KALMA TS:-Dil Tere Bin Dhadke Naa (chapter-3 updated 30-08-2021) - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Wooowww praku kitna acha tha ye chapter superb matlab itni saari cheezein itne achein se likhana tooo good🤗❤️🤗

Kalyani Malhar nok-jhok maza aagaya...😆😆

Sarthak scolded them both both laughed at each other dono bacchein hai bilkul 🤣

Kalyani atul dynamic is still better actually phir bhi he is the villian for Malhar 👍🏼🤪

Samatharv huff inn dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta sampada is same here as show 🤪🤪


Malhar ka kya plan sab chalein to gayien phone kiska aaya jiski vajah se kalyani gayegi hi gayegi

Thank u vanshu......glad u loved it....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I'm so loving each part thank u for updating quickly ❤❤

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Originally posted by: Kalmalover

I'm so loving each part thank u for updating quickly ❤❤

Thanks alfiya....glad u enjoyed it

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Nice update

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Originally posted by: balan04

Nice update

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Glad to know you loved it.....may i know your name.....

Well I'll tag you as well as pm u too

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CHAPTER- 3


ON A CALL


Kalyani- par palak maine to apne naam hatwaane ko kaha tha na tujhse.....tune hataaya nhi abhi tak.....

On the other side malhar, sarthak, neha ,palak , and the other people of her band were present there.....malhar was present there with palak and was smiling seeing his plan getting work.....

Palak- haa par mere dhyaan se hi nikal gya tha kalyani.....please aaja na jaldi se....tu jaanti hai na ye kitna important carnival hai dean ne khud kaha hai na jisne participate kr liya hai vo agar nhi krna chahta hai to 3 din ke andar apna naam hatwa le or ab to kitna time ho gya....kuch krke aa jana varna suspend ho jayegi tu pr tu pehle bhi kitni baar ho chuki hai......please.....

Kalyani POV- yaar kahi ye sb malharji to nhi kr rhe hai mujhe participate krwane ke liye.......vo kya kr skte hai main jaanti hu par isne bhi to galti se bhi malharji ka naam nhi liya.....sach m esa hi hoga or agar suspend ho gyi to......vaise bhi itna kalesh chal rha hai or main risk nhi le skti......

Palak- kalyani????? So gyi kya???

Kalyani- nhi.....

Palak- kalyani dekh function ko abhi time hai.....tu bas aa jaa dress makeup sb available hai.....please jaldi aana haa.....ok byee!!!!!

Saying this she cuts the call...... And kalyani hurriedly goes to get ready so that she must reach on time and there she has to ready also.....


COLLEGE

Malhar- thanks palak.....tumne meri help ki.....

Palak- not to mention sir......I always love you.....

Malhar- kyaaa!!!!!

Palak- mera mtlb......main humesha aapki respect krti hu uss din bhi 26 jan ko aap or kalyani nhi hote to pta nhi kya ho jaata......koi bhi help chahiye ho to i am always here.....bye.....mujhe jana hoga

Malhar- sure!!!!!

She and the other group leaves too as they were not fully ready......


Sarthak- acha hua principal ne baat maan li......varna aaj to bhens paani m hi chali jaati mere priy bhatije ki vajah se.....kyu????

Malhar- kya kaka!!!!!

Sarthak- acha!!! Ab main chalta hua....main baaki ka dekh ke aata hu......jaao tum bhi apni seat le lo....function ko abhi time hai.....

Malhar- ji kaka!!!!

Saying this Malhar wents to the auditorium which was full of people......the deshmukhs sat on the second row as first row was of chief guests ( ACP Malhar and Commisioner) , teachers and the dean of the college......everyone was busy in their chit chats.....malhar goes to his reserved seat which was by side to commissioner.....

Commisioner- where were you Malhar??? Mujhe laga ki tum abhi tak aaye hi nhi....

