Shivangi Khedkar {Pallavi} AT #70 | FightForYourFairytale | Note Pg 52 - Page 9

Originally posted by: PSharada

My 2cents - I fault the dialogue writers for the mismatch in connect between Raghav and Pallavi. Why do they write such OTT dialogues for Pallavi ? Even yesterday it sounded as if Raghav is her next project that needs makeover and she has to do it to prove what a successful person she is. One dialogue of - Raghav I can't survive without you and neither can Amma if anything were ever to happen to you and if you do this there are chances of getting hurt would have been so heartfelt. But nope the dialogues were all - oh I want to change you. In real life a marriage starts to break down the moment the spouse tries to change the partner - but sigh the creative's need to make FL a SP heroine.

In Mandar track I could understand Pallavi when she wants to get punishment for Keerti but when Mandar returns they totally made Pallavi dumb. I watched some scenes of Mandar track and from the first scene itself Mandar was shown as creep wanting to get close to pallavi(mandar coming to D house scene) - did they show Pallavi thinking about it or getting nervous about it ? Nope In fact they made get mandar okay and alright the project of Pallavi. That is why that track failed spectacularly when they made it pyaar vs Kartavya. Where was the turmoil of wife Pallavi ? Where is the insecurity of maybe her marriage to Raghav getting declared void? There was nothing - nada, zilch, zero.

And the pleating scene and massage scene - was it needed ? When it was shown that Mandar went as far as killing Devyani it is given that he is psycho. Instead of wasting that SS they could have given some other scenes to Pallavi to introspect or to think about. That was the reason they had to get Raghav in this track because the creative's just are not able to write the character of Pallavi as clear as they are able to write Raghav.

I don't fault the actors here - Both Sai and Shivangi are terrific and together they are explosive. But the reason why Sai is getting connected more to audience is because he is given a better mould to show his character. Pallavi unfortunately is being boxed in the constraints of SP female lead.

Thanks for writing your 2cents Sharada❤️

The dialogues does make Pallavi look like she is taking upon Raghav Rao makeover project... and the heavy duty dialogues don't stay with the people at all..Whereas giving Raghav dialogue such as " Moral Science ka lecture band karo" stays with the FD and he keeps getting compliments for that. Writers are creating much mess here. Simple lines for Pallavi will be more effective... do you think this is SP interference??

@bold purple - 100%

Originally posted by: Sunaina7

arey i was saying in sarcastic way

yes , it's her dialogues which are to be blamed. Her heart is in right place but words make difference to general audience.

Raghav dialogues sound like he is pouring his heart out and feel genuine most of the times

Ok I didn't got that sarcastic😂😂😂

Yeah that's why I said his acting reach audience like a raw flesh. On most places I see only pallavi Gali its about her lecture so yeah she may right on her thoughts and principles but dialogues isn't reaching audience.

Top of it she always compared with d house, how she deals both of them... Last track aai have hided about Mandy khand but she didn't told anything so fd immediately comparing with raghav..

It's writters always mess up.

Originally posted by: SexyPotato

Same thing is applicable for pallavi also, right? Why she should compromise her ethics. Oh she already did but did majority call her hypocrite here? No because it's raghav.

See that is where the creative's are not showing Pallavi's turmoil. She compromised her morals and ethics but did we get any conflict shown in the character. When Raghav was telling his pain during the drunk scene why couldn't they give a dialogue to Pallavi saying - main tumhe khona nahi chahti iss liye I didn't go to police.

This has to be a no holds fight if it has to click with the audience because real life main if you have such a difference in your perspectives the fight will be nasty only. But they are not giving the no holds fight from Pallavi's side - show her conflict, show her fear, show her insecurity in losing everything.

Originally posted by: aye-masakalii

Lol heaven knows, ainvayi kissi ko bali ka bakra banana tha, toh bana diya Pallavi ko. Maine iss track se pehle hi show dekhna band kar diya tha, but apparently Kirti had been locked ghar pe by her mom and brother, tricked Pallavi into letting her out, locked Pallavi kamre mein and eloped. So Jaya and Raghav held Pallavi accountable.

Raghav se zyaada mujhe Pallavi pe gussa aa raha tha, written updates pe bhi. He was being insufferable, and madam is like 'main apni galti sawaarungi' and saj sawar ke usse manane nikal padti thi. Bandi mein self respect uske husband ke dimaag ke saath ghaas charne chali gayi thi 🤦🏻‍♀️

Even Jaya blamed Pallavi????

