Originally posted by: vishalsangeeta
Yes Indu....even I mentioned illogical
Kuchh bhi kar ke separation dikhana tha....
Writing could have improved....some impact ful story...which makes the separation logical
Separation to aana hi tha....but was expecting some logic there
Itana illogical???? Kuchh bhi.. shayad makers ko apane style me sochaneka bhi samay nai mil paya....Kyun jaruri tha yaar separation?
Accha ek akhari baar seh lijiyega, mere khwabonka leap:
Bon is in kalkatta/ bigger city for her college education... She is staying there with some trusted family... Ani is famous n respected barrister in the region and visits Calcutta n bon every week..
So the leap will be like ani is at that home after finishing his day in Calcutta court.. somebody calls Bondita...Dekh tere patibabu aa gaye.. and there comes elder bon running and holding a paper which published appreciation article on Ani with his photograph..
Bon will say laughing aagaye aap, dekhiye mere haath me kya hai? Pata hai mahavidyalay me sab kitana jalate hai muzase kyonki aap mere pati babu hai! With her signature laugher n proud in eyes...
Ani: haan unhe sirf ye kamyabi ki chamak dikhati hai.. par unhe kya pata es gussail aur fitoori Aniruddha ki patni banana, uska gurur banana, use usakehi gharwalonse jode rakhana koi saral kam nai.. utani himmat to sirf es bondita me hai..With his signature proud looks for bon... And so on unaki kabhi khatam na hone wali batein...
PS: no intention to hurt anybody...No intention to spread any negativity, its just fantasy, If someone feels the post is not right please let me know I will delete it... We will.maintain forum peace...
Edited by Mugkale - 4 years ago