SS - Pre - Mission Rituals _ pt 3(C) pg 23_updt 07 July - Page 19

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nja91

Absolutely amazing! Loved how Sairat talked it out. This was so so real, so touching. It was beautifully written. I absolutely loved it. I like that callback from earlier that aai had about what Sai said. Please keep writing. I wanna keep reading your OS/FFs.

Just keep writing!


Not fair, Neerja!!! Itna dimaag khaya mera... mujhse post karvaayi... aur itni choti comment!!!

🤣

Cheeku se poocho... if I need comments, I need comments! Daantungi mai warna 😈

But thanks, dearie... for all the love!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvanyuvani

Omg this was too good.. I felt as if I was living in the moment with them ❤️

You're too talented darling.. 🤗

Keep writing 🥰😍

And pls don't give any tragedy.. Please please 😌🥺

Btw can i call u chechi 😳?


Yes of course!!!

No tragedy ever! There will be pain and hurt... but Viru and Sai are endgame, and will live till they are 100 and 109 at least!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu


Not fair, Neerja!!! Itna dimaag khaya mera... mujhse post karvaayi... aur itni choti comment!!!

🤣

Cheeku se poocho... if I need comments, I need comments! Daantungi mai warna 😈

But thanks, dearie... for all the love!

sahi bol rahi hai Appu. Tang kar degi tumhe. De do long comments. Tumhara hi fayda hai😆
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Posted: 4 years ago

By the way, I'm waiting for your reply Appu😈

Edited by cheekukabeej - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sairat07

Oh god!!! Falling in love with ur writing yaar....Fabulous!!!❤

I just loved it!!!!🥰🥰🥰

This seems so real...I mean how Virat consoled her and then our Jungli Mulgi feeling he went without meeting he..How innocent! The age gap between these two is blessing for their marriage rather than any flaw.....Perfect for each other...

It is the age gap that makes Virat understand her so well, be patient with her; and what makes Sai listen to him, respect him, and accept his opinions even when she has conflicting opinions... what would have been difficult for anyone else becomes their greatest strength!

Her shifting from Virat to Virat Sir and vice versa according to her mood and need...Aww...She is so young and has gone through too much...easy to say but the care, the affection and the love and respect Virat holds for her is at another level

Yes!!! He respects her, he sees her as someone who has all the qualities he would like to have... as his perfect compliment!

And for him, her calling him Sir brings out his affectionate, pampering side... see how he refers to himself as "uska Virat Sir"😳

None can match their level... How beautifully and smoothly these both slips into their comfort zones... Speaking lot with silence shows how much this relationship is blossomed!!!

❤️smiley27smiley27smiley27

And most importantly the family support...No matter what they r there and Virat trusts them...Loved how u explored this bond also!

Family is complicated... family is family... I come from a huge one... and we are always on 'not-speaking-terms' with someone or the other... but all it takes is one chance meeting, we forget and bond... until the next fight.

But if any outsider ever touches one of us... we fall on them like a pile of rocks!

Family is crazy!

And here is she with her electrifying smile... Cracking jokes and making fun around....Floating rajma..Sai u r love...Nikamma Pati...Hawwww and our lover boy Viru is so ghum in baiko's love that he didn't care about his insult....These both can be their real in front of each other...Much lovely!!!!

She and she alone can insult him without insulting him... it is their love language!!!

And still they didn't lose patience and being a true soulmate she apologised for her behaviour and to break his strength.... And going through all this they r back with their selves ...Supporting each other and being each other's strength!!!🥺

Awwwww!!!

Lovely update dear!!!!

Continue super soon....🤧

Happy writing!!!!!❣️


Oh wow!!! Your love for this story is humbling! And I don't know your name!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aa rahi hu... iss wale me na, i haven't replied to anyone except you... ye karke aati hu!

Aur 'Wish' ki 'Sai-perspective'😳 bhi karna hai!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: laksh

Chapter 2 was beautiful. I love how you describe Sai and Virat. I have always found you having a good understanding of them and their actions in all your stories. It just enhances the beauty of the story.

I am lattu over them, I live in their heads and hearts... ask Cheeku... i eat her head with my takes on them...

So. Sai and Virat are that comfortable now? Nice to know. The scene in college and balcony was too good.

They progress realistically, slowly, and with deep understanding!

