DRABBLE : GAMBLERS - Page 2

this reminded me of one episode of Bepannah where the same things happen

i would love if this happens

Amazing read 👏🏻.......damn interesting with the twist.

Raghav and Pallavi together are force to be reckoned with. Mandar and the Deshmukhs doesn't stand a chance.

Woah Sama!

That was great. Raghav entering D niwas to fight and end up with romance 😳

Keep writing 🤗

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

After watching Sandip Sir's insta story i think i can finally post this draft that i wrote apparantly 3 episodes back.

DRABBLE : GAMBLERS

"Pallavi!" Raghav's voice roared in the empty verandah of the Deshmukh Diwas driving everyone out of their rooms.

"Tum hpir muh uthakar chale aaye.' Vijay Deshmukh taunted him.

"Aye Sanki budhdhe abhi mera mind out mat kar mereko Pallavi se baat karna hai. Bulao usko bahar." he snapped back with rag ein his eyes.

"Kya hua Raghav?" Pallavi asked as she walked down the stairs, Mandaar following close behind her.

"Bass bahut ho gaya Pallavi. Aaj toh tumko faisla lena hi hoga. " he walked closer to her in long steps .

"Kaisa faisla Raghav? Ho kya gaya hai tumhe." Pallavi asked in confusion.

"Ya toh Mandaar ya phir main." he moved his fingers between them.

"Raghav yeh kaisa sawaal hai. Tumhara dimaag toh theek hai?" Pallavi replied back.

"Dimaag toh mera ab theek hua hai Pallavi. Mereko jawaab chahiye." he roared.

"Mere ghar main awaaz neeche rakh kar baat karo samjhe." baba shouted.

'Aye tujhe bola na muh band kar." Raghav snapped back only to get his collar grabbed by Mandaar.

"Mere baba se tameez se baat kar samjha. Maine bola tha na Pallavi yeh gunda tumhaare layak hi nahin hai." Mandaar started his act again.

"Aye bina address ke envelope tu" Raghav shrugged his hand off making Mandaar stumble back only to be caught by Pallavi in time. This time she charged towards Raghav.

"Bass Raghav! Bahut ho gaya yeh sab. Bhulo matt mujhe khudse dur tumne hi kiya hai. Jhooth bol kar. Woh tracker mere bag main rakhkar. Maine ttumse kitni baar kaha ki main Mandaar ki sirf madad kar rahi hoon lekin nahin tumhaari insecurities, tumhari takleef bass wahi samajh aai tumhe. Mandaar sahi keh raha tha ki tum kabhi nahin badal sakte ho." she shouted at him making his eyes go deeper in anger as he grabbed her by her arms.

"Toh phir aaj yeh qissa hi khatam karte hai." he replied as he dragged her along with him to the nearest room.

"Raghav! Pallavi!" the entire D clan ran after him only to have the door shut on their faces.

"Raghav chodo Pallavi ko" Mandaar shouted banging the door.

"Nahin Mandaar aaj yeh qissa khatam hone do keh lene do isse apne dil ki baat." Pallavi replied as she freed herself from her husband's grip.

"Keh doon main dil ki baat" Raghav shouted.

Pallavi nodded her head in a yes

"Toh keh deta hoon main. I - " raghav shouted as he moved closer to her , he grabbed a nearby vase and smashed it onto the ground as it created a loud noise amongst which he grabbed Pallavi by her waist and snuggled closer to her ear whspering a "Love you"

"Raghav" Pallavi hissed, "sab sunlenge" she added.

"Par mere dil main toh yahi hai na." he whispered to her.

"I hate you too Raghav. Meri hi galti thi ki maine tumse pyaar kara" Pallavi shouted loud enough for the people outside to hear while Raghav smiled feeling the 'i love you' hidden behind those words.

"Lekin hume unhe toh yeh sunana hai na" she whispered back to him.

"Your wish my command ma'am" he left her as he grabbed a photoframe of Mandaar's picture from the table and pointed it at the door wher the creepy devil's siloutte was visible as he smashed it on the door's surface.

"Aaj main samajh gaya Pallavi ki tum merese kabhi pyaar hi nahin kara. Tum bass Raghav Rao ko barbaad karna chahte tha na. Lo kardiya tum mereko barbaad." he shouted trying to hold his laughter.

"Business award toh nahin acting award zaroor de sakti hoon main tumhe." Pallavi giggled as she moved closer to him and the door.

"Tum kabhi mere liye sahi the hi nahin Raghav. Tumne aaj tak sirf mera use hi kara hai. Pehle Amma ke liye aur phir ab mujhe Mandaar aur mere ghar ke against use karna chahte ho." she fanned herself as she upped her voice level.

