Abhiya AT #243 ~ Mera Tere Siwa Koi Aur Nahi - Page 39

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

👍🏼 Yeah my problem is I don’t want to rush content but I also feel like it’s beginning to drag 😆

I think this chapter will be one more buildup chapter and then next will be more drastic 😲 or do you think I should escalate now?

See in my opinion you have already closed the issue of abhiya relationship. So there is not much too explore unless u want to discuss their aging and other things in much detail.

Then jeh chapter is also closed and deepanita as well. U can always bring her back in final war but she doesnt have much role.

Kabeer n piya crusb thing closed the moment abhiya started.

Piya and her father is left but it doesnt get as much priority or screenspace. That brother things is also side scene and can run in parallel

So the only conflict i remember is metz and that othe vitael i forgot the name (sorry)

We would wnat to see what metz plans with him whether to get abhay back or destroy him - like she said if ahe cnatnhave no one can

And on abhays side naturally he has only one goal.

So u shoudl definitly include conflict because without that chapters can become fillers. Conflict is the only glue that holds characters together in a story.

so short me my suggestion is escalate. But again that is how i see things. U should see what u feel with your characters

And u know if u want u can always have some loose ends in case in future u want to create sequel kind of things.

😊

Originally posted by: Abhaythevampire

See in my opinion you have already closed the issue of abhiya relationship. So there is not much too explore unless u want to discuss their aging and other things in much detail.

Then jeh chapter is also closed and deepanita as well. U can always bring her back in final war but she doesnt have much role.

Kabeer n piya crusb thing closed the moment abhiya started.

Piya and her father is left but it doesnt get as much priority or screenspace. That brother things is also side scene and can run in parallel

So the only conflict i remember is metz and that othe vitael i forgot the name (sorry)

We would wnat to see what metz plans with him whether to get abhay back or destroy him - like she said if ahe cnatnhave no one can

And on abhays side naturally he has only one goal.

So u shoudl definitly include conflict because without that chapters can become fillers. Conflict is the only glue that holds characters together in a story.

so short me my suggestion is escalate. But again that is how i see things. U should see what u feel with your characters

And u know if u want u can always have some loose ends in case in future u want to create sequel kind of things.

😊

Thought about it in the shower and yeah escalating now sounds more interesting 😆 that means I need to rewrite the first half of the chapter but that’s okay

thank you for the suggestions Nikki 🤗 I really need to start picking up the pace a little

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

Thought about it in the shower and yeah escalating now sounds more interesting 😆 that means I need to rewrite the first half of the chapter but that’s okay

thank you for the suggestions Nikki 🤗 I really need to start picking up the pace a little

I am glad i was of help 😊

Originally posted by: Abhaythevampire

I am glad i was of help 😊

big because usually no one says it directly in comments and I’m feeling so burnt out that it’s affecting the story 🤣

Actually i would also like to hear a little more detailed opinion of the story i wrote. You know like how are the characters feelings? I wanted to go with little bit goofy comedy and romance with touch of war and evil things. Was i able to pull it off? How did piya and abhay relation seem? The way i tried to work it out. Was it too much or too litle or soemthing?

And to be honest so far u r the only one who has given any review 😆😭😆 (cant decide whether to laugh or cry at this)

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

big because usually no one says it directly in comments and I’m feeling so burnt out that it’s affecting the story 🤣

I agree. Comments me log jyada bolte nahi he. I ahve been wanting to disucss with some for so long finally u started today. 😊

Hi Meghna 🤗

I need to catch reading your story. I am way behind

I'm sorry I need to catch up. I will soon. 😎

Hi dear,🤗

What is your name. I am sorry I forgot

Originally posted by: Abhiya29

Hi dear,🤗

What is your name. I am sorry I forgot

I am Niki.its okay. 😊🤗

Happens we all have fish memory 😆