RaghVi OS: Eloquently - Page 3

Reem you should take a bow for this masterpiece here 👏👏

It is one of the best write up I have ever come across

The plot , the framing of the scenes , the transition time

Everything is bang on 👏

You are one of the best writers out here for sure , esp bcus the piece was all about words

Very few can get that part so right and you got it

I want to know the words she's read. The words she's talking about. The words that she indulges herself in every day. The words that make her laugh. The words that make her smile. The words that make her heart beat fast. The words that surround her. Because when she walks she runs her hands along the spines soaking in all the words through her finger tips. I want to know the words she knows."

This part was my favourite , only a person who loves to read all the time can understand how enticing the world of reading is , how it is like tha major part of our life and you captured that essence so beautifully and romantically❤️

The way he observes her

The way you made him wait , understand her world and then write !

It was so beautiful

I will come back to read this piece again n again 🤗

This is really beautiful. Thanks for the pm,Reem.❤️

My heart is sooooo full reading this😭 this was beautiful ❤️

The cozy ambiance you’ve created with your words is commendable! You’ve described my dream library/bookshop in this OS: soft light, books shelving all the walls from the ceiling to the floor and the smell of ink!
I’ve always thought that is a perfect place to fall in love with someone, being surrounded by fantasies and making some of your own come true❤️ I’m glad that Pallavi and Raghav fell in love here

My favourite part is when all of Pallavi’s fantasies tumbled into reality ever so eloquently.

Loved it , beautifully written Reem ❤️

thank you for the pm

Simply astounding and beautiful........

eloquently written

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

"Or even so, stories like that are often written by fifteen year old girls. Stories about boys, various boys falling in love with a single female lead and her falling in love with the arrogant and handsome athlete simply for the fact he toys with her emotions and has a great outward appearance. "

@bold: i feel attacked here 😂😂

But jokes apart, did you just fulfill my library fantasy?

Cause among books and a library is where i wanna have a love story 😭❤

no you werent Sama

I know right..library has got different vibes

Originally posted by: tiara_remixfan

this is so fabulous! What a coincidence this reminded me of Mr. Knightley's confess to Emma , he says if he loved her less he could have tried to say it better. Now i am intrigued, which author brings a smile to your face?

Thank you so much Neha❤️

Originally posted by: chat_3

This was a nice AU. Pallavi as a reader and the slow build up, was beautifully depicted. 👍🏼

thank you so much❤️

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

I am in Dreamland right now thanks to these beautiful words

The way you weaved your words weaved a spell on me as well. I could see every detail as it happened and then the end was just magnificent with Raghav's confession 👏❤️

Ironically I don't have the words to give this its due but thank you so much for writing it. Quoting my favorite parts I think I would end up quoting all of it, there is not a wasted phrase. "Enough words." Ufff ☺️

Thank you so much...this itself is one of the greatest accomplishments knowing that there is not a wasted phrase here❤️

Originally posted by: OceanicHeart.

Wow this was such a beautiful OS Reem!

You have written it so well🤗

I just Loved it ❤️

Thank you so much Tanya❤️

glad that you loved it