Next track: Pallavi knows about RR illegal business - Sayli’s script - Page 11

By now, I have no faith that any moral disagreement between Raghav and Pallavi will transform their relationship or grow their characters. It will be as superficial and forgettable as everything else in the four months since Pallavi lost her family. Pallavi will be helpless and pliant, Raghav will strut and fume irrationally, and they'll dress up to make eyes at each other.

In the early episodes, Raghav would play all sorts of dirty tricks on Pallavi's business and Pallavi would only fight fairly, somehow find a way out, and convince him to back off. It was interesting to watch their gradual transformation. Raghav, who saw powerful people as rivals, destitutes as his own people to protect, and middle class people as contemptible, couldn't confine Pallavi to any category. She was his rival and someone to protect and unapologetically middle class - the only person who could make him take back a gift. Meanwhile, Pallavi was embracing new ideas like online marketing and charging double when she caught Seema trying to cheat her.

It would have been fascinating to see a natural progression of their love: Raghav remorseful for his cruelty to Pallavi; standing up as her friend against Sulochana; finding comfort in Pallavi so that he manages not to lose his temper or get drunk; behaving respectably to convince her family to accept his marriage proposal ... all while Pallavi takes action to avenge herself against Raghav; discovers his past and how many people love him; enjoys being irresponsible with him; realizes that she feels protective of Raghav.

By rushing into marriage and declarations of love, the creative team sacrificed Pallavi's character (and Jaya's, Kirti's). Pallavi's passions and principles are forgotten, and Raghav is no longer torn between his ambition and his need for moral approval; he has it all. I have been so dissatisfied with the show's failure to explore Pallavi and Raghav as conflicting personalities rather than pretty people, I wrote a fan fiction to address it, and joined this forum to share it:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/mehndi-hai-rachne-wali/5241612/antaraya-timiropasantaye-a-fan-fiction-updated-with-chapter-2

Meanwhile, what I follow on screen is so frustrating, I know I should stop watching already. In today's episode, Pallavi's Āī was frantic because her son was about to be shot and killed before her eyes by Raghav, and Pallavi just kept on dancing! These characters and situations are totally unrelatable to me, and I don't think I can write or even imagine a satisfying story for them.

Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

Oh long time

I think aditi (blushing) is here too

Yes... She knew 😆

Originally posted by: DivyaaaV

Maybe this track will go like

Pallavi worries for Raghav, she’s scared about what would happen to him if he got caught, or about his enemies and his safety

I mean she doesn’t really know how his business life is, his rivals, what it means to be a don kind of guy

so that might be where this track will go, she’ll be concerned for him

but it could also be that she’s concerned about the family now, Raghav lived alone for so many years and no one really knew about his mom and sister

now they all live together, so Pallavi could be worried about that too

it’s a nice plot actually, a type of situation that can arise between a husband and wife

Ofc pallavi doesn’t know that Raghav is experienced in all of this, he’s been dealing with this for many years while keeping his family safe, but she could also be right that their family can be made a target much easily now (considering that everyone knows the Rao’s, and Keerthi is a villain herself too)

a point to be considered from both sides

Also Pallavi's past to be uncovered and then new entry of a villain!! Krishna Rao!!

Originally posted by: gayatherry88

Good track ✌️✌️

Pallavi know diamond tax evasion on lion track and also have more knowledge on nikil arrest. She accepted him who he is and what he is, he also not even try to show different version of him to her. She accepted his non veg eating habits, his drinking, his attitude and now it's about is diamond tax evasion.. she never interfere on his business unnecessarily but when it's required she will step in for sure so how both going to handle and comes to common ground going to be interesting. Sure there going to huge conflict on ideology and let's see how they roll.

This actually can be a good track with Raghvi having ideological differences!!

I totally agree with you. You are one of the few people who wanted to see their friendship before falling in love with eachother. I read someone else,s similar thoughts about this two days ago and i am satisfied that some people think like me.

Actually post marriage makers ne story ko itna rush kiya ke raghav aur pallavi ki enemies se friends and then friends se lovers banne ki journey nazar hi nahi aayi after marriage pallavi ka character totally change ho gaya with in few days she fell in love with raghav dse ke business ko aage le jana mall me shop lena these were all her dreams but after marriage she totally forget about it and all her focus shifted to raghav i am not complaining but it would have been better if they showed her inclination towards raghav slowly not in a hurry. To show their passionate love story it would have been fine if makers show gradual progression in their relation.

That is why now i find something missing in their romantic scenes

Your views

Who is sayli ?

So next track Raghav’s illegal business . Business n not paying custom duty , So dis time for Farhad , Raghav will go to jail 😆

So tat new servant stolen raghav gifted necklace to palz , tats y ve to close doors 😆

Seems dis time servant came to ask for dinner n two busy , not interrupted n stolen necklace 😆

New servant stolen necklace n tat exposed Raghav’s illegal business . They can’t give police complaint n Raghav-Farhad talks n palz will come to know

I will try to follow the forum rules and not complain about being in the minority; I guess I am just not the target audience for this show and that's fine, I have another show that I enjoy more. I only caught up with episodes from the beginning when I found out that Ashok Phaldesai was joining the cast, and I expected Mandar to be a romantic rival, not a self-harming prop with no personality. I'll probably stop watching this week and I'll no longer have a reason to visit the forum.