Malhar- sorry sir.....vo main security or preparations check krne gaya tha ki kahi koi problem to nhi hai.....

Commissioner- hmm.....all okay????

Malhar- ji sir!!!!


AT DRESSING ROOM OF BACKSTAGE

Neha- finally tu aa gyi kalyani .....ab jaldi baith tujhe ready bhi hona hai

The batch turned to kalyani to see her and complimented her to came on time as it was just half hour left to start the fest

Palak- ye le kalyani jaldi se change kr le.....tb tak main or neha makeup or har styling products nikal lete hai ....jaldi jaa yaar we have no time....

Kalyani- fine!!!!!

After a while, kalyani came in blue mini crop and a cool jacket with a black leggings......she was looking super duper cool in it....and said

Kalyani- chalo!!!! Now help me out!!!! Jaldi jaldi kro.....

Neha- haa haa!!!!

Palak- tu aag laga degi Kalyani.....main bta rhi hu Malhar sir flat ho jayenge tujhe pe.....

Kalyani looked herself into the mirror and imagined malhar standing behind her and praised her looks ......her imagination broked when palak said

Palak- kya ritwik.....tujhe bhi kuch krwana hai kya....nhi na....to yha kyu khada hai.....

The girls smiled....

Neha- kalyani batch m se kuch ko htaya gya hai or kuch join huye hai.....tera intro bhi krwana hai.....or apne batch ka name change hogya hai new name THE BEATLE ROCKERS

Kalyani- beatle rockers.....wow!!!!!

After a while she was fully ready.....the performances began but there was still time for her beatle rockers...... she was looking gorgeous her hair curled with a french braid , a light pink lipbalm, a chained bracelet in her right hand and sneakers......

Neha- finally ho gyi tu ready.....

Kalyani- haa finally..... Vaise tum logo ka ye koi plan to nhi tha na mujhe ese bulane ka.....

Neha palak looked at each other and answered hesitantly

Palak- nhi yaar!!!! Hume sach m tu chahiye thi....chahe to principal se puch le.....

Kalyani- nhi iski koi zarurat nhi hai.....

Neha- chal chal!!!! Tera intro to krwa de..... Guys team up.....

Palak- see !!!! 4 girls and 6 boys..... 7 songs of different genres.....

Kalyani- 5 pehle to 3 the na......

Neha- haa!!!! Bola to changes huye hai.....

Kalyani- hmmm!!!! Continue..... Vaise ek minute ye introduction kyu......main jaanti hu yaar sbko.....

Neha- its official madam.....

Kalyani- jarrurat nhi hai!!!!! Ye hai kiara this is aman, rohit , rishi , arun, kunal and of course mera bhai ritwik.....

She said hi-fying him and they smiled on their banters and kalyani's way of naming them too.....when palak said.....

Palak- genres tujhe.....

Kalyani- haa haa janti hu genres mujhe khud select krne hai.... romantic pop vagera vagera.....

Ritwik- itna sb kuch jaanti thi to kyu nhi hissa le rhi thi madam....

Kalyani- ab to le rhi hu na sir......acha guys ye btao humare competitors ka kya haal hai???

Neha- dekh...... Tough competition hoga ye humesha se jaanti thi.....pehle vo perform krenge uske baad hum..... Pehle dono teams 5-5 songs gaayenge....or 6th pe hoga face off yaani dono teams ek saath stage par perform krengi.....

Kalyani- cool!!!!!!

Neha- tujhe lyrics yaad hai na???? Bhul to nhi

Kalyani- bilkul nhi..... kalyani rane hu main.....koi......

She stopped when she herself addressed her as KALYANI RANE ...... Somewhere anger was present in her which didn't go unnoticed by her troops....

Ritwik- kya hua....

Kalyani- kuch nhi...... when everyone heard


ANNOUNCEMENT ON MIC

Host- to yahi par khatam hoti hai dance performance umeed krta hu ki aapko humare college ke baccho ki ye shandaar peshkash kaafi pasand aayi hogi.....to badhte hai agli performance ke liye .......


