MG:FF- LOVE..REVENGE.......REGRET!!! Part 5 PG 15 - Page 6

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Posted: 2 years ago
#51

Thank you everyone for ur likes and lovly comments.

Hope i will get same response of my ff because it motivated me to write. 


Hope i get more good response in my this part .

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 3




Some where in London


In a tall building.., a tall ,fair, n handsome man with lil bread in his face standing in front of a big window of his room with his hand in pocket.


He look outside till his eyes reach.Now ur count down start Mr. Khurana . He said clenching his fist.


He went outside n stand near a wall where a big potrate of his family, where the whole family smiling with full heart. Seeing the potrate ,He lost in his thought to destroy  his unknown enemy . He don't know much about him but  he know one thing ,he have to snatch his happiness , his most loveable thing. 


The way he snatch his family happiness , smile on there face.


Sir dinner is ready a servant come to call him for dinner 


Hmm.. is dad come he ask his maid .


Yes sir.. servant rply looking his boss


N gudia... he ask with a smile looking a pic of a girl with a bright smile.


No sir... he look at his maid with big eyes . Maid look down n slowly mumble she is not opening her room door  sir.


He rub his temple n left toward gudia’s room followed my maid


He knock the door 


 Man:  Gudia open the door bacha  he said lovingly 


He try two three time but gudia is not ready to open the door 


No… I will not I’m angry with u n yes I will not eat... a girl said twisting his nose in side the room


Hmmm…. Ok then I will delete ur angry bird pic he said naughty  but some where he is angry.


Angry because the sole person who destroy their happiness is the sole reason for his gudia happiness.


The girl eyes become wide hearing man’s word she instantly open her room door 


The man was shock seeing her room condition 


What is this all.. gudia.?? “Did u hurt urself??” He ask her in consult n start checking her hand n leg 


No.. she push him lil n sit on bed angrily folding his hand near her chest.


N don’t talk to me I’m dame angry on u she said looking other side rather then him


Ohh.. can I know y my gudia is so angry that she broke every things in her room he ask her taking his sit beside the girl.


U promise me u will give me angry bird. But u forgot ur promise she said with big tear in her eyes.


Yes Baba I will give u ur angry bird just give me some time na bacha he said softly making her understand but his gudia is not ready to listen him she just snatch his mobile from his hand n throw it 


U lier I now u r lying…she hit his chest with her soft hand he hold his both hand n try to cool her down but she is going out of control again she start throwing everything whatever she get in her hand .. I want my angry bird…she said throwing flower vase 


It’s is hard for him to control her 


Rosy….rosy… he shouted for his maid which come there without waisting any time 


Omg…she said in shock looking girl room… what happen to gudia sir she ask in concern looking girl who is becoming wild


The man’s dad come running hearing his son loud voice 


Gudia...!!! he run toward the girl n ask his son “what happen to her??”  

 

Now what u did to her that she is again going wild his dad ask the man with blood shouted eyes..


I want angry bird the girl said try to get out from man n his dad grip


Man’s dad look at his son angrily 


Rosy.. give me a injection a man ask his maid helplessly he has no other option to inject her 


The girl calm down n slowly her eyes dropping 


The man took her n make her sleep on bed . Both man sit beside the girl n one is creasing her head n other was looking his both kids with painful eyes..



In Delhi


A girl came out from the airport. She look breath taking in her black knees length skirt with a white tank top. Everyone is drooling looking her beauty.


She took a deep breath n smrik I'm coming Mr. Khurana...


The game will start again where u left it a girl said between her teeth and making a fist in his hand


She close her eyes tightly remembering each and everything.




Precap: who is the girl in airport..??



Sorry for the mistake do like n comments 


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Posted: 2 years ago
#53

It was a sad part, why is Geet behaving like that, has she lost her mental balance??

I think it's Sameera, who is here to take revenge. 

Waiting for past to unveil, please do continue. 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#54

Part 3

sad yet intriguing update... superbly written

is Brij the guy that vows revenge?

feeling for Gudia

is she Geet?

sad seeing her condition.

She demands Angry bird... is he man?

hate that they had to inject her to control her.

what did Maan do to Geet? and why?

seems like the girl at the airport is Sameera?

she is gonna take revenge against Maan

update soon 


thanks for the pm

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Posted: 2 years ago
#55

Very emotional and sad update dear

Is she geet Or someone else

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 2 years ago
#56

 Gudia is angry and her brother try to manofy her but she get hyper not seeing her angry bird 

 Is Gudia is geet and sameera is their fr revenge 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#57

Nice part, thank you for pm, eagerly waiting for next part 🙂.why Maan is like this?

Gudiya ko kya hua? Why she behaves like this? many questions are there.please update soon, 😊❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
#58

Part 3 


A Very Curious Update


In London there is a man that wants to snatch the happiness of Mr Khurana 

while his sister seems to get wild if she does not get 

what she had asked for 

but who is this girl , Sameera or Geet ? 

in India it seems some girl wants revenge from Maan 

seems like lots of people are after Maan Khurana or is it the same family after revenge 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#59

Nice part. Geet list her mental balance. Maan thinking to revenge to her.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monikarani

It was a sad part, why is Geet behaving like that, has she lost her mental balance??

I think it's Sameera, who is here to take revenge. 

Waiting for past to unveil, please do continue. 


U will know in next update who is she..? Juts enjoy 

It will take time to reveil past dear