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Part 82
He makes a very convincing case for Geet and the other hospital decides that Geet’s resume is quite impressive... she does deserve and so they decide that ok let's interview her and see
She frowns as her her temper rises
She is angry at Maan
G-Why are you meddling in my professional matters?
Maan just glances at her and chooses not to reply
Geet’s phone rings
Maan walks out of the room knowing it’s the hospital calling Geet for the interview
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She is annoyed ant Maan’s meddling
She wants to achieve her dreams because of her capabilities and not because a rich guy lobbying for her
But once Geet gets the offer and learns about her new post and the hospital and confirms that it is not a bought position she is super happy
She is awed by Maan; ki this guy is not just guns and roses but brains and business too
Her heart flutters with joy, happiness & love
She goes out of the bedroom into the hall Maan ko news sunane ke liye
Maan was sitting on the couch watching TV
Geet dhamak ke TV ke saamne aa jaati hai, blocking his vision and starts doing her joyful tribal dance
Maan can’t help but chuckle
M-It seems the interview went well
Maan says smiling
G-I got the position!
Geet replies while moonwalking around the house
Maan is also beaming seeing her wacky dance and most importantly seeing her happy
Geet goes full on whack mode, tying Maan’s shirt over her head and rapping away what’s great about the new position
Maan also joins her infectious craziness by beatboxing along with her rap
Maan feels he hasn’t laughed so much in his entire life as much as he laughs when he is with Geet
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As Geet is staying with Maan now
Ab Geet Maan ke ghar pe cook kar rahi thi
Maan ghar pe tha nahi
Geet bhi pakk gai thi, Maan ka yaa toh pasta yaa bahar sekhaana, socha simple si dal banalu
Maan ki mom aayi
Mom ke paas keys thi
Geet ne suna ki kisi ke enter hone ki awaaz aayi
She naturally assumed ki Maan aaya hai
G-Ek dum time pe aaye ho tum. Khaana taiyaar….
She stops mid-way after seeing it’s his mom
Mom also stops midway & frowns
‘Yeh ladki toh 2nd time bhi yahan hai, aut khana bhi bana rahi hai’
Mom thinks to herself
Geet gulps thinking kya kare, Maan ki mom ko toh pata bhi nahi ki they are living together
G- Hello Au- Mrs Khurr- Malhotra…emm…Mam!
She tries to break the silence but it’s not working
Air becomes more frigid with mom’s cold stare
Mom- Maan!
She calls out his name as if Geet doesn’t even exist
G- Maan office mein hai. Abhi tak ghar nahi aaya
Mom- Maan ghar pe nahi hai aur tum…?
Mom stops midway thinking ki Maan ghar pe nahi hai aur ye ladki uske ghar mein uski gairhaazri mein kya kar rahi hai
Mom stares at Geet from top to bottom
Geet feels awkward, she is thinking aaj toh thik thak kapde pehne hain, normal pajama & t-shirt toh bhi Maan ki mom aise kyun dekh rahi hain
Mom gives a disapproving look after evaluating her attire
‘Cheap clothes’
Mom thinks to herself
The air is getting colder
G- emm…aap baithiye naa…main Maan ko call karke keh deti hoon-
Mom- Maan ko call karna mujhe bhi aata hai
Mom cuts Geet
Geet gulps
G-yes, of course…mera who matlab nahi tha
‘Is she crossing the line?’ Geet wonders
‘Jo bhi ho wo Maan ki mom hai, unka Maan pe hakk hai. Kya mujhe aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha?’
Mom finally sits on the couch
Geet sighs in relief ki acha hai kal hi ghar saaf kiya tha
Mom calls Maan but phone ring hota jaata hai
G- He must be driving
Then shuts up quickly seeing Mom’s expression
It seems mom had decided to wait for Maan
Geet kare bhi toh kya kare, she starts fiddling in the kitchen
Then yaad aaya ki kuch toh puch ahai nahi
G- Mam, aap kuch lengi…emm…coffee? Chai? Juice? Sparkling water?Normal water?
Mom does not give any reaction, phone pe dekh rahi hai
She wonders in upper class mein aur kya offer karte hain, is she doing something wrong
G-emm…wine bhi hai ghar pe if you wwant…emm…red? White?
Mom sniggers thinking, so pretentious…middle class hoke upper class hone ka naatak kar rahi hai
Mom- Waise dinner pe kya banaya hai tumne?
Geet is taken aback by Mom’s sudden interest
G- emm…Dal…Chawal
Mom makes a face as if she smelled a rat
Mom-Bass dal chawal?
G- emmm…nahi..saath mein kachumbar ka salad…emm..I mean cucumber salad
Mom smirks
Mom- Aur Maan kya khayega?
G- Maan...woh bhi wohi khaayega
Mom’s eyes widen as if she can’t believe her ears
She shakes her head in disapproval
Geet bites her lips unsurely
Mom abruptly gets up and walks out of the house
Geez now Maan's mother had started meddling in between them.... Clearly she's a busybody.... If you don't know what to do then find yourself a new hobby or something kisi aur ki zindagi me dhakal andazi karne ki kya zaruri hai.... Aap apne life dekhiye aur yeh dono ko apni life dekhne dijiye.... Simply barging in to people's houses and create problem in their lifes and relationship... So annoying.... 🤗
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Hi nilanajana
First of all sorry...I have been reading ur ff for month now and I haven't commented. . ..
But there's a say better late then never....so here I am...
You knows what u have an unique style of writing which I haven't came across any other writers....use of fabulous hindi words from aam bolchal ki bhasha make it even more crunchier and your character are ekdam bindas type....love them to the core
I read ur blind love....that was too an awesome piece with over possessive mother and docile daughter...so good
And this one I am out of word now..helpless
Keep writing
Love
Thank you so much dear, you made my day. Thanks for liking my writing style and thanks a lot for reading my stories. Keep reading & commenting🤗🤗❤️
My Takeaways for Part 79
Great update!
Geet's bantering is so cute!
Maan gets taken in?
Is Geet playing around or her tears were for real?
Didn't quite understand that, please clarify!
Anyways, Maan and Geet's talk is one up to everything else..
He cared and she understood that..
His feelings might not be out in the open yet, but his touch is plain enough according to Geet.
Chalo!
Aankh micholi mat khelo aur!
Let Maan realise!
And chahiye toh, Geet can again go up to him and a confession can be on the cards!
Just a suggestion!
Cheers!
Take care and thanks for the PM..
Her tears were real dear....she is emotional about her career
Understandable!
Emotions play up a lot these days!
What's different with fictions?
Glad you clarified though!
Thanks!
Geet angry on maan fr meddling in her professional matter but after interview she was super happy and maan didn't complain of her before rudeness he knows her well
Again maan mom came and found geet in maan place she is super annoy
Geet try to talk to her but she prefer to avoid her but geet didn't stop asking what she like to have
Part 82
Fantastic and Entertaining
Geet angry with Maan as she thought that he bought
her position at the hospital but when she got interviewed she realized
he did nothing of that sort
now she does her silly dance and wow Maan too joins her and both had fun
just been their silly selves
I actually liked that about them there is no pretense
Geet decides to cook but why cooking dhal and does Maan eat that dish
his mother comes again and now seeing Geet there while Maan is at the office
makes her think more negative about Geet
oh hell Geet tells her what she cooked and obviously Maan's mother disapproves it
Maan's mother needs to realize that her son is happy with Geet in his life
waiting to see what happens now