CHANGING ROOM

Palak- dance competition ho gya hai ab.....speech hai na.....

Kalyani remembers that Anupriya has participated in this and walks to her room which is not far from there.....

Kalyani- main bas abhi aati hu.....okkk

Neha- haa


AT ANUPRIYA'S ROOM

Kalyani- aai!!!!!

Anupriya- tum kalyani....yaha kaise?????

Kalyani- arey vo sb choddo kitni achi lag rhi ho.....kaha tha na maine ye saree achi lagegi.....

Anupriya- haa kalyani......par tum yaha kaise aayi???? Tum to bada keh rhi thi ki .....main participate nhi kr rhi hu jisko jo krna hai kr le....main apne life ka decision khud liya hai iss baar...... Hmmm....kya hua

They both laughed on what she said......

Kalyani- vaah aai!!!! Bilkul meri mimicry kr leti ho tum.....mere saath rehke bilkul mere jaise ho gyi ho....she giggled on her words

Anupriya- mi...micry.....ye kya hota hai....

Kalyani- tcchhh!!!!! Aai mimi or cry mtlb mimicry....mtlb kisi ki hubhhu acting krna.....use kehte hai micry......

She laughed teasing anupriya.....

Kalyani- acha aai!!! Main kaise aayi kb aayi vo choddo tumhari speech shuru hone wali hai jaao ab jaldi se hum ghar pr baat krenge ok.....ab jaao.....all the best....

She kissed on her mother's cheeks and waved her an up thumb .... Anupriya departed from there and kalyani too goes back to her room.....


BACK AT CHANGING ROOM

Ritwik- vo dekho kalyani aa gyi.....

Kalyani- kya hua????

Neha- Raushan aaya tha.... challenge krke gya hai ki singing m vo hume haraa dega.....

Kalyani- (giglingly) what!!!! Hume haraayega.....ok don't worry ye hum bhi jaante hai kon kise haraane wala hai....so chill ok

Palak- kalyani hum sb chill hi hai par mujhe lag rha hai ki face off m kuch to hoga.....

Listening this kalyani gets into thinking...... suddenly her thinking got broke when the host made the announcement of anupriya to come on stage..... listening this she gets a smile on her face.....


IN AUDITORIUM

Sarthak hurriedly came from back and grabs his respective seat......and breathes heavily......his seat was not too far from malhar..... Sarthak raisingly his eyebrows asked malhar why he was smiling to which he smiled and responded in negotiation......

The whole crowd was paying heed to her speech......AS was somewhere happy but instead she chosed her ego as she believes that she still supports The Rane And The Family.

Sarthak was smiling through the time of her speech and unknowingly Anupriya's eyes gets locked with him for a second......after few minutes she completed her speech.....it was brilliant......the auditorium was full of the sound of round of applause from each and every corner seeing which she got bit emotional as she believed that she has no identity rather than atul's past but today she believes she has her own name......She goes back from stage as there was a performance left and a broad smile paved way on malhar's face......

Host- to ab badhte hai ek or shaandaar jaandaar peshkash ki taraf...... To aaiye swagat krte hai THE SIZZLERS.....


IN CHANGING ROOM

Palak- lo aa gyi ghadi......ab humari performance hai....mujhe dar lag rha hai yaar.....

Neha- yaar palak chill kr......

Kalyani- guys.....ab meri baat suno.....kiara or neha tum dono piche se gaaoge mtlb bgm tu log kroge......aman will handle guitar......kunal band okkk..... Rohit rishi and arun bgm...... mai or ritwik lead krenge ok...cool......kisi ko koi problem to nhi hai....

Neha- nhi yaar......tu hi lead kr......tu hi hai jo jeetayegi....

Kalyani- guys tumhare bina this is not possible.....so let expect a victory.....