Raghav gave her a small applause as he pushed her to the wall locking her ebtween his arms.

"Main tumhara use kara hai." he shouted as he inched closer to her lips leaving a small kiss there.

"Han kara hai tumne use." she replied back with wide eyes gesturing him ti continue the facade to which he nodded a no.

"Pallavi tum theek toh ho na." they heard mandaar's plea from the outside to which raghav rolled his eyes.

"Tum mereliye mera zaroorat tha Pallavi lekin lagta hai ki ab tumhara zaroorat KOI AUR hai." he raised his voice again pressurising more on the KOI AUR part as he kissed her again.

"Raghav !! Hum phas jayenge." she giggled as he inhaled her fragrance nuzzling in her neck.

"Phas toh koi aur gaya hai mera Sherlock Holmes ka jaal main." he smiled looking at her.

"Tum theek ho na?" she asked him with soft eyes.

"Jab tak Pallavi raghav ke saath hai sab theek hai." he replied with sincerity in her eyes.

"Ab chale warna sabko shaq ho jayega." she asked.

"Thora der aur" he replied as he dropped another vase from the dressing table and they joined their foreheads preperaing themselves for a fight with their own people.

Mandaar paced around the area after Aai dragged the entire family away from the room.

"Aai agar usne Pallavi kuch kara toh main uski jaan le lunga" mandaar shouted.

"Unn dono ko baat karne do shayad sab theek ho jaye" Aai asked hoping for something positive to come out.

Raghav came out first with his angry RR swag as he made his way directly towards the door not before giving a look to Mandaar. In a few seconds Pallavi too came out as she looked down on the ground.

"Pallavi sab theek hai na isne koi battameezi toh nahin kari na tumhaare saath." Mandaar rushed to her.

"Pallu bol na kya hua?" Aai asked.

'Sab khatam ho gaya Aai. Saara jhooth ka naqaab utar gaya ab sirf sach hai." she replied as she looked up to match his gaze.

Raghav resisted a smile as he winked at his wife who tried controlling her blush around the evil hawks as they blew the holy shankh inside their hearts for a war.

Do tell me how it was!!

Sandip sir yaaha forum k chakkar lagaao mast mast stories milengay

Lovely....just loved it ...aab hume bhi show mein milega

I always love your oneshots and every time you publish something, I can never choose which one is my new favorite 😆 Even though I know my opinion will change the moment you publish a new oneshot, I have to say this one is my current favorite ❤️ I really really want this in the show and it'll be hilarious to see Mandar's dumbness now that Raghav and Pallu will be together, on one side. Eagerly waiting for your future works 🤗

Originally posted by: drnidsur

I loved itttt sama🤗🤗

Kya dimaag lagya tumne seriously😳

Very smart writing

The way he dragged her took her

Them shouting while having their own moments there

And raghav not wanting to leave her

I wish this happens ❤️❤️

Amazing 🤗🤗

Thank you Nidhi ❤

I wish they bring out the best versions of them soon and battle this out well.

Just wanted to create some positivity here.

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

Please koi ye jaa ke writers ko de do 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

This is sooooo what I want to happen

Aww if only they can lurke around and see what all logical theories we have here

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

Wow. Just one word. WOW👏

I was literally clapping my hands like a little excited baby while reading this😆

Okay so let me confess.. I love it when guys get possessive/protective of their partners (in a healthy way) and then the action that follows🤩 Not that women need any saving but seeing guys prepared to get their knuckles bloody for someone is kinda nice to see. And here you have added that WITH RaghVi romance.. my dil just went mmm

I've said this before and I'll say it again, you should join the writing team of this show and then everyone can enjoy such dhamkedaar work with pleasure❤️

Are you planning to continue this? I wanna know what happens in the war🤩

Aww that is soo sweet 😍😍🥰

I love it too when guys get possessive ans stuff but only till a desired limit. When they start interfering to take matters into their own hands i think that's where i wanna draw the line.

I would happily join the writing team only if they allow me too 😂😂

Originally posted by: Wilddreams

🥳🥳🥳

Yeh hui na baat

Hamari wish finally poori hogi Sama 😭😭

Sabne bola ke hum kuchh jyada hi optimistic ho rahe the 😭😭

Chalo finally Raghvi are ready to fight against the world 😎

Iska next part likhne ka kya logi😒

Sneaky romance is my wish from this track .

Can you please fulfill it 🙏🙏 pretty please 😳

We're just talented people who figured out the hint before anyone 😂😂.

Yaar yeh na draft tha random sa that i wrote last week after getting frustrated with the episodes so i don't have a proper second part to it but even if i figure out something. I'll surely posts

Abhi toh bahut saare aur random drafts padhe hai 😂😂