ARIYA, SHIVI, SAMSHA & KAVI FF: PYAAR - Page 2

Loved the chapter....loved Shreeza's as usual bickering, Chotu's as well as Ayesha's outbursts.... Rathore ka toh kuch pal ke liye bolti hi bandh kar diya Ayesha ne....aur Arjun itney calmly kaise behave kiya? Lagta hai biwi ki asar hua hai....I guess commissioner 2nd unit & new recruitment members ko introduce karwane aa sakte hai ya phir new case dene...am I right???

Continue soon...will be waiting for the next. Thanks for the pm....but pm mein tumhari story thread ki page link nahi aayi....that's why the link was of no use. Jis page pe tumne chapter aaj update kiya usi page ki link diya jata hai pm pe.

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Loved the chapter....loved Shreeza's as usual bickering, Chotu's as well as Ayesha's outbursts.... Rathore ka toh kuch pal ke liye bolti hi bandh kar diya Ayesha ne....aur Arjun itney calmly kaise behave kiya? Lagta hai biwi ki asar hua hai....I guess commissioner 2nd unit & new recruitment members ko introduce karwane aa sakte hai ya phir new case dene...am I right???

Continue soon...will be waiting for the next. Thanks for the pm....but pm mein tumhari story thread ki page link nahi aayi....that's why the link was of no use. Jis page pe tumne chapter aaj update kiya usi page ki link diya jata hai pm pe.

P.S: A suggestion: Mujhe aisa lagta hai ki shayed yeh long story hogi, toh first page pe agar ho saake toh ek index add kar dena including chapter no. & page no. along with the links of those pages (But, mujhe nahi pata ki page no. ke saath page link add karne ki permission ek newbye forum member ko diya jaata hai ya nahi). Isse har readers ke liye chapters ko dhundna easy hoga.

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Actually first time pm kiya toh thoda sa garabad ho gya but next time se yaad rakhungi. Main try karungi 1st page par index banane ki .

Now, only I have started to write Chapter 2. So, I will update soon .

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Shriza ka kuch nahi ho sakta bina fight ke to reh hi nahi sakte aur sakshi uska to alag hi scene chal raha hai uski na sun shriza aapas mein ulajh pade rathod gusse mein kuch zyada hi bol jata hai per manna padega dabang lady ko suna diya rathod ko fab start dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

CHAPTER 2

(He looked at everyone and was about to go back to his Cabin but suddenly stopped and looked at Ayesha who was still angry. He saw her and came inside his Cabin. Arjun was sitting there only).

They all started their work but they were bore and wanted to talk but Arjun is sitting infront of them.

So, they started chatting in their friends group through whatsapp.

SHREE (with sad emoji) : Yaar, pta nhi aaj Rathod sir ko kya hua hai? Itne gusse me toh unhe kabhi nhi dekha.

CHHOTU: Haa re Shree, aaj toh unhe dekh kar laga jaise dono khadooso ne apni personality exchange kar liya.

LIZA: Haa nhi toh, dekha nhi Rathod sir ne bina karan Hume Kitna suna diya.

AYESHA: Guys hum unn Khadooso ke baare me baat hi kyun kar rahe hai especially unn Sadu sir ke baare me. Pta nhi samjhte kya hai apne aap ko.

CHHOREEZA ek saath : Chief hai aur wahi samajhte bhi hai.

AYESHA (glare them and type): Tum log mere Dost ho ya unke? Hmm..

SHREE: Are, hum tere hi dost hai aur humesha tere hi dost rahenge. Hume kya pagal bandar ne kata hai jo unse dosti kare.

LIZA: Oye Specky wah Bandar nhi Kutta hota hai. Aur waise bhi hume koi shauk nhi hai Sadu se dosti karne ka.

CHHOTU: Aur waise bhi, pta na kab kiska gussa kis par phod de. Na baba na. Tu hi thik hai.

SAKSHI: Guys tum sab phir se unke baare me baat kar rahe ho.(dreamy) Aise baat karni hai toh Arjun ki karo n. Dekho n aaj Kitna handsome lag Raha hai blue jeans and black shirt me. Haye....