Saying this all forwarded their hand and keeps it on one on other and flewing it in the air everyone said......THE BEATLE ROCKERS and everyone smiled.....


After a while it was now their turn....they all headed towards the stage......their was a darkness ......family members were surprised to see kalyani there.....aparna made disgusted looks atul was happy but no sign of happiness could be seen on AS's face...... After few seconds her eyes matched with her dear Malharji......he was in awwww seeing her looks.....he could not help him but to look her .....simple, subtle and beautiful as always......they both smiled seeing each other.......but atul caught them looking each other and turned his face to kalyani and after few seconds the performance beganed....... all grabbed their positions as kalyani directed them too....


https://youtu.be/OFiwqGhi61I


All through her performance......malhar was sweetly looking and adoring her ..... through her performance her every movement of hands and legs....it looked like her feet too joined her in singing......


This song was only for girls and boys cleared off the stage

https://youtu.be/tYWSbBXEBWY

During her this song.....he didn't know what was happening with him as till now he teased her saying that her voice was not too good but he can't even make fun of her now on this topic.....her bold face expressions her every movement throughout the song made him go wow!!!!! And was thinking that she should win and she deserves this


As for the next song......boys came up.....and was ready with their instruments

https://youtu.be/U1ovRUrC9bs

The line where it comes "TU HI HAI SAVERA MERA........JAAKE KHATAM YE MERA SAARA JAHAN" she unknowingly pointed her index finger to him.......malhar smiled seeing her sweet gesture through her song..... She after sometime realized that she pointed him but not to make it awkward she let it be....and passed her smile to him.....

Commissioner- i must say....your wife is doing wonders ACP......I think the award should go to her....

Malhar- (unknowingly) I know.....

Commissioner looked at him and malhar realized what he just said.....

Malhar- mera mtlb hai ki acha perform kr hi hai par akele thodi na kr rhi hai....uska poora band bhi hai.....


https://youtu.be/8mbsGb8tVRw

Throughout her this song her eyes got locked with him until it was over.....there was something which they both wanted to say but hesistated but kalyani spoke all that to him with him through her this song.....all this was witnessed by atul which made him irked.......all the audience were enjoying happily and too hummed with her while some demanded for her more performances....the lights with the songs made it so real.....malhar's perception that her generation songs are too bad made him change that due to her singing and lyrics...... He now believes that every song has something different in it....... The bands.....the bgms.....all were going hand-in-hand.


https://youtu.be/hkKQzN-1GVA

The moment everyone heard this the auditorium was full of hooting and all over the clappings.....malhar happily looked around to see how glad were the audience due to her performance......he felt that all those songs were dedicated to him......singing this she felt short of breath which didn't go unnoticed by him....but she managed it somehow by removing mic for few seconds and take breathe...... Frequently her eyes matched with him.....her hands movement during her this performance was something different.....her movement of legs and her feet danced with it too..... sarthak was too happy with it as malhar finally made her happy amd his plan worked it too......

AS- parmeshwara!!!!!! Ese gaane gaane ke liye kisne kaha tha iss ladki ko....kuch to lihaaz rakh leti.....

Pallavi POV- yaa byaa!!!! Ye aau saheb bhi na....kitna acha to gaa rhi hai agar nhi aati na to kitna kuch pachtaane ko rehta.....

Atharv- kya gaa rhi hai na sampu....lagta hai uss hawaldaar ke liye gaa rhi hai....

Sampada- mtlb kya hai tumhara......jaisii uski awaaz hai vaise hi gaayegi na.....hunnhhh!!!!

Atharv- jo bhi ho par kamaal kr rhi hai

His this words made her fumed in anger......

With this the performance of BEATLE ROCKERS was over......all the audience was giving her round of applause....some even stand and was praising her demanding her more performance and she had a glow amd happiness on her face and thanked to her friends for making her agree to perform.....

Malhar POV- kaha tha na ki tum aaogi bhi or perform bhi krogi......