Aai will be proud 😅. The girl who had forgotten her passport sized photograph during the admission, the girl whose bag Virat had to check on the first day of college is now packing all of Virat’s things when he is going on a mission. Nice to see these. I wish they show us such things in details in the show too.

When you love someone that deeply, and live with them, you notice things... Virat said the same in a recent episode too... you just need to have the heart to look, see and remember...

I thought Sai would ask him not to climb on any electric post and call her, but she instead said ji 🤣🤣.

Never!! Sai would get him the ladder!!!

Her reply to Sonali was too good, Kaku and Ninad proud 😲😊. Love how Virat called her Maajhi Aai and Theekhi mulgi 😅.

Thanks for tagging me.


Thanks darling!! 😳

Did you read chapter 3? All three parts?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Haiiiii, this was such a heart wrenching and squeezing it's blood out update, you are really a gifted writer...❤️ 😳

The earliest flashback was so amazing, the transition is so amazing with years. But,it still just went to prove that true love is something which never fades with time, but it only grows with time to an extent that the difference between two individuals is almost lost, their are two bodies, but one soul as they say.

I love this!!!! Beautifully put!

The fear is something evident, her pain had so much to add up in one statement. Fear that she lost precious moments with the love of her life before he departed, fear that she missed his feel against her arms and the way he and his aura, along with his unique scent soothed her soul, giving her endless peace. And how they couldn't convey that they will be waiting she will be waiting during his departure, all this waz clearly seen in Sai and her body language.

Smell is the deepest sense, tied to memories... I had explored this in my OSes for IPKKND extensively...

The reason why they treasure their pre-Mission time is that they are never sure what will happen... and the fear that she lost out on that is what broke through her control... and this breakdown was needed to relieve their stress and to let it all out..

Cuz, not only the state, but it's also the emotions which play out here. And Virat's as well, they both might have numerous dreams blossomed imagining their young one in their arms, but ,when they were suddenly confronted with this situation, maybe a sudden halt to the speed, they felt a jerk of emotions. Cuz, they are managing a boat , but they care for the future passenger which they are awaiting. So lovely. ❤️

Virat's fear's I actually haven't touched upon in detail here... the focus was only on Sai and his concern for her well-being, his worry for her health... I am debating if I should do one more chapter for the morning, where Sai realises his fear that he might never get to see his baby... i might..

And then, the lovely part yet is, they are high on emotions, as I said, they have a stir in it, but they have not lost control over these emotions or have forgot or submitted themselves to these. Virat's understanding of Sai and his duty were really good, actually I loved that part. Sorry if I seem like a sadist, but I was hoping that he does not cancel it don't know why.😆

He will never back out... and she will never ask that of him.

She will push him to go, because she knows it will destroy him if he ever fails in his duty. Her Virat Sir will never forgive himself, and Sai will never let that happen!

And then, the holding part. As in ,finally getting a hold on themselves, finally getting a positive balance between dreams and reality, preparing oneself, and again realising that there is no limit to dreams, it can even begin with a rajma and those dreams can be beautifully woven with the reality, even if it begins as a nikamba, but their very own nikamba.....❤️

I'm so excited to see the serial unfold,... and am dreaming of how this Theekhi Mulgi and Shaant Jaasoos begin their life together in the truest sense... and start a family...

The entire update was just fabulous, finally settling into peace. Just like everything, whether it is storm , heat, floods or rain, or extreme sunlight, the end is always peace and sanity. Calmness as always. But, it's just that peace is sometimes better experienced with a companion, or let's say, due to the companion here.

Sorry, I don't realise what am I typing🤣

This final sentence was love!!! And your unfiltered love... thanks!!!

But pls update soon❤️


Shristhi my darling!!! Sorry for the late reply, but this emotional comment won my heart...

Dikh raha hai ki tum sach me dil se likha hai se ❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

A very beautiful update. Both Virat and Sai are stressed and are tensed but keeping a brave front for each other. They are both each other's strength. Sai calling the nikamma just like Virat. This was so hilarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. Waiting for the next part. Hope Virat returns from his mission safe and sound.


Thanks so much, for the love...

He will... never fear... 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nja91

Waiting for your next piece of writing. Please give another os/ff!!

Mehenat karo!!!!

Reply dekho!!! 🤣

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