I find Marathi daily dramas more to my taste even though I'm a man and Marathi male leads tend to be innocent mama's boys who need smart and capable female leads to empower them. I enjoy watching well-defined supporting characters who have complex and believable motivations to intersect with the lead story. Even on Jiv Jhala Yeda Pisa, where the male lead was a violent criminal, his motivation was to keep his mother's drudgery in the past, and he was blindly devoted to a mother figure politician; he listened to deep thoughts from his disapproving but loving father, and when his sister failed her exams, he knew that she wouldn't feel better if he interfered. After the forced marriage, the leads clashed for months until the wife's attempt to humiliate the husband almost got him killed, and at that moment she remembered him helping her when she was all alone, and saved his life, leading to their friendship and romance. A slow pace keeps the story alive.

Raghav was lovable as a tragic character, and he's boring when every moral voice (Farhad, Pallavi, Jaya, Sharada, Milind) is on his side and everyone opposing him (Vijay, Kirti, Manasi, Mandar) is just envious. I see so many comments appreciating or excusing Raghav's toxic masculinity: Raghav needs to act like a mob boss; his waving a gun makes him a family man; his smuggling and bribery isn't really criminal; his drunk driving and constant drinking are handled responsibly ... it's not that I have a problem with Raghav being a dangerous and immoral character, but his actions that affect the characters around him should beget reactions, and when that is missing, it's a dramatic failure.

If I only watched one episode per week, this one-situation-after-another approach to storytelling might not matter, but if I'm supposed to invest my time, I want to see a character growth trajectory. Raghav can still be the same character, he can still want to get drunk or bribe officials, but he can control himself because he thinks of Pallavi first. We could see him trying to do the right thing to impress Jaya, and succeeding!

Originally posted by: MsPrez

From the script seen in Sayli’s Insta reel:

1. sakta main kyun ki vo South Africa wale diamonds hain. jin pe
   
2. main… unhe airport se illegal tareeke se nijalvaya tha main.
3. nahi janta ye sab… usko nahi pata ki main diamonds bina custom duty bhare
4. airport se… isliye mere ko vo haar 23 lakh pada aur market ke loye vo 50 lakh ka
5. make sure Farhad ki hum bina police ke us chor tak pahunche… AUR KISI BHI
6. PALLAVI TAK YE BAAT NAHI JANA CHAHIYE…kyunki vo ye sab nahi samjhega…
7. aaj nahi toh kal bhabi ko ye baat pata chal hi jayegi…
8. nahi chala toh age kaise pata chalega??? Tu, bas, dhyan se kaam
9. apna business kaise bhi chalaye, wife ko usse koi matlab nahi
10. is very firm and clear on his stand.
11. + Keerti + Raghav + Pallavi (still in last night or sleep clothes)
12. courage to talk with Jaya about her marriage with Sunny, she
13. 
    
14. still very firmly put up her wish of marrying
15. Amma… please… ekbar Sunny ko janne ki koshish toh kijiye… mujhe ussi se shaadi karni hai… main kisi aur ke sath zindagi bitane ke bare me soch bhi nahi sakti
16. As she is rehearsing, we see Jaya walking in swiftly rushing to her cupboard, looking for something. Keerti sees her tensed and asks
17. Kirti: Amma itni pareshan kyu hain aap??
18. Jaya: Pallavi ka ek diamond haar kho gaya hai. Dekh raha hai, kahi galti se mere paas toh nahi aa gaya??
19. Kirti: Ohh…ok

Seems like jo diamond necklace Raghav will gift Pallavi in their romantic date, that will be lost (probably stolen by the new Naidu servant) and eventually Pallavi will know about Raghav's illegal business.

https://twitter.com/prin_peace/status/1433376246189080576?s=21

It is a good track no doubt.. but sunki thing is unbearable now for me.. let's see.. I want acha Raghvi moment first .. but again interruption I guess 🤣

Originally posted by: MsPrez

From the script seen in Sayli’s Insta reel:

1. sakta main kyun ki vo South Africa wale diamonds hain. jin pe
   
2. main… unhe airport se illegal tareeke se nijalvaya tha main.
3. nahi janta ye sab… usko nahi pata ki main diamonds bina custom duty bhare
4. airport se… isliye mere ko vo haar 23 lakh pada aur market ke loye vo 50 lakh ka
5. make sure Farhad ki hum bina police ke us chor tak pahunche… AUR KISI BHI
6. PALLAVI TAK YE BAAT NAHI JANA CHAHIYE…kyunki vo ye sab nahi samjhega…
7. aaj nahi toh kal bhabi ko ye baat pata chal hi jayegi…
8. nahi chala toh age kaise pata chalega??? Tu, bas, dhyan se kaam
9. apna business kaise bhi chalaye, wife ko usse koi matlab nahi
10. is very firm and clear on his stand.
11. + Keerti + Raghav + Pallavi (still in last night or sleep clothes)
12. courage to talk with Jaya about her marriage with Sunny, she
13. 
    
14. still very firmly put up her wish of marrying
15. Amma… please… ekbar Sunny ko janne ki koshish toh kijiye… mujhe ussi se shaadi karni hai… main kisi aur ke sath zindagi bitane ke bare me soch bhi nahi sakti
16. As she is rehearsing, we see Jaya walking in swiftly rushing to her cupboard, looking for something. Keerti sees her tensed and asks
17. Kirti: Amma itni pareshan kyu hain aap??
18. Jaya: Pallavi ka ek diamond haar kho gaya hai. Dekh raha hai, kahi galti se mere paas toh nahi aa gaya??
19. Kirti: Ohh…ok

Seems like jo diamond necklace Raghav will gift Pallavi in their romantic date, that will be lost (probably stolen by the new Naidu servant) and eventually Pallavi will know about Raghav's illegal business.