ShiVi OS- Stages (Epilogue updated on page 19) - Page 15

I prefer the tragic version over this one, but I have to admit that this version is as poignant as the other... ❤

Thank you so much for this, Maahi. My first reaction to this was Sukoon..... Dil ko chaiin!!!!!

I still remember how tragic it was when Sati died in The immortals series. The pain was so profound for me.

I am great fan of the Shiva & Sati story. Any parallel they show in the series, I love them.

In all your stories, I always draw this parallel as well. I don't know if your intention was that or not but I somehow always see "them"in your stories.

The Epic love story of Sati & Shiva, how beautiful, intense and eternal it is.

Shiva and Raavi, one surviving without the other is not possible or feasible.

I always thought, when these two will love each other, their love will be endless. They will be too involved into each other, intense and too extreme. Because that how they are as individuals.

Maybe the serial will never show this aspect of their relationship. But your stories, mashallah, your stories do justice to that aspect to the T and more.

I love how inherently your Shiva and Raavi in all your stories are similar in emotional characterization.

Thanks again...for this Epilogue, now I can read this one again and again without the tragic pain..

Mahi give me a hug dear🤗❤️

This is amazing👏❤️

Shiva is here Omg I can't describe my happiness

Love you dear for writing this🤗

Thank you so much❤️

Originally posted by: Malika1993.06

Mahi give me a hug dear🤗❤️

This is amazing👏❤️

Shiva is here Omg I can't describe my happiness

Love you dear for writing this🤗

Thank you so much❤️

🤗

I am glad u r happy

Thanks Mahi for writing this❤️💞

Beautiful piece of writing👏

I first thought it was a dream, the first version was tragic but beautiful, this epilogue is also a great work👏

Shiva is alive and from from past two years he is handling Raavi's nightmares❤️

Loved the bond of Shivi , they will have a baby soon❤️❤️

I can sleep in peace now ❤️

Thank you Maahi! That was beautiful 🤗

But you ended up giving your Shiva extra work to do to get her through it 😆

But I love how patient he is here!

Such a beautiful story ❤️

I dont know what to say Maahi

TBh i read this os till the part where raavi confessed her love in hospital and then i lost it when you declared him dead I was like i cant read further

Although I wait for your OSes but I left this one

Then I was like what she has written in epilogue and then I was a bit relieved

Kyuki pehla part adha hi pada or use bhulne ke liye mujhe bahut der lagi. I am not a person who like trageic ends. Never

I must say you are a very strong writer you portray emotions very strongly which is why I felt like cryinng and I left the Os unfinished

Because I cant see Shiva or KD dying in a fiction also. Uff

Please dont write a sad one and I know I am no one to tell you so please add a disclaimer in starting when you write such tragic stories so that I can skip it

And you own one happy OS to me atleast😬😬 not ordering but asking you to write one. As i love your full length Oses

And if You felt that I said somethinng wrong then i am sorry Maahi🤗

I knew it! You'd turn it into a nightmare..

Here, I laugh at the predictability of the plot 🤣

But jokes aside, beautifully written Maahi❤️

Happy that he got revived and came back. Love this caring version of Shiva❤️

Originally posted by: Sakmen

I knew it! You'd turn it into a nightmare..

Here, I laugh at the predictability of the plot 🤣

But jokes aside, beautifully written Maahi❤️

Happy that he got revived and came back. Love this caring version of Shiva❤️

This was the ending she originally planned I think, that’s why she told us that day in the AU that you’d laugh at it 🤣