|Entwined RaghVi Drabbles| Readers Desk| 100 th day celebration. 🥳 - Page 64

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Posted: 4 years ago

This one was worth the wait. I was really looking forward on how you will explain her tears. And guess what you didn't disappoint me a bit.

Raghav competing with a dead man for his wife's affection 😆. Part of him wanted to strangle a dead man for ruining their moment. This was my favourite part of the story.

Finally someone didn't left us in a cliffhanger 😉. Tbh I am completely clueless about who will be the next writer and about what will happen next.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Guy, I’m loving loving loving how this story is developing !

Rikara94 - finally you gave the fandom a kiss, the way you wrote it, there was a certain desperation in him and it was captured so perfectly 😳🤗

And loved how Umibrahim continued with Pallavis confusion. She wanted the same thing but has so many apprehensions! Yes! They’re talking about it. So beautiful ❤️🤗


Im sorry I am still not conversant with names, I’ve missed many comments where your name may have been mentioned. Forgive me 😵


Who’s next ?

Thank you so much dear❤️ I know everyone was waiting for the ☺️☺️ moment🤪 even i was waiting for the moment to write such moment🤪


Btw i'm jyoti and you?

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Posted: 4 years ago

I have noticed some people seem to be exceeding the word limit.

I am enjoying the story so far though. Who is next?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Reem just reserved a post.

Waiting Reem

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow thank you dr ☺️

Pallavi cried because it was her first kiss and she was overwhelmed... Yay my prediction came true 🥳

Your Raghav was so sweet caring and loving her a little more.... Her light deflects his darkness

Pallavi here was such a sweetheart 🥰

Great piece and you took the story forward....

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Posted: 4 years ago

My prediction of why Pallavi cried came true 🥳

She cried because it was her first kiss and she was amazed...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Isamreen

My prediction of why Pallavi cried came true 🥳

She cried because it was her first kiss and she was amazed...

Noted.👍🏼

Will edit the hall of fame soon. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: rikara94

Igjactly...☺️

Jayo pdho or btayo kaisa lga🤪


Jyoti I so loved it! That was such a beautiful kiss soft and slow- just perfect for the moment they are in. You did such an awesome job❤️👏


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Posted: 4 years ago

Hiii sweetheart! I just read your Drabble and what a beautiful perspective you have given the story! ❤️ It couldn’t have been better than this. I can fathom that’s how exactly Pallavi would feel someday! Absolutely stunning piece of writing 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Reem just reserved a post.

Waiting Reem


Yayyyy. So excited to read! The story is going beautifully 🥳


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