PS|EDT #60|An Adbhut Tale of Marbles, Hugs, Beds & Maide Ki Holi - Page 81

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun


Haha, both of your confidence in me is certainly outstanding. I don't even know what to write for Zombies? How does one go about that?


I was more of a vampire, werewolf, wizards, demi-gods kind of girl. I don't think I've ever read/seen anything on zombies other than Train to Busan


And pray tell me, how is ShiVi related to zombies 🤣??


I see Raavi being a vampire (sucking out all of Shiva's blood) or Shiva becoming a werewolf (marking Raavi as his). Or better yet, both of them being Hogwarts students throwing hexes at each other (with Krish being the unfortunate target sometimes) than ShiVi as zombies 🤣

I agree dont write zombies

I will never be able to unread that🤣

Write on soulmate fiction harry potter AU

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Posted: 4 years ago

They keep on talking about biting, cutting and eating each other, I would say otherwise. They surely belong to the universe of vampires, werewolves or zombies🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Transference

Then, you should probably write a vampire werewolf fanfiction for Shivi. Ravi actually looks like a vampire with blood and white skin. Both look like the bandars they are called as.🤣🤪

I really want Dhara to walk in and see them in this state.


@bold, during the kesar scenes, she really, really did. Especially when her hair was over her face and she was sitting on the couch 🤣 I genuinely thought she would pretend to be kesar to fool Shiva and Krish 🤣🤣 It would've made for a funny track

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Madheart

@bold 1 - Lol 🤣🤣 but aren't they making only the walls?

@bold 2- MBA topper kuch intezaam kar dega 🤣🤣


If they are going to build it where terrace is, where will the roof come from? Or they're just hoping for them to see sky so they can do Chand Sifarish again for phast phast results?! 😂😂 And even if they are building just walls, how are they going to get wires for electrical sockets /light and water pipes (if they decide to have on bathroom)? Hope they are consulting electrician/plumber at least. If not, this kamra is going to become a hazard zone. Fear of ceiling collapse and being electrocuted🔌⚡⚡😬😬. If I were there, I'd gladly give Rishita this new room😂😂.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun


Haha, both of your confidence in me is certainly outstanding. I don't even know what to write for Zombies? How does one go about that?


I was more of a vampire, werewolf, wizards, demi-gods kind of girl. I don't think I've ever read/seen anything on zombies other than Train to Busan


And pray tell me, how is ShiVi related to zombies 🤣??


I see Raavi being a vampire (sucking out all of Shiva's blood) or Shiva becoming a werewolf (marking Raavi as his). Or better yet, both of them being Hogwarts students throwing hexes at each other (with Krish being the unfortunate target sometimes) than ShiVi as zombies 🤣


@bold: all of those are already great ideas

just waiting for you to write something now !

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Transference

They keep on talking about biting, cutting and eating each other, I would say otherwise. They surely belong to the universe of vampires, werewolves or zombies🤣

Noooooooo

Zombies r lifeless creatures

Shivi are full of fire!

Instead they would suit werewolves

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Posted: 4 years ago


Ye Chipkali itna time sone keliye tayyar hone mein kyun Laga rahi hai? Isse toh sona bhi beauty queen banke chaiye. 🙄 Ae Chipkali, Aaja, bed pe. *Sirf sone keliye*. Kal subha jaldi uthna hai mujhe.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

What a beautiful episode ❤️❤️.

1) our bacchi is happy seeing the bed, but then she does her nautanki.🤣🤣

"Tu upar so ja. Mai neeche manage Kar lungi"

Shiva tells her to chup chap sleep and let him sleep.🤦

Looks like hero is the new nickname raavi has given her bhootnath.

She is in no mood to sleep chup chap, she goes on about how she should also be angry about his drunk stunt, but she is not grumpy like him.😎

Ab shiva is really frustrated, he doesn't want to talk about the elephant in the room, poor guy just wants some sleep🤣🤣🤣.

But our dobii raavi wants a reaction from her hero.

Why is he quiet?

Why am I not the centre of his universe?🤷

Iska kuch nahii ho sakta😆😆.

Finally shiva gives her a warning.

"Zyada teen paanch karegi to Mai upar chat pe so jaunga"

She timidly goes on to pick the mattress after cribbing about the direction of bed, lack of space.😉😉

Our phoolkumari finds the mattress too heavy.