He too clapped which didn't go unnoticed by her and passed a smile to him.....

They all were present there when the host came and.....

Host- main jaanta hu ki ye shaandaar peshkash ke baad bhi aapka man nhi bhara hoga isliye ek face off bhi hai.....to ladies and gentlemen be ready for another rocking performance.......

Kiara whispered- kalyani inke band m ek bhi ladki nhi hai.....all boys

Kalyani- janti hu kiara..... isliye haraana or bhi aasan hoga.....

Kalyani called everyone to gather around and said.....

Kalyani- guys!!!!! Apne moves apne movement dhyan se krna.....or apne mic ko bhi ache se pakadna....no problem.....ok.....ek dum calm.....fine....

All nodded in yes.....and the face off performance beganed.....THE SIZZLERS band performance was also great and audience cheered for them too......after a while it was the turn of another band and they started with the song.....

https://youtu.be/25ROFXjoaAU

And it was again a tremendous and stunning performance.....The Sizzlers were no more sizzling ....malhar observed them and smiled a bit ...... Malhar always go in aww with her body movements....he never saw this side of her.... though he knew she was bold and fearless but never assumed her this attitude and her this quality made him question that is he falling in love with her or is it just her performance.....

AS- ye kya gaa rhi hai???

Atul- aau saheb....english gaana hai......english m gaa rhi hai....

AS- haa hum jaante hai....bas ye pta kr rhe the ki tumhe pta hai ya nhi.....

Atul laughed on her talks and again enjoyed her daughter's wonderful performance......

Raushan- what the hell!!!!!! Humne kyu nhi socha ki english bhi sing kr skte hai ....shit!!!!!

Another boy- yaar raushan.....teri galti hai tujhe sochna chahiye the......

Raushan- shut up!!!!!

And the performance was over and all her band seemed tored but hide it with their smile.....kalyani was feeling short of breath but she managed somehow as singing five songs one by one wasn't an easy task.....th auditorium was full of praises, hooting and clapping......


Who will win the prize????

Will raushan do something that will make kalyani lose the trophy????


How was the chapter guy???

Please give your reviews on this.

Edited by PRAKRITI_12 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wonderful update praku baby you rocked it 😎😎🤗kya kahoon tareef main shabdh kam pad rahein hai itni achi tarah sein har scene ko describe kiya haina ki main diwani ho gayi teri sacchi love you for this 🤗🤗

Malhar's attempts to make her participate😆😆kalyani neha's conversation😆 imagining kalyani I can totally say Malhar poora lattu hua pada hoga uspein 😳😳 isshh aur kalyani ko apni team ko motivate karna giving all the instructions as a team leader are superb👍🏼👍🏼 Malhar get mesmerized seeing his baiko usska har ek gaana apnein malharji kein liyein Malhar's smile throughout her all performance awwwwww

Raushan kuch gardbard na kardein bass varna karega to apne singham haina khabar lene kein liyein 😎😎commissioner praising and Malhar's proudness offffo 😆

Mujhein lagata hain kalyani kein short breathe problem main kuch chupa hai pakka meaning a wonderful kalma scene is on the way 😳😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wooww... The update is too good prakriti.. I loved it.

Malhar made kalyani participate and is aww by her singing. Kalyani ne bhi kya mastt gaana select ki hai, sab malhar ke liye. I loved it.

Ab ye raushan kuch na kare bass. Aur kalyani ka ye breathing problem bhi dekne ke liye hai na malhar.

Nice update prakriti. It's good.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow the chapter was aww❤

I enjoyed kalyani performance with malhar😂

Plzz update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Fantastic update Praku..

Toh aakhir Malharji made Kalyani take part in the competition.. 👍🏼

And enjoyed her performance totally with a smile on his face.. 😍

Atharv praising Kallu aur Jal gayi Sampu.. 🤣


All the songs were awesome..

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