Originally posted by: Shristhi2002
Haiiiii, this was such a heart wrenching and squeezing it's blood out update, you are really a gifted writer...❤️ 😳
The earliest flashback was so amazing, the transition is so amazing with years. But,it still just went to prove that true love is something which never fades with time, but it only grows with time to an extent that the difference between two individuals is almost lost, their are two bodies, but one soul as they say.
I love this!!!! Beautifully put!
The fear is something evident, her pain had so much to add up in one statement. Fear that she lost precious moments with the love of her life before he departed, fear that she missed his feel against her arms and the way he and his aura, along with his unique scent soothed her soul, giving her endless peace. And how they couldn't convey that they will be waiting she will be waiting during his departure, all this waz clearly seen in Sai and her body language.
Smell is the deepest sense, tied to memories... I had explored this in my OSes for IPKKND extensively...
The reason why they treasure their pre-Mission time is that they are never sure what will happen... and the fear that she lost out on that is what broke through her control... and this breakdown was needed to relieve their stress and to let it all out..
Cuz, not only the state, but it's also the emotions which play out here. And Virat's as well, they both might have numerous dreams blossomed imagining their young one in their arms, but ,when they were suddenly confronted with this situation, maybe a sudden halt to the speed, they felt a jerk of emotions. Cuz, they are managing a boat , but they care for the future passenger which they are awaiting. So lovely. ❤️
Virat's fear's I actually haven't touched upon in detail here... the focus was only on Sai and his concern for her well-being, his worry for her health... I am debating if I should do one more chapter for the morning, where Sai realises his fear that he might never get to see his baby... i might..
And then, the lovely part yet is, they are high on emotions, as I said, they have a stir in it, but they have not lost control over these emotions or have forgot or submitted themselves to these. Virat's understanding of Sai and his duty were really good, actually I loved that part. Sorry if I seem like a sadist, but I was hoping that he does not cancel it don't know why.😆
He will never back out... and she will never ask that of him.
She will push him to go, because she knows it will destroy him if he ever fails in his duty. Her Virat Sir will never forgive himself, and Sai will never let that happen!
And then, the holding part. As in ,finally getting a hold on themselves, finally getting a positive balance between dreams and reality, preparing oneself, and again realising that there is no limit to dreams, it can even begin with a rajma and those dreams can be beautifully woven with the reality, even if it begins as a nikamba, but their very own nikamba.....❤️
I'm so excited to see the serial unfold,... and am dreaming of how this Theekhi Mulgi and Shaant Jaasoos begin their life together in the truest sense... and start a family...
The entire update was just fabulous, finally settling into peace. Just like everything, whether it is storm , heat, floods or rain, or extreme sunlight, the end is always peace and sanity. Calmness as always. But, it's just that peace is sometimes better experienced with a companion, or let's say, due to the companion here.
Sorry, I don't realise what am I typing🤣
This final sentence was love!!! And your unfiltered love... thanks!!!
But pls update soon❤️