AYESHA: Oye! Sakshi tu phir suru ho gyi.

CHHOREEZA: Apna Arjun Puran le ke.

CHHOTU: Waise, Madam ka mood thik ho gya.

SHREEZA: Apne Arjun ka naam sun kar ki uss me...

AYESHA: Phir se kho gyi...

(And all started giggling)

Arjun (was reading old case file when he heard them giggling. So, he yelled at them): Pagal ho gye ho tum log. Ek kaam nhi jota tum logo se. Kam karne ke bajaye masti Kar rahe ho.

SAKSHI ( innocently): Lekin, Arjun hum ne toh kuch bola bhi nhi. Tum bhadak kyun rahe ho?

All look at her as telling 'Now you're Gone'.

Arjun glare at her in anger. Again, they resume to complete their work.

After Fifteen minutes everyone Complete their work and give to Arjun.

LIZA: Sir, reports ready ho gyi.

ARJUN( irritadly): Dikh raha hai mujhe Miss D'Cruz. Andha nhi hoon.

AYESHA (roll her eyes): Sir, Wah puch rahi thi ki kya hum Canteen ja sakte hai?

ARJUN (glare her): Kyun jana hai tumhe Canteen? Aur kaam nhi hai tum logo ke pass?

SAKSHI: Arjun log Canteen me lunch karte hai aur hume bhi wahi karna hai (muttered) unlike you.

ARJUN: Sun na maine Miss Anand jo tum ne kaha.

AYESHA: Sir, suna toh kya hum jayen? Aur waise bhi sir hum ne humara kam Complete Kar liya hai bas abhi yehi kaam bacha hai.

ARJUN (glare her): Fine, jaa sakte ho par uss se pahle yeh file(passing the file to AYESHA) lo aur Rathod ko de do. Uss ki signature chahiye.

CHHOTU (muttered to SHREE): Kya hai yaar yeh, ek toh itna bhook laga hai aur Arjun sir ko Reports ki padi hai. Rahi baat signature ki toh wah khud bhi kar sakte hai n.

SAKSHI: Arjun tum bhi toh signature kar sakte ho na toh tum kyun nhi kar dete. Dekho, Ayesha ka mood already Sameer ke wajah se kharab hai, usse Sameer ke cabin me bhej kar tum Soyi hui Sherni ko kyun jaga rahe ho?

ARJUN: Dekho Miss Anand, I don't care kiska mood kharab hai kiska nhi. Mujhe bas signature chahiye that its. Aise hi hai toh tum ja kar yeh file usse de do.

AYESHA (frustrated) Iski zarurat nhi hai sir, yeh file me Rathod sir ko de dungi aur unke signature bhi le lungi.(look at her friends) guys tum log jao main aati hoon.

Sab canteen chale jate hai aur Ayesha Rathod ke Cabin me jaati hai. Arjun phir se files padne lagta hai.

Ayesha Rathod ke Baar aa kar door knock karti hai.

SAMEER: Come in

AYESHA(irritadly) : Sir, reports Complete ho gye aur yeh file pe aapke signature chahiye Arjun sir ne diya hai.

SAMEER(calm voice me): hmm..isse yahan rakh do.

Ayesha reports rakh kar cabin se nikal jati hai. Sameer usse jaye hue dekhta rahta hai.

SAMEER: Pta nhi aaj mujhe kya ho gya tha bina matlab nhi galati thi unki but phir bhi maine zayada hi react kar diya. Sabko Kitna suna diya.

CANTEEN

Sab Ayesha ka wait karte hai. Wah aati hai aur apne seat par bed jati hai.

SHREE: Guys, humari Sherni sher ke cave se zinda bach kar aayi hai, chalo issi khusi me aaj meri taraf se sabko ice cream party.

SAKSHI: Yehh.. ice cream party. Chalo aaj kuch toh acha hua.

