows she has no right over him in any capacity, but still wonders about his life, his looks and his dating life. For all she knows, Nishit has moved on. But Kirti is still stuck in the play of shadows, which was the only place she thought they could belong together. Although my gut tells me Nishit doesn't have a thriving dating life, I would warn Kirti against trying to find more about it. She could end up stumbling upon something which she is better off not knowing. But her curiosity is justified, after all Radha kaise na jale? 😆 Is it possible that Nishit is following her with a different handle? I do that for LinkedIn 😁 Not for the same purpose ofcourse

I felt sad that Kirti is comparing Tejas' position in her life to hers in Nishit's. The two situations are world apart. While Tejas acted with vile intentions, Kirti's actions were driven either by ignorance or vulnerability.

Kirti knows better than to hope for a chance collision. But hope she will, and hope she should because ummed pe toh duniya kayam hain....uski aur hamari bhi 😆

I have a feeling there will be a collision because the next chapter says "Hum Tere Seher" 😍

Kirti is planning to wear saree, eh? My recommendation would be to wear the sky blue saree which had seemed to cast a spell on a certain Aggarwal. The junior Aggarwal, in case anyone has any doubts 😝 But on second thoughts, may be not. That saree is jinxed. A new beginning needs to start with a new saree, what say?

Hum tere seher mein

Didn't realize you posted this chapter as well! You are the bestest!! 😊🤗

I had completely forgotten about the fact that Rimjhim will also be present at the party. In a way, she has contributed in Kirti's success today. I am glad Kirti has none of the vengeance left for this woman. Nor is she feeling insecure in Rimjhim's presence. And why should she? She is no longer the lonely, troubled girl whom Rimjhim had the nerve to suggest was a gold digger. Kirti has earned this position today by her sheer hard work, talent and will power. She has made it all the way here on her own (and maybe with a bit of nudge from the Midnight boy 😋) It felt nice to see Kirti wander in the party with her head held high and notable people, including Vaibhav, saying lovely things about her.

The first thing that crossed my mind when Kirti felt the itch on her neck is that Nishit is around. Like you know...a gust of wind flows and the heroine knows her hero is around. But I guess, you decided to go with the more pragmatic approach. The ants managed to show the way where Kirti's heart wanted to lead 😆

So Nishit is at home, busy with something, eh? Is he holed up inside the cave room because he knew Kirti will be one of the guests, or does he have no clue about her presence? Does he even know that she is no longer married to Mayank? Never was? I think I am more curious than Kirti to know how he looks. I can't thank Prasanna enough for playing the cupid. Does she know about Nishit & Kirti's vows to not cross each other's path? But if the meeting is arranged by a stroke of serendipity, no complains, right? I do hope the cave room does have the cave man I am hoping to see. Pata chala andar Buta aur Sylvestor nikle! Not that I would mind, but will be disappointed for sure 😆

GN, take care of yourself. If writing this helps you then please do so. Otherwise keep it aside till you feel better. I can guarantee we’ll be here irrespective of when.

Loved these two chapters. Like the light at the end of a tunnel. The madness and obsession has been transferred. But apart from that, is it also a way for her to cope with not having her family around? Focusing on the one assumed to be not in town also helping with the absence of those in town. I love her growing self awareness; the hurt from Rimjhim’s words which had festered, she feels now the sting could’ve been from her self esteem issues too. Comparing her current feelings about the betrayal from Tejas, to what Nishit might be feeling about her. Seeing her there in that capacity must’ve felt like a slap to Rimjhim. I wonder if the son knows or will ever know about the words his mother had spoken. This is for the midnight boy and his girl!

उनकी आदत ही है वो तो

उनकी फितरत ही है वो तो

खेलते हैं

खेल के फिर तोड़ देते हैं

या तो तुम ही मेरे दिल को पत्थर कर दो जी

तू क्या जाने...

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Your work is awesome. Don't sell yourself short.

Meera

Our Meera is resorted to online stalking now. This Kishan is not about to budge anytime soon though.

Tagging readers since the update is on a different page than previously determined slots.

Meera, Tere Seher and Come Vorrei on Pg 86