RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 99

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

S to P transition was the thing I was most worried about to keep it under wraps still shouldn't be plain idiotic.

I wrote for P only. Even for S it was always how bad of an actor and how impulsive P is still keeping her iron willed for her task. So didn't needed to worry much.

Regarding that... It was coming out to be in 2-3 chapters with 3 different version. This was what i finally zeroed down still a very long epilogue.

I wanted to keep it a straight forward easy read so impact is more of what is happening to characters then why it is happening.

Ved is in Jail. U cn take food for him.

I wanted to know how you would make them accept it and I liked how it was so in flow. It just happened. It was an easy read comparing others.

He fell from the terrace to the jail, what a safe landing?

I will bring onions so he can share your favorites with you there. 😎

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

If Ved wait for her food, he will die of hunger before his sentence end. She haven't yet delivered the Pizza you offered us.

Originally posted by: Trista101

Actually, the blame is neither on Lateuser nor his sarcasm ; it was me who asked where Farhad would be going, and I would gladly accept being the one who started all this.😎😆

You are the one to be blamed.

Shouldn't have done that. 🤣

Originally posted by: Trista101

PIZZAS!!🤩

I hope you are happy now... 🤗

Queen never forgets, just gets busy so late delivery.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

You are the one to be blamed.

Shouldn't have done that. 🤣

Originally posted by: Trista101

100 lives for my pizza! (Pizza ke liye 100 jaan kurbaan!)

This was bad...

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Zips work better...extra caution

🤐

Guns work much much better but can't threaten... so politeness... finger on ur lips

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Yes, a couple of times. But I wouldn't mind hearing them again.

So much "Modesty "

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Queen is on duty. 🤗

It was so much fun.

In third chapter he brought Sarika.... So discussions were supposed to happen.

The blame is not on Lateuser 's shoulder Prriyam, rather on his sarcasm. 😎

Thank you for making me the undisputed Queen of IF IO even though a couple of time I myself doubted my intelligence.

nd u were right to doubt that... some say... not me

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Here are the pizzas for my clan. Start your day with cheese, onions, capsicum, tomatos, chillies and olives.... Enjoy 🥳🥳

Pizza delivery guy was crazy that he took the longest route to my house. That guy was on something..... May be sarcasm. 🤣

And here is the favorite of Lateuser. Enjoy your mysterious onions... 😋😎🤪

So basically I m pizza delivering vampire slayer... fine... explains likeness for onion garlic nd all