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Originally posted by: Nush_Rat

@Bold Exactly! 🤬 🤬 🤬

I don't know what sadistic pleasure they get by butchering these otherwise awesome characters.

Sach mein yaar. I am so disappointed with what the makers have done to Kirti.

Even earlier, I used to be irked by her unnecessary resentment towards Raghav but at least then I could get where she was coming from. She had faced so much at such a young age... So, I could kinda understand that (even though I didn't support that).

But right now, she is not even showing basic humanity. She is actually enjoying her brother's plight... You know, I had slight hopes for her redemption when she told Ved that she doesn't want any harm to befall on Raghav but now, she is enjoying his distress, is perfectly fine with him being drugged by Mandar... and as a woman, she was perfectly fine with Pallavi being drugged (and who knows, even taken advantage of)

Originally posted by: Madhura..

It's written quite well, but it seemed repetitive with a few words and too filmy. But then we have our choices, so it's cool.

Okay! Repetitive I can change. As I have yet to finish the entire thing and edit it like thousand times. 🙄

Filmi - could you elaborate a little bit? Because it's only one of three parts. I wanted to use different backgrounds to depict different phase. This was the middle one. And of course you have seen the clip so you know why thunder and abyss. 🤪 I could modify it properly if you specified the elements. 😎

Originally posted by: Nush_Rat

So guys! I am gonna pakao you with something. 😛

After wasting a whole day I could come up with this. Let me know if it's okay enough. Or you can give me suggestions if you feel there's room for improvement. 😃

PS: Don't quote the paragraph. I'll remove it later.

I really liked this...

A bit dramatized it was... but I really enjoy dramatic stuff so for me, this was perfect.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Yes!!

I know right!!

Thank you❤❤

Definitely!

At least I hope you got that software and app part. What do you prefer for writing? Like you are apps or software person?!

Yeah I got that part. 😆

Btw Madhura, India finally got a Gold!! 🥳

Final dekha kya javelin throw ka??

Merging my replies...

I have the same issue with Kirti. This is someone who supported Pallu over her brother because she was her friend and it was the right thing to do. Now suddenly her taking such a flip doesn't make any sense.

Since when do you love dramatic stuff? 😲 I thought you were subtly lover. 😉

Anyways, can you be a little more specific and point it out? I'll edit it in the final version. 😊

Originally posted by: Nush_Rat

Yeah I got that part. 😆

Cool. I asked you a question! What do you use?! For writing?!

About your part, editing, great!

Well yes, reference I understand. As Nikki said drama, but sometimes we want it that way.

Filmy I meant, many things happening around the same time, and fantasy.

Originally posted by: Nikita_99503

Btw Madhura, India finally got a Gold!! 🥳

Final dekha kya javelin throw ka??

Yesss! Congratulations to Neeraj!

Finally, he did brilliant! Yes, saw the full event👏👏

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Cool. I asked you a question! What do you use?! For writing?!

About your part, editing, great!

Well yes, reference I understand. As Nikki said drama, but sometimes we want it that way.

Filmy I meant, many things happening around the same time, and fantasy.

Oh, I thought you were giving me an example. 😆

I prefer writing in laptop or PC as editing is so much easier with MS word.

Hmm, then I think I should keep it this way. 🙄 Because it's actually a dream. 😛 She imagines all three most important people in her life and the surroundings change according to her feeling.

The first one being rain, second one being dessert and third one being rain followed by snow.

I didn't post the first part because I didn't want to bore you.

Since the idea of this chapter came from Magnificent Century, I was really worried about the desert portion.

Merging my replies...

I have the same issue with Kirti. This is someone who supported Pallu over her brother because she was her friend and it was the right thing to do. Now suddenly her taking such a flip doesn't make any sense.

Precisely. I just can't digest this sudden flip. In fact, for once I could still digest Mansi's flip but Kirti's flip made absolutely zero sense to me.

Now, she is enjoying the plight of her brother, the same brother who was ready to go to jail for her sake (and indirectly for that Khajoor), was even ready to throw Farhad under the bus to save herself and is now, perfectly fine with Pallavi being drugged. Basic humanity tak gayab kar di iski to!!

Since when do you love dramatic stuff? 😲 I thought you were subtly lover. 😉

Well, yes I do love subtlety... but tastes bhi to change hote hain na? Abhi thoda dramatic stuff bhi enjoy karne lage hain...

Anyways, can you be a little more specific and point it out? I'll edit it in the final version. 😊

Well, I don't think that portion needs editing... That's perfectly fine as it is.