PS|EDT 59|Lost Marbles, Amrish Puri & Phata Hua Sar (DT nt pg81) - Page 91

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

or dahiwaali

Dahiwali can drown in her own dahi! Oily can drown in oil..bacchi kaun? Maagin! She can slip and fall over those marbles😆

Originally posted by: Nups_mish

Dahiwali can drown in her own dahi! Oily can drown in oil..bacchi kaun? Maagin! She can slip and fall over those marbles😆

i like this plan 😆

Originally posted by: Nups_mish

Exactly why did they have that Raavi-Dhara scene today? It was absolutely unnecessary. It was just added so that Dhara gets to know about the diary part and interferes. Writers definitely need to improve their writing. Today's episode was disappointing!😕

Don't completely agree here- Dhara has made it clear she will not interfere and Raavi should deal with it herself.

In fact, I loved Dhara's advice. Yes, she did propose the marriage(no, she did NOT emotionally blackmail them, Shiva agreed without any question, Raavi was emotionally blackmailed by MausaPa.)

Now that they have agreed for whatever reason, ShiVi need to figure it out for themselves- insecurities and all. That was also the advice she gave Shiva.

This is the most non-interfering way GauRa could have reacted IMO 🤷‍♀️

The ShiVi scenes definitely need to be written better- they have no head or tail

Mere Shiva Dhara. He latches on to her just like a child would. They look like a montage from Shakespeare's Gertrude and Hamlet, or Ghazal-Haider from Vishal Bhardwaj’s Hamlet!

My heart beats they are:

They are twinning! ❤️

I think writers also need to do a better job in writing Rishita's character along with Raavi.. In some episodes she is relatable while in other episodes I cannot connect with her at all. She already has a bedroom and her own bed, why do so much drama for a new bed? That was plain childish and stupid! It wasnt practical... I thought they wanted to make Rishita the practical one.. And then all of a sudden, one fine day she will become Rishimendra and save the Pandya family🤢

Raavi’s dialogue to Dhara, “ wohi toh problem haina Dhara di, uska yeh kitaabon jaisa silent hero type style na mere andhar ka guilt ko violent kar deta hai”🤣🤣

Raavi has to bring her in 1.0 version often🤣

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

or dahiwaali

i don't think dahiwali will come back for sometime now, her work is done 🤣 She has set the ball rolling for Dhara's pregnancy track.

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

They definitely nessed up the ShiVi transition today. So Shiva's stance is clear. But Raavi, despite her stance being knows(I think), seemed all over the place.

Her angry complaint to Dhara though make sense did not flow from the mood she was in yesterday. I wish they had shown her waking to an empty bed, and showed her disappointment/frustration turn to anger.

Also after the anger and everyone pacifying her, the scene in the kitchen seemed abrupt. I wish they was a monologue just for a minute about how she was angry, but understands that she needs to speak with Shiva.

Shiva's point of view is explicitly clarified through thought dialogues as well as conversations with surrounding people.

But for Raavi we are having to fill in the blanks. I wish they would improve the writing for Raavi 😐

I'm not saying Raavi is a poorly written character (as she has a decent back story and has the potential to be an inspiring character); however, I think the CVs are having a little too much fun writing Shiva's character because of his extensive back story. Shiva has a little bit of everything. He is full of anger, he is volatile, he is fiercely protective, he is a wonderful younger and older brother, he is a prankster at heart, and he is a young boy coming to terms with his feelings. He is a little bit of everything, just like what a lot of us are like in real life.

Meanwhile, a lot of the other characters are restricted in terms of personality. Dev is a confusing character that doesn't seem to have made his own voice, Raavi is someone who is happy and pure (but when it comes to Shiva, she has sometimes unreasonable anger), Dhara, sometimes, wavers as a character too, Gaumbi needs more screen time than what he has in my opinion, Krish definitely needs more screen space.

When writing FFs, Shiva's voice is always easier to write because of how versatile of a character he is. You could write him in any way, and it would make sense and that's because the CVs crafted him in this manner. However, they should transition into building the other characters. Dhara's pregnancy track could be a great way for them to build Dhara's character (i.e., what she's learned in 10 years of marriage, how she's evaded taunts from others in the past) as well as provide Gaumbi the screen space he deserves (besides just being Dhara's husband or the eldest brother to the family, I want to see him as a businessman, as a friend/brother-in-law to Hardik, etc.)

This MU is a great way to solidify Raavi's character. Dev's words today were the most interesting to me today of how he's the side character to Raavi and Shiva. There's much more to their childhood than what the CVs are showing us. I had this idea a few days ago, imagining Raavi and Shiva being best friends prior to Shiva's father's death (hence another reason of Dev's side character nature). However, after his father's death, Shiva closes himself from everyone in that family, including Raavi. Raavi initially tries to get closer, but Shiva keeps pushing her away, taunting her, throwing juice on her, calling her his number one dushman. Eventually, Raavi becomes rock hard against Shiva because she doesn't want to get close to him just to become hurt by him again. This is just an idea, but if they followed with something similar, I think it would really add voice to why Raavi keeps fluctuating.

I loved the Shivi scene too, unpopular opinion here!

It's very consistent with a pattern Shiva follows with Raavi!

Rasta badalne is waqt aa gaya hai!

Originally posted by: Nups_mish

I think writers also need to do a better job in writing Rishita's character along with Raavi.. In some episodes she is relatable while in other episodes I cannot connect with her at all. She already has a bedroom and her own bed, why do so much drama for a new bed? That was plain childish and stupid! It wasnt practical... I thought they wanted to make Rishita the practical one.. And then all of a sudden, one fine day she will become Rishimendra and save the Pandya family🤢

Rishita wants everything brand new not just Dev😆 This is the beginning of her demands, wait till she asks for a separate bathroom😆

Rishita’s character graph is going to save the family and make demands, rinse and repeat the cycle😆