I finally updated the first chapter of my FF - Tainted.
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/udariyaan/5235787/ff-tainted-chapter-five-page-10?pn=4
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- Niki
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I finally updated the first chapter of my FF - Tainted.
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/udariyaan/5235787/ff-tainted-chapter-five-page-10?pn=4
Would love your views.
- Niki
(Tagging a few. Other readers, please do check.)
true...Originally posted by: music_girl
@bold
Being a fandom before where the ML was in a triangle.
It was shit times, one episode this fandom is pleased, the next episode the next.
It's a little surprising that the male lead's character wasn't completely butchered, I still liked the character so did many people.
Still each fandom felt shit.
But but if the other fandom watched the show with eyes open, it was already known with whom he would end up with, too many "small" clues with people ignored. 😆
I feel they will keep afloat this 2 ships as long as they can but it's destroying the essence of the 3 characters because they are all connected to this love story and have no other proper story other than this. That's why it sucks.
Itv ko ek specific number of episodes ka show banana chahiye ..
Already writers ne Jasmine ka character destroy kar diya ... Koyi be sane viewer uske character se kabhi connect nahi hoga.
Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs
The hell do you think I'll be focusing on Fateh's tears when he's shirtless?!! 😆
Niki! Mg! This will be great material for... umm... research!! yes fanfic research lol 👀👀👀
I don't really care 😆
I'd take any POV of his where I don't feel like screaming in frustration over this any day 😆
Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs
The hell do you think I'll be focusing on Fateh's tears when he's shirtless?!! 😆
Niki! Mg! This will be great material for... umm... research!! yes fanfic research lol 👀👀👀
Oh...hehe!
Shirtless Fateh will be a nain-sukh.
I did drool on Ankit as Parth. I am ready again!!!!!
Originally posted by: music_girl
I don't really care 😆
I'd take any POV of his where I don't feel like screaming in frustration over this any day 😆
Oh shush Mg that's not itv you're asking for. Given the lack of ML exposure in itv (its always the FL being revealing and unless you're lesbian you don't really enjoy it) I can't say no to this.😆
Originally posted by: mistofshadows
Oh...hehe!
Shirtless Fateh will be a nain-sukh.
I did drool on Ankit as Parth. I am ready again!!!!!
I'll keep the tissues ready to keep the drool in check lol 😆
No mood of watching . Even I can't keep positive if I see Fateh so occupied by Chameli. Hopefully he will be able see through her plots
What is this shirtless Fateh !! Chameli ne sapne me dekha kya ?
Originally posted by: music_girl
Everything you said is absolutely correct.
Tejo needs other friends except Fateh. 🤪 but not like Jasmine's dumb friends 😆
This is too "progressive" for itv, no drama quotient 😆😆
Even in Vampire Diaries, at some point Elena was clear. I strongly disliked her. 😆
Drama? Well, this drama queen *points to myself* will add some classic soap opera drama into this track, its a verrrryyy common trope. Nothing unusual at all 😈 …
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Tejo sneaks out of the Virk's house under the guise of visiting a friend along with Mahi. They slip out of their basic suits and slip on some high heels to pair with their LBDs
Mahi: God bhabhi, jabse veer ji trip pe nikle hain mai toh boriyat se mari jaa rahi thi, uppar se woh paagal Amrik, jab dekho aapke peeche laga rehta hai. Veer ji ke jaane ke baad to aur bhi zyaada chipakne laga hai. Thank god we have a night out today.
Tejo: It's ok Mahi ye sab toh life me chalta rehta hai, what's important right now is that we enjoy ourselves!
They both laughed and made their way towards the bright pink limo rented by Tejo's friend Daya
........
Mahi and Tejo had the time of their lives on the dance floor. Feeling parched they make their way towards the bar.
Tejo: Two bottles of water please.
Mahi: Two vodka shots as well!
Tejo: Hey no drinking tonight, Do you want mummyji to find out!
Mahi: Not if we drink in moderation and spray two bottles worth of sanitizer onto ourselves, she'll never know the difference! they both contain alcohol anyway.
The two giggle amongst themselves before a conversation from behind them entered their ears.
"Ugh! its so hard pretending to be a sanskaari maa when you're just a basic b***h on the inside. Bartender, two more shots please"
"I know right? freaking normies. By the way jeeji won't you stink of alcohol?"
"I'll spray some sanitizer onto myself, it's not like they're ever find out. Again Nimmo, for the last time don't call me 'jeeji' when we're out clubbing. Call me 'Preet, get it? Preet!"
Tejo: …
Mahi: …
They both slowly turn back only to make eye contact with Gurpreet and Nimmo, also in LBDs and smoky makeup.