CHHOTU: Hum toh soch rahe the dono khadooso ne apni personality exchange ki hai par nhi dono hi apne form me the.

SAKSHI: Sahi, kaha main toh Sameer ke bare me soch rahi thi. Agar madam ko aur gussa dilate toh chief toh dur ki baat Sameer bhi nhi bachta.

LIZA: Guys tum log phir se Khadoos puran kholke baith gye.

SHREE: Life me first time tum ne kuch sahi baat kiya hai Lizard.

LIZA: Oye, Specky Sen main humesha sahi hi bolti hoon.

Shree roll his eyes. Ab sabko pta hai ki yeh dono apna Tom and Jerry ka game suru kar ne wale hai. So, Ayesha try to divert their mind to new topic.

AYESHA: Guys kal Sunday hai.

SHREE: Ayesh, tu Sunday aise bol rahi hai jaise Hume kal holiday mil ne wala hai.

CHHOTU: Haa.. yaar kam se kam kal toh chhuti de hi sakte hai.(sadly) Pta hai last time Maine apni 11:30 wali ko two weeks pahle dekha tha.

All nod sadly and have their lunch. After 15 minutes they are sitting in conference room. After few minutes later, Commissioner sir enters.

Everyone great him together: Good Afternoon sir

Commissioner Sir(CS): Good Afternoon, how are you all ?

SHREE(to CHHOTU): Puch toh aise rahe hai jaise hum apni problem batayege toh usse solve karenge.

CHHOTU (to him): jaise, abhi bolenge kal holiday hai.

CS(look to them): Kuch problem hai?

All (except Arjun): No sir.

All sit own their respective places and Arjun signal Chhotu to call Rathod.

CS: Ayesha go and call Sameer.

All (except Arjun) look at him with big eyes and plead him to not send her.

CS: Kya hua aise kyun dekh rahe ho (Look at Ayesha) go.

AYESHA nod and left to call Sameer. She knock on the door and after response she get in.

AYESHA: Sir, aap ko Commissioner Sir bula rahe hai.

SAMEER( irritadly) Pahle kyun nhi bataya ki sir aa gye?

AYESHA (annoyed) Sir, ab bol diya, ab chale jaiye.

After informing him she left his Cabin and went directly to Conference Room where all were. Sameer also join her.

SAMEER: Good Afternoon sir

CS: Good Afternoon Rathod

SAMEER : Sorry sir, main apne cabin me tha toh pta nhi chala aap aaye hai.

CS: It's ok Rathod. Mujhe aaye hue 5 minutes hi hue hai.

ARJUN: Sir, is there any problem?

CS: No Arjun, koi problem nahi hai.

ARJUN: Toh sir aap yahan?

CS: Kyun nhi aa sakta.

All giggles and Arjun glare at them.

ARJUN (annoyed): Sir, aisi baat nhi hai, aap aa sakte hai. But sir koi problem nhi hai toh...apko dusre bhi toh kaam hai.

CS: Kaam toh hai but yeh bhi important hai.

Rathod was annoyed of their conversation so, interpreted.

Rathod: Sir, aap kisi important baat ke baare me baat kar rahe the call par.(pause) koi secret mission?

CS: Important hi hai Rathod tabhi toh aaya hoon.

ARJUN (frustration): Toh sir, paheliya bujhane ke bajaye clear boliye n..

Rathod and CS look at him.

Rathod: jaise tum baat karte ho usse toh clear hi hai sir ki baate.

Arjun (glare at him): Tum hi kyun nhi batate Rathod.

CS (annoyed with their conversation): Enough!! Bas karo tum dono, ek mauka nhi chhodte fight karne ka. Bache nhi ho tum dono.

All (except Arjun and Sameer) were happy seeing their seniors were scolded by CS.

CS: Abb me bolu kyun aaya hoon main yaa tum dono ko kuch bolna hai.

All(except Arjun and Sameer happily): yes sir

Both the bosses glare at them. They didn't pay attention.

