PS|EDT #55|ShiVi aur Bhavna Mein Khoye Hue, Unki Chinta Ne Hume Sataya - Page 15

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Posted: 4 years ago

Eshaaaa everyone wants to readdd!

Writers block bhagane ke liye read ua own stories one time and then read the comments. I do this sometimes and It helps!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Trust me it’s 90% done and I want to post it so badly but can’t seem to connect certain parts 😆 I don’t want to post it so late that no one is interested anymore 😒

I keep promising Piu as well 😆

Hoping this track gets rid of my writers block 😆

Maybe you can get a beta reader- one of the other lovely writers in the forum, to take an initial look at your work 😊 You might be able to brainstorm ideas and figure out where you are blocked.

Just my 2 cents🤷‍♀️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: mpks1

Please, you got to finish the part 3 of your TS, I can’t wait anymore 😆

I will real soon!! 😆 glad everyone is still interested to read it 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

I will real soon!! 😆 glad everyone is still interested to read it 😆

Tu bas likh

Readers ki kami nahin hai yahan😎

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

Maybe you can get a beta reader- one of the other lovely writers in the forum, to take an initial look at your work 😊 You might be able to brainstorm ideas and figure out where you are blocked.

Just my 2 cents🤷‍♀️

That’s a great idea! I was thinking the same! Even someone to bounce ideas off of! If anyone is interested, PM me 🤗 Until then, I’ll work out the areas which need to be connected! Thanks for the idea ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

It’s such a lazy Sunday for me 😆 and I have 1000 more posts to go under I reach the next level... I have been a Rockerz since 2014 😆


ooooh.. then join the Sizzlers club phast phast! 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

I have weaknesses for Shiva-Dhara and Gaumbi, but Raavi has always been my muse! This girl, with her untainted soul, innocent heart and pure eyes, can make anyone fall in love with her.

She might be an airhead, but she has a platinum heart. Platinum is forever! It isn't shiny but has a charm of formidable longevity.

She is the perfect gossamer Veil of Solace for The rustic Shiva!

Her abandonment issues are enormous, and that's why, apart from curiosity, she always tags along with her anchor! She has pretty much fixated on one hope of love throughout her life. She might not realise, but she has already given him that place in her heart! ❤️


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I love this peach make up, it really brings out her beautiful lips and eyes! Pouty Billi is wondering where is her Billa 🤣

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She can't sleep 🤣🤣

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Look at her restlessness 😵

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She is a true Chipkali. Cant stay without sticking with Shiva 😆

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She looks like an illusion in this one! She makes it so clear that despite her caring for him, he just misunderstood her. Hasn't it always been like this? Raavi caring for him and Shiva misinterpreting her!

I love this shot so much! Raavi is dainty, porcelain and unaware, while Shiva is burnished with toil and corroded by deep thinking! Sigh! The contrast! ☺️


The milky smoothness is contrasted with brass burnished skin!!! They look like characters put together with great thought!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Trust me it’s 90% done and I want to post it so badly but can’t seem to connect certain parts 😆 I don’t want to post it so late that no one is interested anymore 😒

I keep promising Piu as well 😆

Hoping this track gets rid of my writers block 😆

Please please post this phast phast ❤️

I am sure it will be amazing❤️

Edited by ItsmePriya - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese


ooooh.. then join the Sizzlers club phast phast! 😆

Haha that’s the plan 😉😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

All this phast phast talk reminds me of Gaumbi... and then I get distracted ☺️ 🤣

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