Chal kya raha hai iss show mein????

And I did watch the scene where Raghav was supposed to shoot Mandy par papers jal gaye and Sunny-Mandy had a dhishoom dhishoom session.

My first question was- if RaghVi were supposed to get divorced,then why the heck were Raos in Deshmukh House?

Originally posted by: parboni

Even Jaya blamed Pallavi????

Chal kya raha hai iss show mein????

And I did watch the scene where Raghav was supposed to shoot Mandy par papers jal gaye and Sunny-Mandy had a dhishoom dhishoom session.

My first question was- if RaghVi were supposed to get divorced,then why the heck were Raos in Deshmukh House?

Maine woh bhi nahi dekhe episodes. I quit almost right after confession, bas beech beech ke scenes I've been seeing tab se. Last 2-3 weeks se woh bhi band kar diya.

Umm, I think Mandaar invited the Raos. He wanted them to witness his and Pallavi's engagement.

Originally posted by: PSharada

I agree - Raghav's pain and dialogues were better showcased than Pallavi's inner turmoil. And Sai was superb in showing the pain and trauma in the drunk scene.

This is one of the reason, she goes as punching bag..

She is strong and have valid principles but it's not reaching audience because of dialogues.. sai always rock on drunk scene..

Originally posted by: parboni

What's the point of dragging SunKee track to this extent?

Trust me we too ask the same question every single episode. Why do Sunkee get so much SS in every single episode.

Congratulations on the new AT 🤗

Another scene I loved in yesterday' s epi was Amrutha Manasi 😃 she needed to hear that and am so glad Amrutha didnt sugar coat anything.

Originally posted by: -abz-

@bold- He is more than smuggled diamonds.

What the hell? Didn't he break off his friendship with Ved because of the entire smuggling fiasco? Phir khud kyu smuggler bann raha hai ye?

Originally posted by: PSharada

My 2cents - I fault the dialogue writers for the mismatch in connect between Raghav and Pallavi. Why do they write such OTT dialogues for Pallavi ? Even yesterday it sounded as if Raghav is her next project that needs makeover and she has to do it to prove what a successful person she is. One dialogue of - Raghav I can't survive without you and neither can Amma if anything were ever to happen to you and if you do this there are chances of getting hurt would have been so heartfelt. But nope the dialogues were all - oh I want to change you. In real life a marriage starts to break down the moment the spouse tries to change the partner - but sigh the creative's need to make FL a SP heroine.

In Mandar track I could understand Pallavi when she wants to get punishment for Keerti but when Mandar returns they totally made Pallavi dumb. I watched some scenes of Mandar track and from the first scene itself Mandar was shown as creep wanting to get close to pallavi(mandar coming to D house scene) - did they show Pallavi thinking about it or getting nervous about it ? Nope In fact they made get mandar okay and alright the project of Pallavi. That is why that track failed spectacularly when they made it pyaar vs Kartavya. Where was the turmoil of wife Pallavi ? Where is the insecurity of maybe her marriage to Raghav getting declared void? There was nothing - nada, zilch, zero.

And the pleating scene and massage scene - was it needed ? When it was shown that Mandar went as far as killing Devyani it is given that he is psycho. Instead of wasting that SS they could have given some other scenes to Pallavi to introspect or to think about. That was the reason they had to get Raghav in this track because the creative's just are not able to write the character of Pallavi as clear as they are able to write Raghav.

I don't fault the actors here - Both Sai and Shivangi are terrific and together they are explosive. But the reason why Sai is getting connected more to audience is because he is given a better mould to show his character. Pallavi unfortunately is being boxed in the constraints of SP female lead.

This post is 💯. I have nothing further to add. Trust me the amount of defending I need to do Pallavi is massive... Main pagal ho jati hoo and sometimes I don't even have arguments to defend her...

Today the CVs could have made Raghav dirty by making his blabber wrong things when drunk but no all points he made were respectfully made. Usko defend karne ki zarurat nahi padti because he's written so well.

I feel bad for Shivi coz she must be getting the flak for a poorly written Pallavi.

Makers agar tum female leads nahi likh sakte then u should go find a chullu because itv thrives on female leads.