CS (with seriously): Ayesha, tumhare mission me Raheem ki death ho gyi thi iske karn Hume jayada kuch nhi pta chala( Ayesha Rathod ko ghurti hai). So, Hume intelligence se lead mili hai ki Dharavi me ek bahut badi deal hone wali hai jo Sikandar se related hai and Hume wah deal kisi bhi halat me rokni hogi.

AYESHA: Sir, yeh deal kis chijh ki hone wali hai, koi information?

CS: No, Ayesha, we don't have any information about it. But this is very harmful for our country agar yeh deal ho jati hai toh.

Rathod: sir, hum yeh deal kisi bhi halat me nhi hone denge chahe kuch bhi jo jaye.

ARJUN: Yes sir, chale kuch bhi karna ho hum milkar isse rokenge.

All: Yes sir.

CS: Team, I know ki ETF yeh hone nhi degi and I'm proud of you all. But iss mission par sirf Arjun hi jayega kyunki tum sabki zarurat yahan hai. I know Arjun will handle it. Am I right Arjun.

ARJUN: Yes sir, main apne desh ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon. Iss ke liye apni jaan aur kisi jaan bhi le sakta hoon.

RATHOD: Sir, kitne din ka mission hai and kab jana hai Rawte ko?

CS: Rathod, mission 1 month ka hai and usake liye Arjun ko undercover rahna hoga. Kisi ko pta nhi chalna kahiye ki tum ek ETF ke member ho. Infact not even Dharavi's police.

SHREE: Sir, agar police ko bhi nhi pta hoga Arjun sir ke bare me toh wah help kaise karenge. And police ko pta kyun nhi hona chahiye?

ARJUN: Kyunki may be iss deal me police wale bhi mile ho.

CS: Yes, you are right Arjun and remember, we need their head live. Tum kal hi nikal rahe ho.

ARJUN: ok sir

RATHOD: Sir, Rawte ko pta kaise chalega ki Kahan jana. I mean koi aur bhi uske saath....

CS: Yes Rathod, Arjun ke saath char new members join karenge jo isake saath hi mission par jaa rahe hai aur wahan tum logo ko mera ek aadmi milega jo tumhari help karega.

ARJUN (annoyed): Sir, main akela hi thik hoon. Mujhe kisi ki zarurat nhi hai.

CS: Main tum se puchh nhi raha, tumhe bta raha hoon. And tum unke head ho jo unse mission me lead karega.

ARJUN (making faces): fine sir, I will handle them.

SHREE: But sir, Arjun sir unhe pahchanege kaise?

CHHOTU: Yes sir, unhe toh unka naam bhi nhi pta .

(CS, Arjun and Rathod team ko dekh rahe hai kyunki unki team apne Arjun sir ke liye tension le rahi hai)

LIZA: Sir, ko toh yeh bhi nhi pta ki wah dikhte kaise hai.

SAKSHI: And.. Pahle mila bhi nhi. Aur yeh bhi nhi ki wah kis field me expert hai.

AYESHA: Guys,calm down. Tum log sir ko unki baat puri karne toh do. Wah Hume sab batayenge (looking at CS) haina sir..

CS: Yes, officers. Offcourse main bataunga(taking file from desk and forwarded to Arjun) iss me unki sari details hai tum pad lena.

CHHOTU: Sir, wah Arjun sir ko kahan milenge?

CS: Wah kal yehi ETF office me milenge. So, all of you came sharp at 9 am.

CS (look at teams tention face): Team tum logo ko tention bilkul mat lo. Tumhare Arjun sir ko kuch nhi hoga and unhe apni new team members se mil kar achha bhi lagega.

All nod

CS: Team tomorrow is holding so, enjoy.

Sab yeh baat sun kar bachho ki tarah khudne lagte hai. CS yeh dekh kar shock ho jate hai kyunki unki unhone inhe aise behave karte hue nhi dekha but phir wah Sameer and Arjun ko dekhte hai jo smile kar rahe hai.

CS(whisper to Samjun): Inhe dekh kar kaun bolega ki yeh ETF officers hai.

