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Posted: 4 years ago

hi please update soon, thanks

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Part 81 & 82


I like the pace at which this story is going!

Awesome updates, both!


Really, you surprise me every time, with your twisted updates!

But, nevertheless, its all so good to read...


Update soon!

And thank you for the PMs....


Cheers!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Mom is so judgemental. Geet can not live up to her expectations.


That is a thumb down for Geet..

But Geet is smart, so Maan's mom will have to accept her someday!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 83

Mom-Bass dal chawal?

G- emmm…nahi..saath mein kachumbar ka salad…emm..I mean cucumber salad

Mom smirks

Mom- Aur Maan kya khayega?

G- Woh bhi wohi khaayega

Mom’s eyes widen as if she can’t believe her ears

She shakes her head in disapproval

Geet bites her lips unsurely

Mom abruptly gets up and walks out of the house leaving Geet confused

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Maan comes come after an hour

He looks visibly tired

G-Freshen up. I will heat up the dinner

He nods

G-Baby!

He stops mid-way

M-Hmm?

G- Tumhari mom aayi thi

M- Yeah, I saw your text. I will catch up with her tomorrow

Geet nods

++++++++++++

Geet’s sweet slumber is broken by the ringing of the phone

She checks the time its 2 am

She wonders who could be calling at this time

Then she realizes its Maan’s phone that’s ringing

She shakes Maan gently

G-Maan! Maan!

He groans in his sleep

G- Tumhara phone baj raha hai

She picks his phone and its hand it’s over to him

She glances and sees that it’s his Mom’s call

She sits up wondering whether everything is okay

M-Hello

M- Haan Mom

M-Aap iss samay, sab theek toh hai naa?

Geet gestured Maan ki kya hua hua kya hua

Maan gestures Geet to go back to bed & that its nothing

She trusts Maan & goes back to bed while Maan was on the call with Mom

Geet ki neend khuli thodi der baad as she didn’t find Maan beside her

Dekha toh 4 baj rahe hain

Living room mein Maan abhi bhi Mom se baat kar raha hai

Geet is worried about his health, he also needs 8 hours of sleep

But it’s his mom, she can’t pressurize him to hang up on his Mom

She glances at him & sighs going back to sleep

+++++++++

Mom was urging Maan ki koi business gathering/dinner par tum xyz ko saath mein lekar jao as your plus one

Mom-This girl is daughter to Mr abc.. and getting together with her will be good for us...

Maan says no

Mom-I am not saying you marry her but chatting with her and making a good impression is not gonna hurt

M -I am dating Geet…I will not go out with anyone else

Maan & Mom bohot argue karte hain

Thodi Geet ko bhi bhanak lagti hai ki kuch pakk raha hai

But since Maan didn't say she doesn't ask

Ladte- ladte mom 2-3 baar swoons, almost swoons…cajoles...blackmails Maan into agreeing

But deal is ki Maan is just gonna give her car ride to the dinner party... say hello to her dad and fir dono apne apne raaste

+++++++++

M-I told you I will pick her up. Will you just stop please?

Maan says getting irritated, this was the 20th time Mom had called him

Mom- I am just reminding you not to be late. It's not good manners.

M- I know that I can't be late. This is not prom night mom.I have actual business to do at the dinner. I don't care for who I give a lift to on the way!

Maan phone kaat deta hai frustrate hokar

+++++++

‘So, you are going out somewhere?’

Geet asks seeing Maan in a tuxedo

Maan realizes Geet is back from work

M-yeah dinner party

G- You are bringing a date to your dinner party?

Geet confirms as she had overheard Maan’s conversation with mom

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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83

maan's mother pushing him even after maan said that he is dating geet

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Hope Maans mom is not planning something big 😥 to separate Maaneet.

Smell something fishy.

Waiting to see what unfolds next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 83

splendid update.... awesomely written

this Maan's mom 😡

she is hell bent on separating Maaneet

at least Maan initially was adamant and stood his ground

but then after his mom's pestering ultimately agreed to give the lady a lift

of cos his mom must be planning something

however he should have told Geet

great that Geet confronted him

wonder what he will tell Geet?

I hope Maan takes Geet with him

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Alright Maans mom is a bit to much now like talk about ruining a perfectly good relationship. She probably will do something at that dinner to screw something up and try to create a mess between Maan and Geet.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan mom trying to create some mu between maaneet hope maan take geet with him but he is ready to go when geet came home so no chance

Is his mom planning his engagement or fixing his alliance

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