*Awkward silence ensues*
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Behold! The drama you all wished for Lmao, how you like that Mg?🤣Ima just run away before I get murdered 😛
Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs
Drama? Well, this drama queen *points to myself* will add some classic soap opera drama into this track, its a verrrryyy common trope. Nothing unusual at all 😈 …
__________________________________
Tejo sneaks out of the Virk's house under the guise of visiting a friend along with Mahi. They slip out of their basic suits and slip on some high heels to pair with their LBDs
Mahi: God bhabhi, jabse veer ji trip pe nikle hain mai toh boriyat se mari jaa rahi thi, uppar se woh paagal Amrik, jab dekho aapke peeche laga rehta hai. Veer ji ke jaane ke baad to aur bhi zyaada chipakne laga hai. Thank god we have a night out today.
Tejo: It's ok Mahi ye sab toh life me chalta rehta hai, what's important right now is that we enjoy ourselves!
They both laughed and made their way towards the bright pink limo rented by Tejo's friend Daya
........
Mahi and Tejo had the time of their lives on the dance floor. Feeling parched they make their way towards the bar.
Tejo: Two bottles of water please.
Mahi: Two vodka shots as well!
Tejo: Hey no drinking tonight, Do you want mummyji to find out!
Mahi: Not if we drink in moderation and spray two bottles worth of sanitizer onto ourselves, she'll never know the difference! they both contain alcohol anyway.
The two giggle amongst themselves before a conversation from behind them entered their ears.
"Ugh! its so hard pretending to be a sanskaari maa when you're just a basic b***h on the inside. Bartender, two more shots please"
"I know right? freaking normies. By the way jeeji won't you stink of alcohol?"
"I'll spray some sanitizer onto myself, it's not like they're ever find out. Again Nimmo, for the last time don't call me 'jeeji' when we're out clubbing. Call me 'Preet, get it? Preet!"
Tejo: …
Mahi: …
They both slowly turn back only to make eye contact with Gurpreet and Nimmo, also in LBDs and smoky makeup.
*Awkward silence ensues*
______________________________________
Behold! The drama you all wished for Lmao, how you like that Mg?🤣Ima just run away before I get murdered 😛
Awesome 👏
Makers can't get this creative. I think in the mehendi show the MIL and the DIL got drunk together 😆
But there is no way there is going to be a club in that village and if there is, the rumours might spread the next day 🤪
Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs
Drama? Well, this drama queen *points to myself* will add some classic soap opera drama into this track, its a verrrryyy common trope. Nothing unusual at all 😈 …
__________________________________
Tejo sneaks out of the Virk's house under the guise of visiting a friend along with Mahi. They slip out of their basic suits and slip on some high heels to pair with their LBDs
Mahi: God bhabhi, jabse veer ji trip pe nikle hain mai toh boriyat se mari jaa rahi thi, uppar se woh paagal Amrik, jab dekho aapke peeche laga rehta hai. Veer ji ke jaane ke baad to aur bhi zyaada chipakne laga hai. Thank god we have a night out today.
Tejo: It's ok Mahi ye sab toh life me chalta rehta hai, what's important right now is that we enjoy ourselves!
They both laughed and made their way towards the bright pink limo rented by Tejo's friend Daya
........
Mahi and Tejo had the time of their lives on the dance floor. Feeling parched they make their way towards the bar.
Tejo: Two bottles of water please.
Mahi: Two vodka shots as well!
Tejo: Hey no drinking tonight, Do you want mummyji to find out!
Mahi: Not if we drink in moderation and spray two bottles worth of sanitizer onto ourselves, she'll never know the difference! they both contain alcohol anyway.
The two giggle amongst themselves before a conversation from behind them entered their ears.
"Ugh! its so hard pretending to be a sanskaari maa when you're just a basic b***h on the inside. Bartender, two more shots please"
"I know right? freaking normies. By the way jeeji won't you stink of alcohol?"
"I'll spray some sanitizer onto myself, it's not like they're ever find out. Again Nimmo, for the last time don't call me 'jeeji' when we're out clubbing. Call me 'Preet, get it? Preet!"
Tejo: …
Mahi: …
They both slowly turn back only to make eye contact with Gurpreet and Nimmo, also in LBDs and smoky makeup.
*Awkward silence ensues*
______________________________________
Behold! The drama you all wished for Lmao, how you like that Mg?🤣Ima just run away before I get murdered 😛
🤣🤣
Loved this but the highlight is bold. Daya is Tejo's friend and he still had an affair with Fateh?!! Or wait did Tejo become friends with him because she accepts the affair?😲
Have I made it worse?😆 You can always add more drama