LIZA(happily): Chhotu congratulations ( Thino seniors shock hai kyunki unhe nhi bta Liza Chhotu kyun congrats kar rahi hai) kal mauka bhi hai aur..

SAKSHI: Dastur bhi..

AYESHA: Kal hum tujhe wahi milenge. Hum bhi toh dekhe teri 11:30 wali kaun hai.

(Sab hasne lagte hai siwaye humare seniors ke jinhe abhi tak kuch samajh me nhi aaya ki wah kis baare me baat kar rahe hai)

SHREE: Haa..Ayeh, uske baad hum movie dekhne jayenge, hua toh hum Chhotu ki 11:30 wali ko bhi join karenge (CHHOTU blush)

(Ab toh seniors aur bhi shock ho gyi, CS apne hosh me aane ke baad Sameer ko unhe ghar bhej ne ko bolta hai)

Sab ek sath (except Samjun): Thank you sir.

CS: Ok, team bye (he left)

Rathod: Team, sir ne bola hai tum log ghar jaa sakte ho. Abhi koi case bhi nhi hai aur tum logo ne apna report bhi ready kar liya hai. And, Rawte tumhe packing bhi karna hai toh aaj ke liye itna hi kafi hai.

SHREE (take a relive): Aaj ka din humare liye kitna bura tha n. Subah humara mood Kitna off tha and now Kitna light mehsoos ho raha hai.

CHHOTU: Haa..yaar but ab hum chill marenge. Bahut bhook lagi hai kuch kha bhi lenge.

Sab hasne lagte hai aur baad me apne desk par apna saman collect karne chale jate hai except Samjun. Jo abhi bhi conference room me hai but kisi ko bhi pta nhi hai.

SAKSHI: Guys, suno n mujhe kuch kahna hai.

LIZA: Dekh Sakshi, agar tujhe Arjun sir ke bare me bolna hai toh please mat bol aur nhi sun sakte tera Arjun Puran.

SAKSHI: Are nhi, mujhe Arjun ke bare me nhi bolna, mujhe toh kuch aur bolna hai.

SHREE: Kya bolna hai tujhe jaldi bol, Hume ghar bhi jana hai but usse pahle humari ice cream party pending hai jo tu degi.

SAKSHI: Haa mujhe bta hai humari ice cream party ke baare me. Par meri baat toh suno

CHHOTU (interpret): Tujhe kahin apne sapne ke bare me toh nhi bolna n jo subah chhut gya tha.

SAKSHI: Are, nhi main toh bol rahi thi ki aaj Hume party karna chahiye.

(Sab yeh sun kar shock ho jate hai even Samjun Jo inki baste sun rahe the)

AYESHA: Tu pagal ho gyi hai? Ya tera dimag kharab ho gya hai?

SAKSHI: Kyun? Isme dimang kharab kaisi hui main bas party ki baat kar rahi hoon.

SHREE(sadly): Tu itni khush hai ki tu Arjun sir ke jane se pahle Party kar chahti hai.

LIZA: Oye, Specky kaisi behki hui baate kar rahe ho? Arjun sir ke jane se Sakshi ko toh dukh hoga khusi nhi.(sab SAKSHI and LIZA ki taraf dekh rahe hai)

SAKSHI:Haa tum log pagal ho gye ho gya main kyun khus hongi?

CHHOTU: Abhi toh tune bola Party toh..

LIZA: Kyunki aaj hi humari Singham ka mood change ho gya nhi toh madam ke Angry young bird mood ko change karne leye lagte do din. Abhi humari Singham wapas Cool Ayesh ban gyi.

CHHOREE: Wah toh tu humare Lady Singham ki baat kar rahi thi.

SHREE: waise man na padega aaj madam ke gusse ko Hume do din tak jhelna nhi padega.( Ayesha Shree ko lightly marti hai and sab hass ne lagte hai)

SAKSHI: Haa nhi toh kaun chahega apne sath ek Active volcano ko sath le ke chalna. Kabhi bhi fat sakti hai.

