SS - Pre - Mission Rituals _ pt 3(C) pg 23_updt 07 July - Page 9

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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Much surprised dear!🤗

Glad to be a reader of this wonderful piece of art! Loved it ,each and every word evoking emotions.... Suppperb!!👏👍🏼

And glad to know this is going to be more long!!!

Sai is pregnant! And still my girl is behaving with such maturity.... I just love when she respects his duty! Most beautiful part!

This is so awesome that this pair knows already what's going on each other's mind....SaiRat❤

The imagination of this only gives u warm feeling! Lovely!

FIVE YEARS PASSED AND WITH EACH PASSING DAY THEY HAVE BECOME MORE LOVABLE!

Eagerly waiting for next update!!!!!!!!!

Thank u for tagging me!!!😳

Continue soon

Happy writing!❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#82

Beautiful chapter 😍😍😍😍

It’s been five years to their marriage and Sai has always been there for Virat ❤️❤️❤️

Sai is pregnant!!!🥺🥺❤️❤️

And now Virat has to go on another mission.

Sai knows his look 🥺🥺🥺

She’s always been strong but her hormones are getting her.

Sai is Virat’s strength 🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️

Loved it 💕💕

Update soon ❣️❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#83

I had tears in my eyes literally. My excuse is PMS and your beautiful writing 😭

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Posted: 4 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Awweeee!!!!! Hormones An emotions!!!

Quite a situation for Virat An sai!!!! Can't let go can't stay back...... Bechare Dono!!!

But that is all part An parcel...... Being the strength for the partner.... The chakrams going sweet An nice is really amazing!!!

Happy writing..... We are certainly not complaining for long updates 😁😁😁

Continue soon!!! 💝💝


Thanks for that super-quick reply, dear!!😳

The biggest plus in these two are how they make up for eachother's weaknesses... Sai's outspokenness compensates for Virat's silences, and vice-versa; and Virat's calm compensates for Sai's rashness...

Over the years, this complementing and compensating will only become deeper..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Oh Appu!!!

Why did you make me cry 😭

Ahh, Cheeku 🤗❤️

God! You just brought them alive in front of my eyes. I feel like a part of their lives.

I am in the room with them when I write... I see them, and you see them through my eyes...❤️

Even though you show storms in their minds, the setting they belong to feels like a calm starry night.

They do create their own cocoon. They have both weathered so much in their young lives, have fought against so much to reach where they are, that they create their own haven within themselves. They don't need a space to withdraw into themselves to create their own safe haven.

Where things are unknown. But still beautiful.

Where you are not sure what will happen. How dark it will be. But at the same time, you can't help but admire the beauty of the moon.

What dangers might be lurking around. But still can't help but be still and soak in its beauty.

With Sai and Virat communication about the impending mission, it feels as if there's a dangerous storm outside their doorstep, but there's warmth in the narrow space of their bedroom. As if in their embrace, is a whole safe haven, Where no storm can enter. There is noise of the storm but their heartbeats have the capacity to drown that noise.

This is beautifully put!!! Exactly what I meant to convey...

Their silent Love is louder than the screaming storm.

I know I have said this before. But you are a magician Appu❤️

Your words are ambrosia to me... ❤️❤️❤️❤️

The ability that you have to weave their emotions in a warm sweater like manner. Like a symbol, that is going to stay with you forever and keep reminding you of the love it was created with. For you. Just for you❤️

And privileged we lot are, to be able to even glimpse it... hai naa?

I am running short of words to describe how I feel about this❤️

Simply grateful to be a part of this journey ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Me too, babe, me too!!!


Cheeku, my love, your comments make me tear up, honestly. 🤗

There is beauty and poetry in you and your words, and I'm so touched every time how you are moved enough by what I write that they come flowing out generously and poignantly! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: scarlett22

Thank you for tagging me.

I love the theme you have chosen. And this third scenario is just too good. I can imagine the scene play out on screen.


Thanks so much!! Glad that you liked it 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: shah10

Beautiful update

Aww. Sai is pregnant.

Oh no..Virat is going on dangerous missions

Hope he'll back soon

🤣 Virat will always go for dangerous missions... woh hi toh spice hai, life ki!!! And his Sai will hold steady and wait...😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

Superb update 😘😘

OMG ! Sai is pregnant YAY !!!!!!! 💃💃💃💃

But Veeru ko itne dangerous mission pe jana h voh bhi aise time pe 😭😭 pata nhi Sai pe kya beet rhi hogi phle itni badi khushi mili aur achanak se ye mission use kaisa feel ho rha hoga bhagwan na kra par agar Veeru ko kuch ho gya toh phir unka baby kabhi apne baba ko nhi dekh payega Sai ki bhi Aai usko janam dete hue chal basi use is pain je bare me pata h voh toh bilkul toot jaygi but thank god hume toh pata h ki Veeru bilkul theek hoga 😌😌

And Ninad bursting into tears and hugging Sai just melted my heart ❤️ if Aaba had been alive he would have given the same reaction 🤧🤧

All in all a very beautifully written emotional chapter 🥺🥺


You know what I loved most about your comment?

I could feel by just reading it that you wrote it in a rush, feeling very emotional after reading the chapter!! 🤗

That in itself is the biggest compliment ❤️❤️

Viru ko kuch nahi hoga, theek thaak wapas aa jaayega har bar apni Baiko ke paas

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Posted: 4 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Wonderful update. Loved Virat and Sai interaction before him leaving for the mission. Virat's anxiety of leaving his pregnant wife was very well written.

And, Ninad hugging Sai was so emotional.


Thanks so much!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Superb..... beautifully written......marvellous....

The way you described the emotions is very beautiful 😍❤

Finally everything became normal on Chavan Niwas and also they accepted Sai wholeheartedly..... Pakhi also moved on... nice...

Excited for the next part....


So happy to hear this from a fellow writer 😳

Planning to write a few more to show how everyone has moved on accepted things... life is very peaceful after 5 years 😃

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