"Aahh.kitna bhari hai yeh"

Did she want her chattan pandya to come and help? Raavi and her nautanki 🤣🤣🤣

But our sakht launda doesn't pighal this time.bechari apna gussa takiye pe nikal rahi hai.🤭🤭

Wait! Did they just sleep in the same direction?🤓

Isn't this a progression?😍

What made her do that?😮😮


2) gombi needs some peace and quiet.today he was actually human.its too much for him to handle.i wish he shared his problems with Dev and shiva, but I guess he doesn't see them as adults even now. He shoulders everything alone,my heart went out to him when he said dhara to leave him alone 💔.

Why you had to give those Kangans to evil maami shiva?😭😭


3)the Dukaan scene.❤️

Our krishuu is backkk.🤸🤸

Loved how raavi sat on the seat haq se😍😍.

Kya biwigiri dikhaya usne😎😎

Way to go girll.💯💯

She does not know the difference between chawal Ka atta and maida.saari sethanigiri Nikal gayii madam ki.😆😆😆

PS- I liked how shiva didn't tell anything in front of the customer.waited for him to go before starting his taunts.such hubby wifey things.❤️


4) the atta scene.😍😍

Why are their romantic scenes so unique?

That was so aesthetically shot.❣️

Good direction, bgm, editing.everything was on point.👏👏👏👏

Shiva doesn't let his madam do any work🤭🤭.

he was telling her to go and sit while he sweeps the floor.can this guy get any cuter??😍😍

But our raavi isn't having any of it.she gets down to do her work like a good bacchi.why are they soo cutee.😭😭

Evil maami seeing her working.i.hope she doesn't create a scene.our shiva needs a break.🥺🥺


PS- now that we are getting store scenes can we plzzz have a flirty customer and possessive shiva.prettyyy plzzz😍😍😍😍

Precap- janaradan😡😡😡😡

How dare he insult gombi? Looks like he needs a second dose of pitayi.😖😖😖




This is such a beautiful review! I loved it! Raavi always wants to be the center of Shiva's universe 😆

ShiVi store scenes were gold! I thoroughly enjoyed them

I would love to see a possessive Shiva and Dobi Raavi too, now that Shiva is in angry mode

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Madheart

Finally up to date!!!🥳

And watched both yesterday's and today's epi..

As usual loved Chiki, ML, Piu, Raingoddess, Pixie, Shadow_kira(I'm sorry, I don't know your names) Aaliya,Priya and Mahi's take ❤️❤️ Not able to tag all of them

In yesterday's epi, most of then were in their character and Raavi getting angry on Dhara and Dhara giving it back was also amazing.. Glad Dhara gave sensible advices instead of rona dhona..

Raavi needed to vent out and glad she she understood she was venting out on a wrong person.. I loved how Rishita was okay with Raavi's feelings on Dev..

Yesterday's Shivi scenes were beautifully put by most of you all.. I get Gaura were worrie about Raavi not having a bed but like Shiva said Gaura don't even have a room, technically sleeping on the floor improves the health condition.. Not that I want Shivi to sleep on the floor but it did look aesthetic...😆 Gaumbi spent 15000 on the bed, he could have given Rasik bhai that money 🤪

I kinda like Hardik's scenes as well.. But his height distracted me the most 🤣🤣 He is so tall and the way Dhara looks at him as if she is talking to a giraffe 🤣

And today's epi was also amazing

Shiva trying to come back to his shell, calling her maami ki behen ki beti and Raavi trying to irritate him was so cute.

Dhara and Gaumbi having a fight gave me a vibe of my parents having a fight, I just hope they resolve it soon 😭 They were like true parents, despite having their own issues they didn't let anyone know and got back to bringing Shivi together... Is it just me who felt Shiva was delibrately saying Dhara to take Raavi along?? He knows how to get her to his way from childhood, he knew she would get pissed and stay back, didn't he?😉

Krish, my darling thankfully had ss today, I love it when he cheers for Shivi 😆

Dobi Raavi with chawal ka atta was smiley37smiley37 She cutely accepting her mistake and my goodness, they wasted a kilo of atta 🤣 and they were playing inside the store, people on the road can see free ka romance of Sheru Shiva and innocent (not so) si Raavi 🤣🤣Maagin could literally see the whole store from a little far... Alice looked super cute with Atta all over her face, but how did she manage to pull it off?? 🤣🤣

Janardhan 🤬

Gaumbi is going to hit him hardKinshuk said they had a fight sequence.. I'm all in for their fight, Jaanu deserves it for every word of his...

Nivii darling is too busy with AU content 🤣

Phew, long rant.. I found some symbolisms today and yesterday maybe post them later 😆


Lovely review! Will look forward to your symbolisms ❤️

I'm looking forward to a nice slap to Jaanu from Gautam 😎

Sheru Shiva aur Dobi Raavi ke romance ka free show toh sabhi ko dekhna hai 😉

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