LIZA: isliye aaj hum madam ki saphalta ke liye party karenge. Sab mere ghar pahuch jana sharp 7pm.

CHHOTU/AYESHA (dono saath me): Kaun si saphalta ?

SAKSHI (aaj ka incedent yaad kar ti hai jahan Ayesha Sameer par chila rahi hoti hai aur ussi me kho jati hai): Are, tum dono bhul gye. Aaj kaise Lady Singham ne Khadoos ghusel sher se panga liya tha. Unka muh band kar diya tha.

(Sab yehi soch rahe hai ki Samjun apne cabin me hai but dono conference room me hi hai yeh inhe nhi pta. Arjun Sameer ko dekhta hai jo sabko badi badi aankho se dekh raha hai jaise SAKSHI uski baat kar rahi hai. Arjun smirke)

ARJUN: Tum kise Khadoos ghusel sher bol rahi ho jise tumhari lady Singham ne panga liya.

(Arjun ki awaz sun kar sab uski taraf mudte hai aur Samjun ko dekh shock ho jate hai)

SAKSHI(Jo abhi bhi apne khayalo me gum hai): Guys yeh kaisa Question puch rahe ho. Ek hi toh hai Khadoos nhi do hai but abhi toh main Khadoos sadu ki baat kar rahi hoon. Aur waise bhi yeh naamkaran toh Ayesha ne hi kiya tha n.

(Sameer Ayesha ko ghur raha hai. Sab usse dekh kar apna sir niche kar lete hai aur Sakshi ko sapno ki duniya se bahar lane ke liye Shree usse poke karta hai. Arjun Sameer ko smirk look deta hai).

SAKSHI: Shree kya kar raha hai, aur tune yeh kyun puchha. Tujhe to pahle se hi pta hai n ki hum Sameer ko Khadoos sadu bolte hai. Aur uska number bhi ussi name se save hai.

SAMEER: Aur, Arjun sir ka naam kis se save Kiya hai tum ne Sakshi?

Ab sab Sameer ki taraf dekh rahe hai (except Sakshi) aur shock ho jate hai.

SAKSHI: Tu phir suru ho gya. Tujhe yeh bhi pta hai Khadoos Akdu aur kya. Hum ne yehi decide kiya tha n.(Shree Sakshi ko pinch karta hai)

(Wah apne sapno ki duniya se bahar aakar Shree par chilati hai): Shree, kya kar raha hai. Tune mujhe pinch kyun kiya? Pta hai kitna dard ho raha hai. (Wah ghumti hai aur SAMJUN ko dekh kar shock ho jati hai. Usake Friends usse gusse se ghur rahe hai.)

Arjun Sameer ko dekh raha hai jo Ayesha ko gusse se ghur raha hai and uss ke baad wah Sakshi ko dekhta hai.

So, guys this was my Chapter 2. So, let me know how it was.

Happy Independence Day everyone

Unres samjun ko chod yeh log bhi na itna daant sunne ke baad bhi baatein karna nahi chodte face to face nahi ti watsapp sahi ayesha sach mein sherni hai arjun ko bhi jawab de diya commissioner arjun ko ek month ke liye uc pe bhej raha sik ke deal ko rokne ke liye junior etfians bhi kamaal hal seniors ke samne hi bacchon ki tarah behave karne lage poor juniors sakshi ke dreamland ki wajah se zaroor fasenge fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

Bohot khub likha hai chapter....bohot hi zyada maza aaya mujhe yeh padhke....meri toh haste haste pet fatne ki kagar pe hai.....chapter was long, jo ki mujhe bohot achchhi lagi aur har ek character ki baatey & chotey se chotey action, posture, gesture, body language bhi...ekdum balancedly blend hua. This chapter actually sets the bar of your writing skills and excellence....har ek character me comic n humoric sense ek hi chapter mein de pana koi easy baat nahi hoti, jo ki tumne successfully kar diya. Ab toh mujhe aur bhi zyada intezaar rahega tumhari agli updates ka, so all the best. Thanks for the pm & continue soon.