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Posted: 4 years ago

So, Anokhi finally knows it! 😳 Shaurya is already attracted to Anokhi... Sweet! But hatred always take front seat 😆


Shaan is totally cruel and I understand how Astha would have been left with no choice... Sharing recipes developed by her should be her choice.. Her copyright... And not Saberwals😡

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Posted: 4 years ago

Really loved it

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow...he confronted her...interesting but i wonder how the incident actually played out🤔...things were really stifling in SH but i wonder what tipped it over...cant wait for more...


Their initial convo was interesting too...Anokhi is kind but a little naive but dare i say Shaurya on the other hand is too cynical in his view of the world...interesting to see how they gel in future...


Shaan is a disappointment at the moment...bad things happen when good people do nothing ...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Fantastic FF! Really loving the entire story so far! Hope you update the next part soon. Atleast Shaurya was honest and blunt. Anokhi will hopefully help in mending the mother son relationship.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Did Shaan ever truly love astha during their marriage or it was just producing a kid....

Astha for sure would have suffered a lot...betrayal....astha as a woman commands respect...mother and wife is secondary....

Anokhi is cool and smart...

Shaan is cruel than tej in real sense...


Waiting for the next update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Perhaps anokhi will listen to astha and emphasize with shau

Just because a person is good to u does not mean that person has not done their share of mistakes. Sometimes it's also easier when u are not legally and emo invested to help.

Shau and astha must repair it together and others can only support. Only they know why what and when

Yes, Shaurya and Aastha will repair things with their own efforts. Of course Anokhi and others will help but no one is going to force anything on them.

Thanks for your lovely feedback. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Aimsha

I didn't expect the truth to spill out so soon, seems interesting, even writers hav taken inspiration from CVs of giving us the Unexpected, will wait with baited breath for the next update please

Ha ha. I didn't want truth be hidden from Anokhi for long. I hope you will like the upcoming chapters. Keep reading and commenting. Your feedback means a lot.😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

So, Anokhi finally knows it! 😳 Shaurya is already attracted to Anokhi... Sweet! But hatred always take front seat 😆


Shaan is totally cruel and I understand how Astha would have been left with no choice... Sharing recipes developed by her should be her choice.. Her copyright... And not Saberwals😡

Hmm. Shaurya's love hate will make it difficult for him to reach his goal.

I am going to make Sabharwals more sinister here, especially Tej. I didn't like dudh ke dhule hue Sabharwals. 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you. I am glad you are loving it. Keep sharing your feedback. It helps me do better. 😊

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Originally posted by: GHKPM

Wow...he confronted her...interesting but i wonder how the incident actually played out🤔...things were really stifling in SH but i wonder what tipped it over...cant wait for more...


Their initial convo was interesting too...Anokhi is kind but a little naive but dare i say Shaurya on the other hand is too cynical in his view of the world...interesting to see how they gel in future...


Shaan is a disappointment at the moment...bad things happen when good people do nothing ...

What made Aastha leave will be slowly revealed. That is why I am interspersing present with the past life of Aastha in Sabharwal house.

Anokhi is not very naive, she is smart in fact. But she is young and idealistic. Shaurya is cynical.

Shaan may be a bad husband but he is a good father and loyal brother.

I loved your feedback. Continue to share your views on this story. 😊

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