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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Pallavi disagrees smiley36smiley14

Mauka do usko, she’ll change few stuff in his interiors for sure smiley36


Sakshi, do you also wanna tag along in gifting sth to Shivangi from some of us.

We're trying to decide what would be a good gesture😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

I watched Shershaah today smiley38smiley19


Kisi ne dekhi yaha?


My brother today only mentioned that I can watch it, it’s a good one


he didn’t tell me about the 🥺part


how can he suggest me a movie with sad ending? 😲

Brb, I need to scold him ache se


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SONIA441


Sakshi, do you also wanna tag along in gifting sth to Shivangi from some of us.

We're trying to decide what would be a good gesture😆

I am a student , I can’t make transactions without telling my parents 😆.


Shivaji Fan 😎 bolke Kuch dedo that Shivaji connect is specifically only Pallavi’s in show and in general bhi Shivangi is marathi toh will like it

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Inese_20


My brother today only mentioned that I can watch it, it’s a good one


he didn’t tell me about the 🥺part


how can he suggest me a movie with sad ending? 😲

Brb, I need to scold him ache se


Tumhe pata Nahi tha 😲

Iska end 🥺 hay yeh toh start se maloom tha 😒.


Vikram and Dimple ki story toh always touched my heart , I’m glad unpe movie itni acchi banai, Sid and Kiara’s chemistry was really nice ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: I-Got-You

Last time I watched the show Raghav Mandaar ka message batane ke bajaye tracker-tracker khel raha tha aur uski pyaari behen exposed him in precap 😆


Accha toh Sanki le gaya. But itna kya miss kar raha tha ki saans hi nahi aayi?Shaadi ke pehle toh muh uthake chala jata tha sari shop aur ghar pe.


What stopped him now ?

Stopped Hyderabad’s ‘Don’ from meeting his wife ?


Abhi, Sanki darwaze pe taala lagata hai, plus uss waqt Anna ko kisi se bhi farak nahi padhta tha ab woh uska sasural hai toh todha kaide mein raheta hai. 🤣


And above all Raghav ki Don giri wifey ke saamne phuss ho gayi 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SONIA441


VM accha ho toh time doesn't matter.

I have seen 15mins long VMs too but since the edit was good it didn't matter.


Itna mat soch...bana daal😎

Okieeeee

Lets see how it turns out 😒

Zyada expectations nahi hai 🤣

I read your tag

I also thought of some ideas

Batati hoon in some time

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: aye-masakalii

Nooo

Mujhe toh full length VMs hi sabse acche lagte hain

Same

I need to get feels , short ones don't give me 😆

Lets see 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Not at all 😆

I have seen 1 min long VM as well 7-10 mins long VMs too

Achha 4 mins is fine then 😳

Long ones are full journey ones usually naa , I love them

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Tumhe pata Nahi tha 😲

Iska end 🥺 hay yeh toh start se maloom tha 😒.


Vikram and Dimple ki story toh always touched my heart , I’m glad unpe movie itni acchi banai, Sid and Kiara’s chemistry was really nice ❤️

Mujhe dad ne ek-do hafte pehle bataya about the story, he remembered it playing out Kargil ke time pe, the last interview on TV with Vikram Batra, and the news of his death and everything. Mujhe tabhi pata tha I'll not be able to watch this movie.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: aye-masakalii

You hit it on point- he's so determined to not let her become a bechari who always cries, ki usko superhuman bana diya, who can take everything in stride.

Like Simran said, this track failed because it was too focused on how all this impacts Raghav, when it should have put atleast 65-70% focus on Pallavi- the trauma of being widowed on the night of her wedding, seeing her new family fight for her rights even as they were mourning, the financial struggles of the family's sole breadwinner gone, Vijay's heart attack, Sharda's illness, her finding the strength to rise above and be the pillar the family needed, refusing to go back to Siddhesh and Pawani despite them asking, all while she watches her bridal mehndi fade from her palms, already a widow, thinking back on the dreams and promises she and Mandaar made over video calls that lasted hours and hours...and then the shock of seeing this same late husband miraculously come back alive right as she finally found closure on his death and moved on, the relief of being able to deliver this miracle to the people she looks at like her own parents, the grief of seeing him reduced to a mere shell of the man he was, the desire to help him once again be his original self

And Raghav, understanding all this, and wanting to be as supportive as he can be, but falling prey to his own demons, and him and Pallavi supporting each other, growing as a couple while doing this task that emotionally drains them both, strains their relationship, but they both know is the right thing and needs to be done. Them growing together as a couple as this both breaks them and builds them.

All while Mandaar's true colors unfold gradually in the background- a hint here, a clue there- until, bam, one big incident, exactly like Ayi's accident, that gives him away, and then RaghVi vs Mandaar.


BRILLIANT Ashi! Please send a copy to sickand 😑


You have written an excellent plot you know. That’s exactly how it should have been. And it would make for such a fabulous story , a treat to watch, one to remember for years to come.


I just want to add that Pallavi’s struggle, all these flashbacks should have been evenly distributed in these 100-150 episodes. We should have known her story with all these insights they could have gradually given us.

Like how she sees baba having a heart attack and it takes her back to the last time he had one. Or dancing with Aayi brings back the memories from her wedding. Or how she feels tired by the end of a very exhausting day dealing with Raghav’s challenge and she wishes she could have someone by her side too. That she didn’t have to go through this all alone. But she brushes it off and wakes up stronger the next day! I am not able to come up with really good scenarios right now, but there were many occasions where they could have incorporated such things. That’s what I mean when I say make us feel for Pallavi as well.



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